Date: 09/11/12 03:37 pm Title: The Cave
The plot thickens. Such an intense, suspense-filled chapter. Felt my stomach turning at some of the forensic details of the murders, but obviously they are important. I feel really sorry for Gustav having to solve this one. I am so caught up in this story already.
Author's Response: It sure does. There are not so much of that kind of details, in that way is this story rather kind, (oh, the only way I guess!) I'm so glad you like it, and yes, poor Gustav, this is a bit more than he is used to handle. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Date: 09/11/12 02:54 pm Title: The Cave
This is getting more creepy! I feel a bit afraid atm, didn't expect that, and I really enjoy it. I love Gustav's character, and I find that poor Georg has something to hide! Not to mention the daughter, Angel... is she the villain here? And scary twins, this is so great!
Author's Response: It does, doesn't it? And more will come *evil grin* I'm so glad he works out in this roll, and well... you will see ;-) Your comments makes me wanna post the next part too. But no, has to be a good girl for once ;-)
Date: 09/11/12 02:51 pm Title: The house on the hill
This is so scary in a nice way (still at least, lol) and I love the characterization. I LOVE the Bill and Tom dolls, they are so scary. *rubs hands* I'm so looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Dolls are indeed scary, and I do think those are a bit more than most, I'm so glad to see that you are reading this! *hugs*
Date: 09/10/12 09:27 pm Title: The house on the hill
I had to come over here and thank you again for posting this story! I'm so glad you decided to share it! You are very good at creating a mood with your words, and I think you outdid yourself this time. Something feels off and sinister right from the beginning, and I know that readers will be on the edges of their seats! THANK YOU for posting!
Author's Response: No, thank you for makeing it possibel for me to post it! I try to feel good about doing so, even if it feels a bit rocky right now. And thanks, I'm so glad when someon reads a story the way I hoped I wrote it!
Date: 09/10/12 12:28 pm Title: The house on the hill
Wow! I started reading because I love you writing (any chance of an update to Just say no...?)and this has already gotten me hooked. A real mystery. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you did, this is finished and will be updated every day (I think there will be six parts of this.) And yes, I'm waiting for my beta reader to get the next part of Just say no back, have the next part after that written too :)