Date: 09/22/12 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love this story SO MUCH, I wish you could update sooner!
Author's Response: well i could. i could add another chapter right now. but i'm not going to. thanks for reading!
Date: 09/22/12 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
Well, if by reviewing I can stop your computer from puking then I will gladly review!
Bill never fails to amaze me with his quick replies to people. Thankfully he read the newspaper and was able to answer Mr. H so well. He is a good partner for Tom and he doesn't spend all dinner checking his make up which is a bonus. The sexy time in the cabana was very hot (hell all their sexy times are hot). :)
Author's Response: gotta love the sexy times!
Date: 09/22/12 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
asdfghjkl. They're becoming so sweet. Eep! :)
Author's Response: i know right???
Date: 09/22/12 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
I am so loving these two. Their interactions are awesome and hilarious. I like how Bill is helping Tom to lighten up a little and how Tom is giving Bill a bit of the good life. I just hope it works out for the two of them. Love this story and now I'm on to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: exactly! it's a win win situation! thanks for reading!
Date: 09/22/12 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
i see they have really good time together :) i think even better than before so maybe maybe there will be something more between them
Author's Response: maaaaaybe!
Date: 09/22/12 11:53 am Title: Chapter 6
Love it!!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 09/22/12 11:32 am Title: Chapter 6
So sweet. I love how comfortable they are getting with each other. You can ALMOST forget that Tom is paying him. Haha. They are affectionate and sweet. Still no kissing though? Poor guys cause you know they both want to. And cabana sex...hot. I bet Natalie and Andi (and the butler and everyone else for that matter) heard them going at it. Lol.
Author's Response: no, i'm sure those curtainy things absorbed most of the noise. >.>
Date: 09/19/12 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, Tom so deserves a discount. Might just end up getting Bill fopr free... for good. *grin*
Thanks for sharing a bit of their background, too!
Author's Response: perhaps bill offers some sort of customer rewards program? fuck 4 times, get a free blowjob? thanks for reading!
Date: 09/16/12 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
I don't think I read that whole chapter the first time. YAY for them spending even more time together. I loved how Bill was like, our deal ended yesterday buddy, hands off the goods. haha. They def like each other a lot.
Author's Response: hands off the goods! *snort*
Date: 09/16/12 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww, Bill taking the time to educate himself for Tom. So sweet. I like that Bill let him kiss him. I have a feeling they will be doing that a lot more.
Author's Response: nope. no more kissing. at all. *nods head*
Author's Response: nope. no more kissing. at all. *nods head*
Date: 09/16/12 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
yay!!! he's staying a bit longer...and bill's getting a little jealous...
Date: 09/16/12 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahh dass ist why we missed days of their time together before! Because there's at least another whole week to see!
Wonderful chapter! Tom is so cute, humoring Bill with all the places he wanted to take him. Especially the multiple Marilyn Monroe things.
Fantastic work! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: thanks so much! the marilyn monroe thing was a spur of the moment addition to the chapter, so i'm glad you liked it. thanks for reading!
Date: 09/16/12 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love this x33
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 09/16/12 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
I was excited when Bill was excited! Especially because I don't want this story to end, yet.
Author's Response: can't you just picture an excited bill, big ol' grin on his face? i know i can. thanks for reading!
Date: 09/16/12 05:14 am Title: Chapter 5
Yum. And Billy's getting filthy rich off this man xD
Author's Response: always a good thing lol
Date: 09/16/12 02:14 am Title: Chapter 5
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 09/16/12 01:58 am Title: Chapter 5
Loved it XD
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 09/16/12 12:59 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm really glad I gave a try to your story :) And yay they get another week together, isn't that a nice coincidence? Haha
It was great to learn about the characters's background also!
Author's Response: yeah, they're slowly learning more and more about each other. thanks for reading!
Author's Response: yeah, they're slowly learning more and more about each other. thanks for reading!
Date: 09/16/12 12:41 am Title: Chapter 4
Ooooh so kissing isn't in Bill's job description but he did it anyway? Well I guess it must've been an added personal bonus that Bill added to show his appreciation to Tom. He's beginning to fall for him, I know it ;)
And I agree. Fed ex deliveries are great!
Date: 09/16/12 12:18 am Title: Chapter 5
yessssssss a new deal aldasdmasd got to love Tom boss xD hahaha awesome chapter and OMG Bill is little 19 Bill cant believe it i think tom should feel a little outraged or maybe not hahaa
thank you so much for the chapter love it!!! cant wait for another one *u*!!!!!
Author's Response: eh, as long as he's legal, you know? thanks for reading!