Date: 06/07/15 06:58 am Title: The End
I love it!! Its so creepy and haunting!!! I don't normally read this sort of stuff but I must say how much I loved it!!! I like the way you sort of left it to the reader to make up their mind at the end!!! It was really good!!!
Author's Response: :D I normally don't write stories like this either but it was a lot of fun to give it a try, I'm happy to hear you think it worked out!
Date: 06/04/14 11:12 pm Title: The End
Dx poor Angel D': but i really like how you wrapped everything up nicely and made it all work! Its such a good story! I love it :3
Author's Response: I didn't see your review until now! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 11/16/12 09:40 pm Title: The house on the hill
ohmygosh! this is so good...like i love everything about this story! please please please finish it! it was getting so good then it stopped :(
Author's Response: Oh, but the story is finished, it ends like that, with the twins and Angel in the bedroom with Gustav. I left it like that, opened. I understands it's frustrating, but at this being sort of a paranomal fic, I think it's better to let the reader read it as she please, not everything need to be explained :) Maybe they did kill Gustav, maybe Georg already was dead, maybe they made it some how, I really don't konw!
Date: 09/25/12 04:23 pm Title: The End
Holy crap. I had to wait til morning to read the last two chapters because I was way too scared! And that picture you linked to... *shudder*. This is good. Really good.
Author's Response: Oh, sorry! Or no, but thanks, this is the first horror story I ever written, I'm glad it seems to have worked out :) And that pic, I wish I could have used it as a banner, but I have no idea who made it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/19/12 02:57 am Title: The End
XD is it bad that i think its funny Billa and Tomi are the killers XD
Date: 09/18/12 05:08 pm Title: The End
I always suspected that Angel's dead twin half brothers were watching over her, but for them to return from the grave and kill anyone who angers her...Poor little girl will never have anyone love her for long because sooner or later a cross word will be said and then they've signed their own death warrent. So sad, though, that its Georg and Gustav who have to pay the price this time. They were so lovely together and Angel seemed to really like Gus. I haven't been able to stop thinking about the ending of this all afternoon and evening since I read it. This was truly a most amazing story and I'm so happy it got featured.
Author's Response: Oh, but are you sure they are her half brothers? Simone first claimed her sons was a gift from God, but what do we really know? (I have no idea, but it's an interesting thouhgt?)Thank you so much for both reading and your wonderful reviews.If a story of mine make you think about it after it ended, I see that as something really good and flattering! And thanks, I'm glad for that too, even if it feels a bit strange, I'm not used to peopel noticeing my stories.
Date: 09/18/12 04:03 pm Title: The End
Noooooooooooooooooo! This can't be true! You can't end it there?? No, no, no, no!!! What the heck! *laughs in despair* What happened next??
Congratulations on being featured! This very special fic, so exciting, scary, spooky and with such stunning imagery and lovely love story is such a refreshing (but horrifying) read. Now you HAVE to tell me what happened next!
Author's Response: *lol* You need to read more of my stories if you don't thnink I can't, I have done worse! And well, that is up to you to think about. Thank you, and thank you so much. I'm so glad it is, even if it feels a bit strange I must say.
Date: 09/17/12 04:33 am Title: Sometimes it snows in April
Oh, that was cruel. You give us an amazingly sweet, loving chapter and then finish it off with something so ominous. I am really, really hoping nothing bad happens to lovely Gustav. Can't wait for the last chapter.
Author's Response: I'm a cruel person, or at least writer ;-) I really hope the last chapter won't disapoint you,and when it comes to our lovely Gustav... well, I can't give any promises... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/16/12 05:17 pm Title: Simone
This is so very sad. I hope it was some other person who did that to Simone's twins. It's almost unbearable to imagine otherwise. I am eagerly waiting for the wrap-up of the story!
Author's Response: Sad indeed. And that is an interesting thouhgt, but I understand how you mean, it's hard to imagine a mother do something like that to her own children. And I'm so glad that you read this, only two chapters left now! :)
Date: 09/16/12 05:16 pm Title: Like a never-ending winter
I keep guessing that the twins are there to protect Angel! Very scary chapter in a v nice way.
Author's Response: An interesting thouhg! But in what way? What good would it do to kill her mums? Well, we will know if you were right :)
Date: 09/16/12 05:15 pm Title: A good bad or a bad God
Love the friendship developing between Gustav and Georg. The twins are so scary here - gosh. This is very creepy and good.
Author's Response: Thank you, I love it too here, it was hard to know how to put it, to not ruch it in such a short story, I'm glad it worked out! Creepy is good, good creepy is even better, thank you!
Date: 09/16/12 10:55 am Title: Simone
I am almost too scared to read any more, but then...how can I not? This story is absolutely compelling. Poor Gustav, not sure now whether he's seeing things or not, doubting his own sanity. And now we're getting a good idea of what's happened in the past but still not quite sure of how this impacts on the present. I've said it before, but this is seriously creepy shit. You are a genius.
