Date: 10/06/12 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
Tom has good friends, jackass freindss but friends nonetheless.
I hate to say that, but I'm almost on Georg's side... they like each other and now???? I'm sure Georg will be proved wrong but in the meanwhile, I can help but be afraid for Tom and Bill.
Even if there is already some improvement in their story.... Bill has a new job!!!! he won't sell his body anymore and will keep it just for Tom... Or is it really possible? Bill is a young man after all? Will there be some "cheating" from him? or from Tom?
but I can see that distance seems to already be hard on them. A good news, since they will then be more inclined to find a way to the other if they miss each other so much!!!
Go on, I still love this story, you write it so well... But don't be too mean to them in the future, please???? Pretty please??? with a huge cherry on top??? I know it's going to happen despite my hopes, since it helps making a story better.... just no too mean okay???
Love. Kiki
Author's Response: sorry. not a big fan of cherries. and things might be a little rough for them at times...but i'll try not to be too mean.
Date: 10/06/12 11:48 am Title: Chapter 7
I love this chapter
Not quite what I pitured for their last night together.... But it's wonderful nonetheless.
I really liked the way Tom take care of Bill when usually it's Bill who takes care of his client.
but the better part of this chapter is Bill' confession and Tom returning it. It went smoothly but you can trully see how much they mean for each other.
i know their "relationship" won't easy, but the fact Bill agreed to "change" job for Tom is a good sign it could work.
Like always I fear there will inevitably a issue or two.... Will Bill mange to find a new job? Will Tom come back like he plans it? ... what do you plan for those two before they could trully be together???
Maybe a hint in the next chapter?? wiat and see.... at once!
Date: 10/06/12 11:27 am Title: Chapter 8
awww poor Bill and Tom! Great chapter :)
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 10/06/12 11:11 am Title: Chapter 8
awwwww so cute ^^
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 10/06/12 11:06 am Title: Chapter 8
aslkfdhlfjh. I love the sickly sweet syrup that is flowing between Tom and Bill. I love it.
Author's Response: thanks
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 10/06/12 03:14 am Title: Chapter 7
Gah..........
I need much more of this.
Date: 10/05/12 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
lol really like the story hehe
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 10/02/12 08:05 am Title: Chapter 7
it's sad when someone you have feelings for has to go away...now what are they gonna do?
Author's Response: i'm guessing...make it work the best they can
Date: 10/01/12 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awww, that was sad. They shouldn't need to separate like that. But I guess in life, sometimes it is what it is. I hate these melancholic goodbyes in fics... I count on you bringing them back together soon and this time for good. :)
Author's Response: they'll be back together...a few times before the story is over
Date: 10/01/12 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
They kissed! Oh, lovely. And they're going to try and have a long-distance relationship. I know from experience how hard that can be to maintain but it's so worth the effort. I hope things work out for them.
Author's Response: i know it's hard when the other person is just on the other side of town. they're dealing with opposite ends of the country! *crosses fingers*
Date: 10/01/12 09:20 am Title: Chapter 7
I'm so excited for the next chapter!! I'm so glad they decided to stay together.
Author's Response: me toooo!
Author's Response: me toooo!
Date: 09/30/12 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
I just loved your story... Being honest I have never seen Pretty Woman, broke my heart every time i see the movie name xD but I have a go with your story and i'm so haapy with it, it's beautiful.
Thaks for sharing with us.
Author's Response: thanks so much for giving it a chance!
Date: 09/30/12 03:55 am Title: Chapter 7
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 09/30/12 03:17 am Title: Chapter 7
perfect chapter. I love it!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 09/30/12 03:10 am Title: Chapter 7
:( apart...for now. and Bill might not have groceries for long if he doesn't find a job that doesn't require the use of his ass
Author's Response: daaaayum! lol
Date: 09/29/12 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 7
How sad... looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: not sad. i mean, they're going to see each other again sometime.
Date: 09/29/12 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
WHAT?? Wow, Bill. Tearing up the check. Damn.
Author's Response: lol thanks for reading!
Date: 09/29/12 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
*squees* they're giving it a go! *happy dance*
Wonderful chapter! I really hope the long distance thing works for them. Its always such a hard situation. But at least Tom is out there regularly. *crosses fingers for them*
That end part, with the check was beautiful. I can't wait to see the next installment! Keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response: i made some squee! *happy dance* glad you liked it so much! *joins you in the crossing of fingers*
Date: 09/29/12 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
My heart broke a little bit for Bill and Tom. They are such a good fit for each other and I sure hope they can work it out. Love this story and hope you're refrigerator is getting fuller by the minute. :)
Author's Response: it's well stocked once again lol thanks for reading!