Date: 10/20/12 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter! And yay for early updates XD
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Date: 10/20/12 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aaaaaaaw i feel sorry for both of them :c Love the chapter!
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Date: 10/20/12 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 10
omg, that was amazing :)
so the second surprise was the apartment? can't wait when they both will live there :)
well, even with so much time apart they good together and hopefully it would stay like that, yet i'm curious how jealous would Bill acts if someone would try to "take" Tom from him hehehe
Author's Response: i think he'd probably scratch their eyes out
Author's Response: i think he'd probably scratch their eyes out
Date: 10/20/12 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
Tye're so freaking cute together, why doesn't bill just move with Tom tio NY?
Author's Response: cuz tom hasn't indicated he wants him to move
Date: 10/20/12 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
When they're together, it's oh so sweet! But when they're apart, oh, my heart.
I don't know why it hasn't occurred to either of them for Bill to move! His job isn't exactly location-sensitive. Unless Tom's happy keeping his lover on the other side of the country... *cue canned 'uh-oh' track*
Things are going too well; I sense problems on the near horizon.
Author's Response: yeah. basically tom is happy with bill on the other side of the country. well...maybe not thrilled. but...if it ain't broke don't fix it? *shrugs* it's not like bill is pressing the issue...
Date: 10/20/12 11:50 am Title: Chapter 10
I think I see another crack. Bill doesn't seem too thrilled with this apartment. I wonder if it makes me feel cheap or as if this will placate him. I really loved the scenes with Steven. and he has a lot of nerve calling Bill too young if he's with a man old enoug to be his father.
Author's Response: he's not thrilled. i think he's just going along with whatever tom wants (for now) cuz he doesn't want to lose him. having just a little bit of him is better than having nothing.
Date: 10/20/12 11:43 am Title: Chapter 10
this was a really good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
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Date: 10/17/12 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I know its been a debate forever, its just not where I draw the line for telling, you know what I mean?
Date: 10/16/12 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ouch! And I get both Bill and Tom on that argument. Those are tricky situations (though I think 1,5 weeks during a two months period is actually quite decent IMHO). I hope they somehow sort things out and eventually end up finding all the time in the world for each other. :)
Btw, the beginning of this chapter was so delightful. It made me smile happily so much. :)
Author's Response: thanks! i just had to go with the happy airport reunion.
Date: 10/14/12 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
Dearrr lord you killed me!! cute and f hot scene here kadmaksda *u*!!!!
really amazing!!
poor Bill hahaha he even could have killed tom pushing him out of the car hahaha
Dramatic end again poor Bill but maybe he was freaking out a little too much hahha but i dont know i never had been in this kind of situations hahah
so i just enjoyed xD!!!
cute and great end for that little fight
TuT and i cant see more coming OHGOTT!!!
hahaha cant wait for more!!
thank you so much!!!! *u*
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it! and thank you!
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it! and thank you!
Date: 10/14/12 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
the sad part about this update is your story is the only thing that's been updated in a week and a half, which only hit me when I noticed there was another chapter despite it having held the #1 spot in my tracked list all week ;_; aw, they got to have more sex, and then they got to fight :3 cute
Author's Response: this just means they get to have make up sex
Date: 10/14/12 10:55 am Title: Chapter 9
Aww *cute pouty face* their first fight! So sweet, and well resolved, or so it looks at this point. Though I do think Nat shouldn't have told Bill, its not like he was there with someone or anything, Bill might have never noticed in his own reading if it wasn't pointed out to him. Jus seems like she's trying to make trouble to me.
The beginning part was hawt, so very hawt and passionate. I loved it. The Bill charging at him, not even giving Tom the chance to run toward him causing that cool slo-mo awesome effect, was also amazing.
Keep up the amazing work! I'm sooo excited to see the next chapter.
Author's Response: it's a debate people have been having for years. if your friend knew your bf/gf was cheating, or in this case had just done something sketchy, would you want them to tell you? i, for one, would. natalie does care about bill, and just doesn't want to see him get hurt. she had nothing but good intentions when she showed bill the picture.
Date: 10/14/12 10:05 am Title: Chapter 9
this is really good
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Date: 10/14/12 08:02 am Title: Chapter 9
I loved the beginning of this chapter, but Hey, who wouldn't?
They see each other after long weeks of separation and it's pretty.... intense but so delicious.
They're good together, not only on a sexual plan -this one doesn't need to be proved- but even outside the bedroom.
But of course, the problems begin to show. I understand why Bill is upset that Tom didn't tell him about the wedding and even Tom's explanation about it..
They will have to find a way to see each other more, they seem to like the other more and more, they care more too, it can be seen in the way they're upset to be apart.... but how can they be together? Tom can't leave his job - maybe a mutation to LA???- and Bill seems to love LA, so... how????
By the way, I don't like Natalie and Andy's attitude. They seem to undermine Bill's relationship with Tom in every way they can. Aren't they happy their friend has someone?? I don't understand them...
I see more issues in the next chapters, but I'm sure nothing that can be fixed if Tom and Bill trully come to love each other.
I couldn't bribe you with cherries last time...Hope this small review can make it so you're no too mean with them.
Don't stop, I still really love this story.
Kiki
Author's Response: i cannot be bribed! lolrnand of course there have to be some problems. no relationship is perfect. but yes, they do genuinely care about each other. they just have...different ways of showing it? as for natalie and andi...okay, andi couldn't care less. their relationship really doesn't affect him. but natalie genuinely cares about bill, and doesn't want him to be hurt. she's just the skeptic in their little group.
Author's Response: i cannot be bribed! lolrnand of course there have to be some problems. no relationship is perfect. but yes, they do genuinely care about each other. they just have...different ways of showing it? as for natalie and andi...okay, andi couldn't care less. their relationship really doesn't affect him. but natalie genuinely cares about bill, and doesn't want him to be hurt. she's just the skeptic in their little group.
Date: 10/14/12 04:13 am Title: Chapter 9
Yay for being reunited! Boo for going to weddings alone!
Author's Response: lol great review!
Date: 10/14/12 03:58 am Title: Chapter 9
Aww. They're at the stage where they get jealous.. So cute. :)
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Date: 10/14/12 01:17 am Title: Chapter 9
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
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Date: 10/13/12 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Date: 10/13/12 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMG I LOVED IT! Ok, but seriously, do I see a little trouble in paradise? How much longer are they going to do this dance? I guess 2 weeks in 2 months isn't so bad when you think about how far away they are fro each other, but that does really suck. I don't know that I'd be able to keep up a relationship like that. Bill is a better person than me, but I guess Tom is kind of worth it. Are they ever going to get to be together?
Author's Response: dorkrnok, but seriously. yeah it's not a perfect relationship. but bill wants to make it work. but how bad does tom want to make it work?