Date: 09/29/12 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awwww.... how sad. Poor Bill and Tom.
Author's Response: don't think of it as sad. tom will be back...eventually.
Date: 09/29/12 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
I laughed when Bill spouted what he'd read in the paper that morning. They're having a lot of fun together, both in and out of bed. :)
Date: 09/29/12 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
It's cool how Bill fits Tom's needs. Maybe some love will begin to blossom?
Date: 09/29/12 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yay, they're starting to get to know each other a bit better! I like learning about their histories too.
Date: 09/29/12 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, Bill is expensive! Good thing Tom's so rich!
Date: 09/29/12 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
Woo Hoo! I'm happy they've decided to continue seeing each other xD
Author's Response: see? admitting your feelings is a good thing!
Date: 09/29/12 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 7
noooo you should have cashed it you dolt, it would help you get a nice apartment until you can find a job. And WHY THE HELL DIDN'T TOM TAKE YOU WITH HIM? I mean seriously Bill, you can be a prostitute or look for a job ANYWHERE you're completely mobile. Tom isn't. *headpiano*
Author's Response: okay. calm down. breathe. feel better? okay. and he's not in it for the money anymore. and tom...is a little slow.
Date: 09/29/12 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
still a nice filler chapter. but sadly only one more to goooooo
Date: 09/29/12 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh yay! but i really liked this line:
admitted to himself that it bothered him knowing Tom was leaving that day, in just a few hours actually. It bothered him knowing he'd probably never see Tom again. But what bothered him the most was the fact that it bothered him at all.
Date: 09/29/12 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
ooh nice smut. and a very nice kiss, thank you.
Date: 09/29/12 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh I like they way this is going, very close to the movie which I loved. though, I'm pouting because I'm anticipating the snubbery of Bill at the boutique.
Date: 09/29/12 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh nice... I liked this.
“There's this great invention called an ATM down in the lobby,” Tom joked
yes, aren't atm's wonderful when you have those late night impulse buys?
Author's Response: atms are perfect for that! lol thanks for reading!
Date: 09/29/12 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aw, I'm glad they voiced their feelings for each other. But long distance isn't a good future together. Maybe Tom could do more business on the West Coast (hint hint lol). I know Bill changed his mind about wanting to be paid for being with Tom, but I bet that money would come in handy, especially if he isn't 'working' anymore.
Author's Response: let's not forget. he probably still has most of that initial $10K. that should hold him for a little while.
Date: 09/29/12 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww! Cute chapter!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 09/29/12 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
awww they kissed.... awww. That was so sweet. Actually I thought Bill will say that he loves Tom and he asked "only" for a kiss :)) Nice chapter, a little bit sad because... Tom is away D:
Hope he will come back soon! And I like the ending, that Bill didn't take the money, good boy :))
Author's Response: well not "only" a kiss. a kiss is a big deal for him. and i love how bill not taking the money is getting such mixed reviews. thanks for reading!
Date: 09/29/12 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
OHHHH GOSH skdakdalkdad *u*!!!!!!!!!!!
Bill should have go to NY with Tom!!! hhahaa xD
really awesome
Author's Response: but he wasn't invited
Date: 09/29/12 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
Nice chapter! Can't wait for next!!!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 09/29/12 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, these boys. What a difficult relationship for them to decide to engage in. I really like the way this chapter worked out, though. Bill ripping the check up was such a sweet, romantic gesture.
Author's Response: rather glad i went with that little idea at the end there. and yeah, long distance isn't always a good thing. maybe they'll make it work.
Date: 09/29/12 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
i was waiting for that moment for so long. i'm happy that finally something more serious came between them and won't disappear so fast :) i'm kinda shocked to what Bill did witch the check but from the other site it looks like the time he spent with Tom means more than just money :)
and of course i can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: thanks for reading!