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Reviewer: Magical Girl Kiki Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/12 10:16 am Title: epilogue

A very good epilogue to perfectly end this wonderful story.
They seem to have find how to live with and love each other without issues.
Tom is still a workaholic, Bill made it through fashion world, Andi and Nat are fine.... Not hearing from Jorg since previous chapter??? All the better!!!!
But I'm stunned - and not stunned in the same time - that Tom gave way and bought Bill a dog!!! I was sure Bill would find a way to have it, and I'm sure Tom put a good and long fight before deciding to buy it.
What you can do for the one you love!!!!!
I'm happy they're happy together, especially when you remember all the troubles they have to come to it.
Loved this story, and I'm a bit sad it's done... but it was a wondeful journey with you
You can be sure I'll be there to see what your next story will be worth.
See you then!!!
XXXXX
Kiki

Author's Response: tom can try, but he can't resist giving bill anything he wants. i probably couldn't either. thanks so much for all your amazing reviews. they're as fun to read as a new chapter.

Reviewer: THFreak101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/12 09:34 am Title: epilogue

Awe i cant believe that its the ending :( It was an amazing story. You detailed the characters very well. I hope to read more of your fanfics, because if they are just as good as this one, then i am sure to love them :) Thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/27/12 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh, epilogue left? I'm sad that this is coming to an end...

...but happy about the way things are tur5ning outl Just the way it should. Who really gives a F about Tom's father, when he they have all these lovely people around anyway?
This has been a great story tpo escape the "real world". I hope the epilogue will give us a nice little look to their future? :)

Author's Response: indeed it does, and it's up now. enjoy!

Author's Response: indeed it does, and it's up now. enjoy!

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/12 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 15

i like it :) i can't believe what Tom's dad did and probably would try something like this again ;/ good that his mother likes Bill and they are happy together :)

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/12 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter!

Reviewer: maumau Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/12 04:11 am Title: Chapter 15

love this story !!!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/12 01:37 am Title: Chapter 15

Ohh, poor author lady. *wraps you up in blankies with a cup of chicken broth* I hope you feel better soon.

Yea, if Christine actually broke up the marriage then Tom's animosity makes sense, I didn't realize she was the reason for the divorce, I just thought Simone and Jorg split and he got with her later. Guess not.

I loved Bill storming the office. As POed as he was, it made me chuckle. And Tom's comment about feeling insulted by the low ball offer, it was fantastic

I'm glad Simone is so accepting of Bill, andthat she confident that Jorg won't disown Tom, even if it doesn't really matter to Tom.

Fantastic chapter. I'm sad its almost over, but I can't wait to see the eppie. Keep up the lovely work, I hope you feel better soon.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/12 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 15

nice chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/12 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 15

I am sorry that Tom's father is such a prick. Poor Bill thinking that Tom was giving him the boot and I don't blame him for being so angry over the million dollar bribe from Jorg. I do love Simone though. :) I'm going to miss this story and I have thoroughly enjoyed it. :)

Author's Response: i have too!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/12 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 15

aw, sick :( I'm just getting over a two-week cold x_x

they should have had sex on Tom's dad's dining room table or something, just to piss him off...too late now, though xD (not that that would make any sense at all...)

Author's Response: *snort* too funny! hope you're feeling better soon. i think i'm getting over mine too.

Reviewer: baffrah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/12 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 15

omg perfect perfect perfect chapter!!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: shitpisscatfuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/12 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 15

i'm going to be so sad when this is over. sorry you're sick :( feel better

Author's Response: me too, and thank you!

Author's Response: me too, and thank you!

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/12 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 15

Aw man, being sick definitely sucks. Hope you feel better soon! This chapter made me very happy. The two of them have come so far. I'm smirking like Simone, I really enjoy the two of them together, too ... and Tom was entirely within his rights to call Christine a whore, bah, Jorg and his double standards. He just can't understand love when he sees it!

Author's Response: cuz christine has boobies and bill has a winky.rnrnokay, not sure where the hell that came from. my explanation for jorg's douchebaggery double standards.

Reviewer: Minibar Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/12 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 15

So sorry to hear that you are sick, but I hope you get better soon :) I just wanted to say that I have really enjoyed this story so much and your weekend updates were the best. You have some of the best "go-to" stories on the site as I like to call them, and I mean that in the best way. I always seem to read and re-read your stories when I want some great Tom/Bill relationship angst/sex/friendship/dialogue/drama/ reconciliation, etc. Your stories always have just the right amount of everything.

Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm flattered! i always worry if i'm making everything too sappy or too silly or too angsty, so this was a relief to read.

Reviewer: Magical Girl Kiki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/12 11:12 am Title: Chapter 15

Hi.

I first thought the misunderstanding will be much huge... Thank god, it went away faster than it arrived!
Tom immediately found the right words once he's aware of Bill's unease and they're stronger than ever... Too bad Tom doesn't want a dog!!
I'm happy for Bill's job. Sure with Tom's schedule, and now Bill's they will see each other less... But hey, the reunions at night will be so much hotter, like the first time Tom came back to L.A. all over again.
I was foolish to think that Tom's father would back down, and let them be. Once more, Tom has the right words to comfort his upset boyfriend. And I know Simone is right. Jorg won't disown his son since it would make him look bad... Not that it matters but I'm happy this prick didn't and won't manage to tear them apart.
And hopefully, Simone and Tom's sister already love Bill... And their opinion about Bill is more important for Tom than anything else. Bill managed to charm- in a good way- all the people that matter to Tom (family and friends)!

Just the epilogue to go.... Oh I'm a bit sad this story is coming to an end. But even the best things must end!!
I still can wait to see what you plan to close this wonderful story.
See it next week!!!
Kiki

Author's Response: damn right the reunions will be hotter! lol and basically jorg just doesn't matter. everyone else adores bill, tom included of course, and that's all he cares about. i'm sorta sad to see this end too. but that's what re-reading is for!

Author's Response: damn right the reunions will be hotter! lol and basically jorg just doesn't matter. everyone else adores bill, tom included of course, and that's all he cares about. i'm sorta sad to see this end too. but that's what re-reading is for!

Reviewer: Quinny Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/12 10:47 am Title: Chapter 13

LOLs @ Tom's boss being Edward Blair! Nice touch!

Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/12 10:24 am Title: Chapter 15

I absolutely love this story!

Author's Response: thanks so much!

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/19/12 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 14

O-oh... Ouch... Damn...
Well, that was a nasty twist. I expected that something like this might happen and Bill's past can become an issue, but yeah, still nasty one. People are so narrowminded... *sigh*
I guess we just have to hope that Tom knows what's important and his father comes to his senses?

Author's Response: don't worry. tom's totally got his priorities straight. as for jorg...yeah, don't hold your breath.

Reviewer: Magical Girl Kiki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/12 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 14

Hi!!!

I love this chapter, and it has nothing to do with the fact I waited so long to read it.

The little new couple is so cute in THEIR condo. And they sure begin to act and be a real couple. Bill doesn't live with Tom, they are living together.
And Bill is going to be a model??? I hope it's not a trap or that there won't be a problem when he will start.

Speaking of problem... I foresaw this kind of problem. The only unknown was, Who will recognize Bill from his previous job???
Tom's father wasn't on the list I made... But I love the confrontation and the way Tom defends his lover.
I guess Jorg doesn't know his son if he thinks Tom would break up with Bill only to have his inheritance. Tom has money on his own, he doesn't need his father's, not if it means losing Bill.
I don't know if Bill and Christine will become closer now that Tom hit his father and pretty much diswons himslef....
I wonder how this could and/or would affect Tom and Bill's relation.

When I saw drama in your note, I was afraid of a clash between the lovers. I'm relieved it didn't happen but I'm not totally relieved and I won't be until I'm sure this chapter doesn't affect Bill and Tom.
Will Tom tell his lover what happened and what his father said?
How would Bill react? Be hurt? Indifferent since he's no longer a whore?
I guess I need to wait for the next chapter to have my answers.
So Make us a great chapter for next Saturday. I can't wait to read it.

Kiki.

PS: I was pondering it for a few weeks now... So I just go for it!
I told you I'm french... And I make some translations from english into french.
And I'd like to ask you if you would allow me to translate this awesome story.
You don't need to answer at once. I let you think about it, and when you make up your mind, you can tell me. Whatever your answer will be, I'll accept it.
XXX

Author's Response: hmmm...it will affect them a little bit. maybe a brief misunderstanding. i will say that the whole modeling thing goes just fine.rnmais oui, translate your little heart out! someone translated my story safe from harm into spanish, and even though i couldn't understand it it was still fun to try and "read" it when she was done. glad you like it so much!

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/12 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 14

i have to say that i loved tom's comment as he walked out the door...and if tom's doing well anyway, what does it matter if his father cuts him off? and maybe he should try to get to know bill...



Author's Response: exactly. tom's doing just fine on his own!

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