Date: 09/29/12 11:33 am Title: Chapter 7
*tear* so beautiful...
Author's Response: thanks
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 09/29/12 11:29 am Title: Chapter 7
For a second I worried that Tom wouldn't say anything when Bill admitted his feelins for Tim. I'm so happy he did though. I don't know exactly how this new arrangement is going to work between them, or for how long, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: thanks for such a lovely and thoughtful review! :D
Date: 09/28/12 10:35 am Title: Chapter 6
I really enjoy reading this
Date: 09/25/12 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh, hot sex. I approve! Though I think I wouldn't stand Nat or Andu for a second if I was Tom. XD
I'm really looking forward to Bill's day out. It's cute to watch them being happy and - undfeniably so - in love. :)
Author's Response: they are obnoxiously cute together, aren't they? thanks for reading!
Date: 09/25/12 05:28 am Title: Chapter 6
hehe I loved it :D great update <3
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 09/24/12 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
Love it love it! :D
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 09/24/12 05:34 am Title: Chapter 6
I love that Bill's making Tom revamp his wardrobe. And cabana sex. Gotta love cabana sex.
Author's Response: i know right???
Date: 09/23/12 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
I loved Pretty Woman! This is a cool reinterpretation. I like your Bill, he's a prostitute but not all jaded - he's honest with himself.
Author's Response: i like him too! *pets bill*
Author's Response: i like him too! *pets bill*
Date: 09/23/12 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
they're falling for each other...i can tell...i like this story a lot...i'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter...
Author's Response: coulda sworn i'd already replied to this review. oh well, i have forgotten what my witty response was, so for now i'll just say thanks for reading!
Author's Response: coulda sworn i'd already replied to this review. oh well, i have forgotten what my witty response was, so for now i'll just say thanks for reading!
Date: 09/23/12 07:32 am Title: Chapter 6
very good
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 09/23/12 06:42 am Title: Chapter 6
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 09/23/12 05:10 am Title: Chapter 6
This fanfic is soooo good!
Author's Response: thanks soooo much!
Date: 09/23/12 04:53 am Title: Chapter 6
I know what you mean about your computer; mine always puts tricks on me!!!
I really love this chapter. I'm not sure I can really explain why but the beginning was wonderful.
In the pool scene, it didn't seem to me like a client meeting his personnal whore. Bill and Tom almost seemed like a couple, with the husband meeting his little "superficial" wiife after a hard day of work. They're so at ease with each other, and the way Bill act, undressing Tom and letting himslef be 'loved' like that on a bench. Yeah, for me, a real couple in love.... except there is no word of love yet. Will it come soon? I hope so!!!
But ouch!! Tom's laast night in town but their last night together????
I wonder how this night will go on. Would Tom want to keep Bill and bring him to New York? How would Bill ract to such a propositon? For business or for pleasure?
would those two men so differents find a way to understand and accept what has begun to form between them? would they hurt each other before finding this?
I still really love this story! I don't know what you have still i store for those two but I'll be there to see it no matter what!!
Kiki
Author's Response: i know right? modern technology rocks...when it works! as for how tom's last night in town goes...you'll have to wait til next saturday! thanks for reading! oh, and as for this "love" you speak of...you'll have to wait and see about that too!
Date: 09/23/12 04:38 am Title: Chapter 5
Hi.
I couldn't read the chapter last week.... anddd now that I saw it... I regret not doing it sooner.
even if there's still a lot of sex between them - and I don't mind it at all!!!- we can see that their relation shifts slowly into a more personnal one. Sightseeing??? I'm not sure Bill does it a lot in his line of work.
But more important, Bill begins to open up. His meeting with Nat and Andi, his starting on Hollywood boulevard.
Kind of sad, and I'm not sure he's so indifferent to his job, I think I felt a bit of tiredness in his words...
And if I did the maths good, he was 17 when he began????? Why did I think I felt hurt in Tom about this confession???
Always the sex in there, but neither minds... And it will go on for another week.
Let's see how this "business" relation will grow!!!
Author's Response: yep, he was 17 when he started in "the biz." good math! lol and yeah, bill's job description probably doesn't include the role of tour guide. and so glad you don't mind all the sex? ;) thanks for reading!
Date: 09/23/12 12:54 am Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter! :D
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 09/22/12 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww, shopping for Tom things. Poor guy, having to do it with Bill, did he know what he was getting himself in to?
Ohh my, giggly drunk horny Bill. Could there be anything better to come home to? No, no I do not think so. But, to be honest, I never did care for that tiny black swimsuit of real!Bill's, which is what I'm assuming you were referring to. But I get why prostitute!Bill would be running around in skimpy lil things.
Pretty rude of Mrs. Hudgens/Higgins to not bother making small talk with the other arm candy at the table. Not like she knows Bill's a hooker or something. And even though Bill nearly fell asleep from boredom at least Mr. Hudgens/Higgins tried includong Bill in the conversation
Fantastic work! I'm desperately awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the lovely work!
Author's Response: actually i'd forgotten all about real bill's tiny little swimsuit. and yeah, i just pictured hooker bill running around in something skimpy. and i love a giggly drunk horny bill!
Date: 09/22/12 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
love it !!!!!! lovely Bill xD really hot part akdakdadka hahhaha
cute end Tom thinking like that!!!
great Chapter love it *u*!! cant wait for the next!!!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 09/22/12 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
awwwww ^^
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
Date: 09/22/12 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
Perfect chapter as always!!
Author's Response: aw! thanks so much!
Author's Response: aw! thanks so much!
Date: 09/22/12 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
xD aawww, this is so sweet...but Tom can't go back to NY!! he can't!
Author's Response: but real life must rear its ugly head at some point