Date: 09/02/12 10:54 am Title: Afternoon
I like this, good storyline which hopefully brings our loved twins together in the end:)
Author's Response: Yeah, it will definitely end happy :) <3
Date: 09/02/12 05:59 am Title: Afternoon
Well, you did promise me that it would be okay, or maybe you didn't. IDK, it's 5 am, and I am running on zero sleep. For what it's worth in my insomniac mind, I think this story is still awesome. :D
Author's Response: I think I promised! Not sure anymore, haha! Thank you so much though! New chapter should be up soon :)
Author's Response: I think I promised! Not sure anymore, haha! Thank you so much though! New chapter should be up soon :)
Date: 09/01/12 07:06 pm Title: Afternoon
ohmygod dwnjewfnJDENWFKW anxious for the new chapter ;_;
Author's Response: Heee :) new chapter up soon, and thank you! :D
Date: 09/01/12 06:45 pm Title: Afternoon
That was so nice. I am waiting for the next chapter impatiently :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 09/01/12 05:20 pm Title: Afternoon
I'LL HAVE YOU KNOW, I'M CHOKED UP BY THE END HERE AND BITING MY NAILS. NO PRESSURE THOUGH! ;;;;_______;;;;;
They need to hug, dammit! They need to start that merging connection between them. The twin link, their bond, CALL IT WHAT YOU WANT, but they NEED IT! They're both clearly suffering without it and they are suffocating and Tom's thoughts are just making me cry for my mama and yeah, too many feels. TEARS, Leana!
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Author's Response: Aw!! Don't you worry at all, things will get better shortly :) <3 <3 <3
Date: 09/01/12 05:00 pm Title: Afternoon
I'm hoping Tom will be happy to see his baby brother. It seems that the dogs are glad. :) This is a wonderful story and now I need to read about the comfort part. :)
Author's Response: Haha I think everyone is ready to read the comfort part! :P New update soon to end the story! :D
Date: 09/01/12 03:08 pm Title: Afternoon
Oh, my aching heart. Poor twinsies. :(
Author's Response: Yeah :( Things will get better though! :)
Date: 09/01/12 01:52 pm Title: Afternoon
Aww! This is so uncomfortable yet loving. They're suffering the awkwardness because they love each other and want to be together.
How do dogs always know when someone comes home?
Author's Response: Maybe it's just my experience with family pets, but the only dogs I've ever had ALWAYS knew when someone was at the door. Either it's from the car door slamming when Bill got out of the taxi, or just knowing someone's near, it's just something I pulled from personal experience :) even my kitties knew when I was coming home and waited at the door for me!
Date: 09/01/12 01:29 pm Title: Morning
Poor Tom! I'm also sad that Bill doesn't respect Tom's work. It'll get better though, right? *clicks to next chapter*
Author's Response: It might come off as not respecting, but I think deep down Bill just wants so much better for his brother, yaknow? :)
Date: 09/01/12 11:00 am Title: Morning
Ahhhh, my biggest fear written in words. It's such a sad and bleak present, but I hope by the time this fic ends, the future for both turns our a little more brighter and that they at least talk!
Author's Response: I love happy endings, so of course this one will have one eventually :) Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 09/01/12 07:37 am Title: Morning
Poor Tom. :( I have a feeling I know who's behind the knocks at the door but I shall have to wait until the next chapter to find out. I imagine it would be hard to leave the life the twins lead now and do something as mundane as working in a store. Great start and will be highly anticipating the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Haha I have to admit, I'm a sucker for cliche so of course it's who we all expect to be knocking at the door :P I wanted to pick something that was so much different than the life the twins currently lead and have had in the past, and something drastically different than the one my future Bill has in this! I'm glad you enjoyed, and a new chapter is up now :)
Date: 09/01/12 02:34 am Title: Morning
I like it so far. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad! :D
Date: 09/01/12 01:10 am Title: Morning
AWWWWW! *goes to find some tissues* This makes me a sad monkey- but not in a bad way, k? I just. I hate being alone. On my birthday. (Even though I don't have a twin.) I sympathize with this Tom. :/ *huggles you*
Author's Response: Aw :) Things will get better! There are two more parts coming, and I promise you it ends happy! *hugs*