Author's Response: no, no, don't be, and it's only two parts left now, a really short one tomorrow and a longer the day after. I guess most had started to doubt their sanity in hi place, and who knows, maybe things aren't the way Gustav thinks? I'm glad you think so, creepy is absolutly the feeling I was looking for, writing this. I felt really bad about posting this story, I was sure "no one" would read it. I was right about that, this last chapter was read about eight times. But I no longer feel that bad, what does that matter with a reader like you? <3
Date: 09/15/12 04:44 pm Title: Like a never-ending winter
And the plot thickens! This is sooooo intriguing, it's driving me mad trying to work it out. I loved the tender scene between Georg and Gustav...definitely mutual attraction there. So cute that Gus blushes like that. And more sightings of the mysterious young men. Gives me chills for sure. Dying to know what's in Simone's files. This is an incredible story. I'm loving it.
Author's Response: Thanks, I really liked writing that too, even if it is a bit complicated consider the situation. And well, you will soon... only... three parts left now! Thank you so much for both reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/15/12 04:29 pm Title: A good bad or a bad God
Sorry I didn't review earlier but my daughter had to go in to hospital for an emergency op to have a tube fitted in her kidney as it wasn't draining properly. She's better now and back home, but has to have another op in a couple of weeks to remove a large kidney stone. Anyway, this was a great chapter. I always thought that maybe there was abuse in Georg's past but that is horrific. I'm glad someone did for that priest in the end...sick bastard. And the stuff Gustav discovers about Angel's past and her other adoptive mother being killed in that way. Plus the weird visions he keeps having of the man with no eyes...can't blame him for keeping a nightlight on. And now I see you've updated again so I'm gonna read that chapter too.
Author's Response: Oh, don't ever be sorry for reviewing "late", I'm just so happy you do at all! I'm so sorry to hear about your daughter! Good to hear she is better now, but things like that really affects you, I have daughters myself and everything that affects them gets so strong for me, I guess that is the downide of loving some one so much as you love your children. I hope her next op will go smoothly, kidny stones is really painful :( And yeah, the plot are geting thinker or how I should put it :) I feel sorry for Georg too, even if he is a successfull person today, his life haven't been easy. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/15/12 02:47 pm Title: A good bad or a bad God
This story is getting more and more scary!
Poor Gustav! It can't be easy to be degraded like that. And poor Georg! He has had a really hard life. I can only hope that Gustav will comfort him...
Author's Response: Thanks, and good, it will get worse ;) I feel sorry for Gustav too here, and well... you will see.. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/13/12 05:35 pm Title: The big guys
This is so very scary and the twins freak me out. I am afraid and I have to walk through a dark house now. *shudders* It's so very exciting.
Author's Response: Let's put it like this; be glad you have to do that now, and not after have read the last one *no, that was mean, sorry ;)* I'm so glad you like this, thank you so much both for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/13/12 12:53 pm Title: The big guys
This just gets better and better. I was seriously holding my breath at the end. I love Gustav so much, he's sensible in realising the case is beyond his abilities and he doesn't bear a grudge that the 'big boys' are taking over. And he's taking care of Angel and dressing down stupid, stupid Martin for not looking out for her. And oh, God, scary much him getting that weird feeling and then thinking he's seen a man with no eyes. I know this is linked to Angel's dolls; just can't wait to find out how it's even possible. And I'm so happy you're updating every day because the suspense is killing me.
Author's Response: Oh, you have no idea how glad you made me with your review! Very few seems to read this, but what does that matter a long as those who do really do like it? Gustav is a big young man in my eyes. And well, you will soon know ;-) I love to update daily, it's not often I can, but it's nice to have something running so smoothly as this story. I still haven't made my mind up if I will post the rest in three parts, or make one of them to two really short parts, like this one. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/13/12 02:27 am Title: A lie
Heeeeeeeeeelp don't leave me alone here. This is creepy in such a nice way. I love the dolls and I keep guessing that the twins impregnate the women and later come back to kill them on Angel's command... or something. :D
Author's Response: LoL, I won't! And I love your guesses, if you are wrong about any of them, they will make really interesting plot bunnies! thans for your review <3
Date: 09/12/12 09:55 pm Title: A lie
Wow i love it! Wish it had more of the band in it though. It seems more fitted to be an original story rather than a tokio hotel fanfic. Nonetheless, its well written and i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you like it! And it is an AU fic, with the focus on Gustav and Georg,but not that much twins... even if they play a big part in this, in their own way... Next chapter will be up later today!
Date: 09/12/12 02:25 pm Title: A lie
And there you go again, painting the whole scene so well with words. I could just see the room where Gus interviewed Georg. And that poor little girl sitting alone in her boodstained nightgown. And yet another murder with Angel in the same house...and one of those dolls in the room with the victims. This so damned creepy. I love it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it and that I manage to get it through. Can only agree, this is starting to get a bit creepy, and there will be more :)