Date: 10/03/12 04:05 pm Title: One -
Sounds interesting. Will wait for next chapter impatiently :)
Date: 10/01/12 04:12 pm Title: One -
Hmmm....interesting...very interesting...I LIKE EET! :D
Date: 10/01/12 01:47 pm Title: One -
aw, cute!!! haha, sparks not just a metaphor this time xD I looooove magical!Bill~
Date: 10/01/12 01:59 am Title: One -
A perfect story for this time of year :) Magic and mystery yay!!!
Date: 09/30/12 10:36 pm Title: One -
Heeey now, half of my parental unit question was answered! Though, yes, more questions were raised about Bill's parents, and this Patrick fellow.
I love that you're writing the dialogue the way you are. Its the way I talk ^_^. Not sure if its a midwest accent (I'm from northern indiana), or just a general slang anymore, but I like it.
Evangeline is adorable, but doesn't Bill have another sister? And where is she? Or am I thinking of a different story?
I will never be able to hear the name Binx without my mind shooting directly to Hocus Pocus. Best halloween movie ever in my opinion ^_^.
Fantastic work on this chapter! I really hope, now that october has rolled around, we'll get some faster updates? Pretty please with a naked horny band member of choice on top? Keep up the amazing work.
Viel Liebe
Lady X
Date: 09/30/12 10:36 pm Title: One -
Heeey now, half of my parental unit question was answered! Though, yes, more questions were raised about Bill's parents, and this Patrick fellow.
I love that you're writing the dialogue the way you are. Its the way I talk ^_^. Not sure if its a midwest accent (I'm from northern indiana), or just a general slang anymore, but I like it.
Evangeline is adorable, but doesn't Bill have another sister? And where is she? Or am I thinking of a different story?
I will never be able to hear the name Binx without my mind shooting directly to Hocus Pocus. Best halloween movie ever in my opinion ^_^.
Fantastic work on this chapter! I really hope, now that october has rolled around, we'll get some faster updates? Pretty please with a naked horny band member of choice on top? Keep up the amazing work.
Viel Liebe
Lady
Date: 09/30/12 09:30 pm Title: One -
so far you have used one of my fave songs and one of my fave cartoons XD whens the next chappy coming?
Date: 09/30/12 06:44 pm Title: One -
Waaa xD!!!! OMG hahah really interesting!!!!! Can't wait for the next one!!! intriguing and cute chapter love it!! Thank you so much!!
Date: 09/30/12 05:57 pm Title: Introduction -
Oh I like it a lot!!! *runs to the next one *thank you so much for share!! *u*
Date: 08/30/12 05:07 am Title: Introduction -
Seems like is could get pretty interesting - will definitely be watching for updates!
Date: 08/28/12 01:11 am Title: Introduction -
Cool. can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: I hope to have more up soon. :)
Date: 08/27/12 07:22 pm Title: Introduction -
Excited for more :)
Author's Response: Yay! :)
Date: 08/27/12 05:27 pm Title: Introduction -
Wow now I'm definitly curious !! I want read the next chapter !!
I'will track this story very closer.
Keep going this seems, it'll be very interesting.
Job well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 08/27/12 04:10 pm Title: Introduction -
Ohhh, its very good so far! Very intriguing. Incredibly well written, its like this chapter only barely wetted my whistle, and has me craving so much more.
I was a tiny bit worried, when I read the summary, that this was going to be somewhat based off of The Secret Circle. But it doesn't appear to be at this point.
It was very wonderful beginning. I'm curious about where Bill's parental unit was, and why didn't Tom's parental unit come to school with him. Also, how did Tom know he would be in Bill's classes? Did they talk about Billks classes yesterday! And how on earth would he know where his locker would be? I can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I've never seen or read "The Secret Circle", so I've no idea what happened in it. I know it's something about magic from the commercials so that's about all I know. XD As for Tom knowing he would be in Bill's classes, he did not know yet. Sorry if it was confusing but I wrote it as "Tom would find" that he has the same classes as Bill, and a locker next to him. I meant that Tom knew his own classes and locker number and eventually he'll find out that he's got classes with Bill and a locker next to him, probably in the next chapter. XD I'm glad that you enjoy it so far, and we'll see why their parents were not there in the next chapter. :)
Date: 08/27/12 12:48 pm Title: Introduction -
Ohhhh I'm excited *-*
Author's Response: :) Yay!