Date: 04/27/15 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
i like how dominate Tom was in this HHH
Date: 09/21/12 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1
is it wierd that i found this oddly...arousing?
Date: 08/26/12 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I guess I'm a bit perverted for enjoying this, but who cares! I loved the desperation, would've loved to see even more of that! Thanks for writing.
Date: 08/24/12 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Date: 08/22/12 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Daymn... HOT!!! OMG, I really, really liked this! I don't care if I sound perverted, but this was really hot watersport right there and just so naughty and twisted and UNF! A nice, new twist to add that car part there.
Hotness indeed! :)
Date: 08/22/12 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Very sexy. Watersports are fun!
Date: 08/21/12 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow it was so.. well, weird but incredibly hot at the same time :) I've hardly ever read something as kinky as this, but I loved the story! Tom is so rough, so bossy here, and Bill, aw, he is just a little perv^^
Thank you!
Date: 08/20/12 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm...somehow I don't think that helped... for something as squicky as watersport is for me, you did a very good job making it potable. It certainly has me wondering about your other fics. I think I'm going to go check them out. Keep up the lovely work
Author's Response: I don't think Tom's punishment worked too well either... :-\ Silly Tom!rnrnI'm glad you enjoyed it even though watersports may not be your thing. :) I definitely tried to make the main focus on the need to go, and the repercussions rather than the actual act.rnrnSadly, I do not have anymore stories at the time, but I definitely plan on working on some no sooner I get some free time and inspiration to write.rnrnYour kind words mean a lot. Thank you.
Date: 08/20/12 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Different. Interesting but different... There are a couple of mistakes that I noticed, or places where you repeat yourself - but over all I liked it! Watersports is an unusual kink for people to write, so congrats on that!
Author's Response: Thank you! It has been a while since I have written anything for any fandom. I read over the story a few times while writing it, the mistakes and repeats slipped passed me. Thanks for pointing it out; I will try and fix the mistakes at a later date.