Date: 09/01/12 01:58 pm Title: A Rock and a Hard Place
oh god >.< pleaseeeeee I want.... I need to read more :'( :'( :P
Author's Response: Aww, soon!
Date: 09/01/12 01:54 pm Title: Meeting the Neighbour
Beautifully written.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/31/12 08:35 am Title: Where There's a Will, There's a Way
I should have known Tom wouldn't give up, but I'm glad he's doing something about his father, because if Bill doesn't give him what he wants, he's going to need whatever protection he can get from the wrath of his father for what he'd just done. I really hope things work out for both Tom and Bill, because I know he will have things to say about what Tom's done. Tom's very determined though and I STILL want to hug him!
Author's Response: I bet he'd love a hug! :D And yes, telling on his father will either make Bill agree to change him or make Bill responsible for him anyway since he's his only friend, he even told the cop that! ;)
Date: 08/30/12 07:48 pm Title: Where There's a Will, There's a Way
I hope you'll write again soon, I love the story!!!
XX
Author's Response: Thank you, love!
Date: 08/30/12 02:35 pm Title: Where There's a Will, There's a Way
WOOOO! I was cheering for Tom the whole way through this. First he decided he was gonna make Bill change him, then he got the satisfaction of seeing his bully dead, and THEN he finally told someone about his father! The whole way through this story I've been like 'come on Tooom, tell the police about your mean daddy. You deserve a nice place to live!'
The way you described Andreas, chilled me to the bone. The way he was almost looking at Tom even though he was dead. That would have creeped me out but Tom smiled. What a cute little weirdo xD
TWO DOWN, TWO TO GO ~
Author's Response: Definitely is a strange young man! ;)
Date: 08/30/12 02:13 pm Title: Where I Came From
Wow! I came online to discover that I had two chapters of this to read, and two chapters of The Boy With The Golden Smile, and I was like 'YAAAAAAY FOUR CHAPTERS OF RANT!' So, expect four emails. I hope I don't annoy you xD
This. Damn. Chapter. AWWWWWWWWWW. I was sorta grossed out cause really, poor Tom was being straddled by a man covered in blood and dirt, but still...AWWW! When they kissed I got butterflies in my tummy. SO. DAMN. PERFECT. YOU ARE SO. DAMN. PERFECT. RANT! I think you are my new best friend. Okay? Okay. (It's not option.)
ONE DOWN, THREE TO GO ~
Author's Response: Lovely reviews from a reader are never annoying. I love it!
Deal! Best friends. :D I could use one. ♥
Date: 08/30/12 12:54 pm Title: Where There's a Will, There's a Way
Oh and also, Let The Right One In is one of my favourite films and I'm really happy you chose to use it as inspiration for The First Snow :D
Author's Response: Always glad to meet another fan!
Date: 08/30/12 12:39 pm Title: Where There's a Will, There's a Way
Really enjoying reading this, you're great at building... a sort of tense anticipation in this fic - definitely looking forward to an update!
Author's Response: Thank you, Wizard!
Date: 08/30/12 04:00 am Title: Where There's a Will, There's a Way
God, I can't get over how amazing this is! I love the story, and the way you write, it's just wow. The flow and description is beautiful and enchanting xD I really love this and am looking forward to more!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!
Date: 08/29/12 03:59 am Title: Inside the Apartment
aww, is that what ya spasu tebya means? that's....really freaking cute. in a sort of dark way. like the rest of this story so far...
Author's Response: Yep! Thank you!
Date: 08/29/12 12:02 am Title: Where There's a Will, There's a Way
Poor Tomi :( I know what it's like to live with alcoholic parents. I had two but my father was the one who would just drink a lot and then go to sleep. He never bothered me or did anything just went to sleep after. I feel like he just wanted to escape from his stress and thats how he did it. Didn't make it any less a problem though. Tom is brave for telling his story and I don't believe he really wants to be a killer. He just feels so lost. Bill is killing to survive and to help Tom, his motive is a bit different and I don't think Bill would want to have Tom killing anything. He does still have some trace of humanity in him. Maybe even more than he knows. It's funny... in a way... I feel like Bill is teaching Tom to fight for his life. To not back down. Maybe Bill is giving Tom something to "live" for. It's quite possible that Tom is giving Bill something to keep...well...exsisting for if he isn't really alive.
