Date: 01/05/13 12:41 am Title: Over so Soon
oooo! I hope you update again soon, I miss reading this D: Not many good vampire fics are really on here! >.
Date: 10/06/12 03:09 pm Title: The Beginning of the End
I love it!!! Like, I've just read this story, and I'd really like a new chappie! Puh-leeeeease? *puppyeyes*
Date: 09/09/12 04:01 am Title: Over so Soon
transfer>???? like, preggo tom jizz transfer or like, somehow vampire-like creature tom jizz transfer?
Author's Response: Haha Tom might worry about being transformed into a vampire. :p He's a worry wart.
Date: 09/05/12 09:22 pm Title: Over so Soon
following some of your words
pure reading ecstasy!!!!! hahah OMG amazing chap!!!! love it kamsdlkasd i missed the bite!! vampires always bite in this situations hahaha i fckin love when that happens hahaha to much vampire stories xD heheh askdmaskld cant wait for the next chapter thank you so much!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!
Date: 09/05/12 02:13 pm Title: Over so Soon
I never reviewed this? Whaaat?
Hehe, I love the gif. That one on the left looks like Tom! [edit: Oh wait XD That's a blanket and comforter, not baggy clothing XD Darn it!]
Oh my gosh, that *sucks* for Bill D: Being turned by force.
Lol, that sex scene (or snippet, rather) was indeed fast. I'd have thought that since Bill is unable to feel so many other things, he'd be unable to orgasm. Oh, and what do you mean by excitement? You mean his semen?
Author's Response: Yep! And, it was fast for a few reasons! But, him breathing a puff of air on Tom and him orgasming were signs that he is indeed human! He's just... wired differently. ;)
Date: 09/05/12 11:55 am Title: Over so Soon
amazing
Author's Response: :D
Date: 09/05/12 10:44 am Title: Over so Soon
Okay so I skipped the little sex scene at the end because my mum is in the room and well, that would certainly be awkward. But I love the way that Bill can transer his energy to Tom, and I love the way Tom wants it anyway. Maybe he's just acting foolishly though, because Bill is his first friend and he is so happy all of a sudden that he might act irrationally.
Author's Response: I agree. I don't think he's looking at the big picture with a clear head... hm.
Date: 09/04/12 11:54 am Title: Over so Soon
loved loved loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/04/12 11:31 am Title: The Beginning of the End
:o wasnt expecting this, but I dont mind either;)
Author's Response: Hehe :3
Date: 09/04/12 01:35 am Title: Over so Soon
Bill's life was so sad.... he was forced into a life of imortality and it is unclear if he would have enven agreed to such a thing. I feel like he would not have. Tom's curiosity is wonderful. The back story about Bill is amazing. l love it :) I want to know more about Bill too.
First times are never exctly what you think they will be and they always end too soon. I think they have started a beautiful relationship. The fact that Bill seems to be more human when he has found his match it perfect. As for Bill's excitement transfering through skin.... it's not completly impossible but I'm not sure if that body fluid holds the same properties as blood. Seems like it wouldn't be strong enough to make Tom change but this is your story and only you can make that decision lol.
Author's Response: I agree. I don't think he would have. I'm sure he'd rather run away and change his name than have that happen...
rnrnWho knows! Tom may be a little freaked out :o
Date: 09/04/12 12:04 am Title: Over so Soon
Awww yay! I love this two, I'm excited to see how it all progresses next chapter~! X)
Author's Response: Thanks, Rainii!
Date: 09/03/12 01:53 pm Title: A Rock and a Hard Place
I love it! I wonder if Tom will go with him.
Author's Response: I hope so!
Date: 09/02/12 03:10 pm Title: A Rock and a Hard Place
I love this story so much! You did such a good job writing it and I can't wait for the next chapter ;)
Author's Response: You're so kind! Thank you so much!
Date: 09/02/12 04:25 am Title: A Rock and a Hard Place
(Lol, I'm glad I'm not the only one who inferred that things would get... physical, reading that last line. Darn you, brain!)
Eep! I was afraid the police would tail Tom back to his "friend's" house, just to make sure he wasn't killed. Which would potentially lead to Bill being investigated if he did anything out of the ordinary D:
Oh my gosh, I can totally appreciate the difficulty of Bill's position. (Can't empathize though, of course :P) I wish there was a way for Tom to have immortality while still being alive!
Author's Response: Nah, no need for the police to stalk a boy over that, methinks! :p And I wish there was, too.
Date: 09/02/12 02:41 am Title: A Rock and a Hard Place
oh really? sounds like they might get a little...physical. sounds pretty human to me ;) oh, and Bill's sleeping thing is gross and disturbing. is that from the book as well?
Author's Response: I think in the book Eli sleeps in a bathtub of blood but I don't understand how he gets clean! So I made it a plastic container. ;D
Date: 09/02/12 01:48 am Title: A Rock and a Hard Place
Tom is...well... I can't blame him for turning in his father even if his reasoning was a little selfish but Bill is correct. Tom is going to have to get rid of the evidence about Andreas in his room. I don't think Tom intentionaly tried to do anything bad or wrong but I do understand why Bill was upset with him. Tom needs to think things through a little more sometimes.
Bill's sleeping arangements need a little work if Tom is going to stay with him. That smell would deffinetly make me want to loose my brakfast lunch and dinner lol. however, if it keeps Bill strong then maybe there isn't much they can do about it. A weak Bill is no bueno. Im curious what will happen next. Can't wait :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree, Tom didn't really think about the biggest picture when it came to incriminating himself or his father because of the blood. :p What a silly.
Date: 09/01/12 11:31 pm Title: A Rock and a Hard Place
yuuuu so beautifully evil hahahhaha OMG WHAT AN END totally amazing asmdkasd love it
is great how Bill knows about what Tom did or think!! i just love that connection
dying for the next chapter
-ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh amazing so amazing- (cant scream cause my family is with me but if i could i would be doing it hhaha awesome!!!! end *-------*)
Author's Response: Ahaha! Thanks lovey!
Date: 09/01/12 09:00 pm Title: A Rock and a Hard Place
omg! leave! go! be safe and be together!
Author's Response: hehe :3
Date: 09/01/12 04:49 pm Title: A Rock and a Hard Place
I'm happy I got to read this before work! This all so insanely interesting and I love it! Can't wait for chapter 10 X)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 09/01/12 04:03 pm Title: A Rock and a Hard Place
wow cant waitfor mooooore :)
please update soooooon :)
Author's Response: I'll try my best C: