Date: 07/11/13 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 9-The same blood. The same cells.
what a weird chapter and strange ending but I like it. It was awesome, if you don't mind me asking but what is your sign??
Author's Response: I'm an aquarius. Why?
Date: 07/11/13 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 8-I'm such an asshole...
woah! what a chapter.
Date: 07/11/13 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 7-What is your drug of choice?
Bill is sweet but that comment to that woman was mean..
Date: 07/11/13 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 6-It's quiet now...
i feel so sad...their relationship is disintegrating..
Date: 07/11/13 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 5-Too young...
this feels like a poem like a riddle ina way...and this part "
Kali laughed as she glanced over at Bill one last time. He was one of the nicer guys that had hit on her, but she would never able to see herself with such a man. He was just too beautiful. He cared too much about how he looked.
She couldn’t ever see herself with Tom either. He was the typical guy that most women wanted. Strong and sure. But he was too sure of himself. Neither of them were what she wanted, but both of them were determined. What was she to do?" so true the way you describe them.
Date: 07/11/13 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 4-A lie
Tom was wrong for doing that, and Kali well its kinda hard for me to decipher but shes like a "lesson" for them..kinda like karma.
Date: 07/11/13 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 3-Like a moth
lol this one was funny
Date: 07/11/13 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 2-Oh, you speak to me in riddles...
a lot of reference to physical beauty in this one. hmm interesting..
Date: 07/11/13 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1-Look closer,
oooh nice very interesting Kali is so cool
Date: 07/10/13 12:09 am Title: Chapter 2-Oh, you speak to me in riddles...
Interesting.....I like how they speak in song lyrics.
Date: 09/11/12 11:46 am Title: Chapter 1-Look closer,
would read it if it would be General for real, but it's Het :/
Author's Response: There's no actual relationships, though. Would you really put it under het?
Date: 08/25/12 04:46 am Title: Chapter 2-Oh, you speak to me in riddles...
hm, strange and intriguing. wanna know what's next.