Author's Response: I can relate, but my father was addicted to drugs. Very hard. I'm sorry. (hugs)
I agree, I feel like Tom is getting so much courage now and can hold on to some things better. Wonder what will happen.
Date: 08/28/12 08:36 pm Title: The Beginning of the End
omg! tom telling the police officer about his mom and dad and everything just made my heart hurt a little!
Author's Response: Oh!
Date: 08/28/12 06:38 pm Title: Can I come In?
ooooooh, sweet :3 what is ya spasu tebya? i can't wait to read more of this!! bill seems so sweet, even though...yah
Author's Response: ;D Guess you'll wait and find out!
Date: 08/28/12 04:55 pm Title: Where There's a Will, There's a Way
Holy double update, Batman!
Oh, noticed a few typos: "It’s not safe for he me here.” and blood coursing down his spin.
And: Tom rushed downtowns to the laundry room > Is that maybe supposed to be 'downstairs'?
Oh man, it's a good thing that Tom rushed off after talking to his dad like that. I was all tensed for violence.
Hmm, Tom's planning on leaving? I wonder how. Bill already said he wouldn't change him. And I absolutely agree with him. You can't just devote your life to someone like that without spending at *least* several months in their company.
Engel Grünanlage! -- Heh, at first I thought that was someone's name, an officer that the guy wanted on the scene. Then I realised it's probably the location.
Everyone else that lived was simply pigs fit for the slaughter and he intended to become their executioner. -- Oh my God XD Tom is messed up. Killing people is *not* okay.
Mm, so he told about his dad... I can understand his thoughts; if I were in a similar situation I too would be scared of having nowhere to live. Better to have a roof over your head than be homeless in the cold.
Author's Response: Fixed! Thanks! I think he is just so so desperate for someone to be with him forever. Poor thing.
Yep! Angel Green Area is the translation. (In my mind, Angel Park)
And it may be a crutch to convince Bill. Who knows! ;D
Date: 08/28/12 04:11 pm Title: Where I Came From
*swoons* :3
Author's Response: :D :D
Date: 08/28/12 04:05 pm Title: Where There's a Will, There's a Way
wonder if bill get angry at tom saying thst he has a friend where he didnt had any nad probably they will start saspecting....
please update soooon :)
Author's Response: That's my worry, too. He said to the officer that he had nobody... might make things complicated.
Date: 08/28/12 04:50 am Title: Meeting the Neighbour
awwwwwwww, cute!!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 08/28/12 04:22 am Title: The Beginning of the End
loooooooooooove this so far!!!!! loved the swedish film, and your writing is very good! and the promise of romance is the icing on the cake :3
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/28/12 01:01 am Title: Where I Came From
Tom and Bill are so amazing in this story. Tom has every right to be frightened of Bill but I understand his curiousness as well. Dangerously beautiful Bill is always able to captivate one into loving him. I feel badly that Bill's family would condem him to this life just to carry on a name. How self righteous and evil. Bill was so young. I do hope that they can teach eacother to love. They need each other, I do belive that.
Author's Response: I believe it, too, the more I get to know my characters. They really need love from one another.
Date: 08/27/12 10:29 pm Title: Where I Came From
I am so in love with this chapter. I can't even pinpoint the one thing WHY, but Bill's background was truly fascinating and so is his name! I LOVE his name and I don't know what Tom will choose, but I'm SO GLAD they could both feel this moment, because it's very important for both. They have both discovered something they'd been missing, in each other. I love it, I love everything about this part.
Author's Response: Oh, I am so glad you did! Thank you!