Date: 02/26/14 02:04 pm Title: Chap 16 - In the Valley
Pleaseeeee update soon!!!! I am in total love with this story, and I cannot wait to see what happens!
Date: 01/17/14 05:42 pm Title: Chap 16 - In the Valley
Where is Bills woman Jessica? and her baby??? :( please tell me they are ok!! :( and i think they were just surprised that there was a half breed born? you know half human and half angel sorta thing...i always hate getting to the last chapter :( its been long since you've updated please update soon :( and not tokio hotel soon :(....just love your story :D
Date: 01/17/14 05:28 pm Title: Chap 15 - Jungle Animals
Who is the little boy??? Omg Aly wtf!! you got yourself in trouble again!! D: wheres tom??? it seems every time she pushes him away something bad happens to him gott dammit Aly!!And wth did they do to Bill :( poor Bill maybe Bill was crying out for help that one time and tom didnt go :( he gave them up for her and stayed with her :(
Date: 01/17/14 05:08 pm Title: Chap 14 - The Sweet Truth
wow just wow im speechless imlike this atm :O this was just soooo fucking romantic wow..not many sex scenes get me liek this but this was just so sweet and full of emotion..now not to be dirty or anything but i wonder what its like to have sex with tom :/ we are sure of one thing Ria is one lucky woman lol
Date: 01/17/14 04:50 pm Title: Chap 13 - An Angel Depending on the Angle
awww just so much feels and lmao!! XD at this...this does sound like Bill :P
“He'd say: Taaaaaaaammmm Aly needs to rest! She's pregnant! You need to take better care of your pregnant girl or you won't have her or your baby for very long. I don't know why she puts up with you, I don't know why I put up with you. Blah blah blah.”----still cracking at that XD haha.
Date: 01/17/14 04:35 pm Title: Chap 12 - A New Prison
I smiled so big and went like :O Tom is alive!! yay!!! :D so happy sooooooo happyyyyyyyyyyyyy haha :D omg they were going to kill her :O but just so happy that Tom got their in time.
Date: 01/17/14 04:20 pm Title: Chap 11 - Mournful Cries in the Dark of the Night
omg :,( I hope Tom is ok, I hope all of them are ok :,( godammit Aly :,( poor Tom he saved her and she finally said I love you too...see what i mean the pace is perfect!! :D
Date: 01/17/14 04:11 pm Title: Chap 10 - Secrets Make the Heart Grow Fonder
aww this is so sweet :D seriously i love your story. but wow now i get why they are running away and why he is doing all this for her..and the future baby. I hope they get out safely. :(
Date: 01/17/14 03:59 pm Title: Chap 9 - In Motion
lol Tom you jerk..being meant to her like that and well she did say sorry but i could see how that could hurt him especially since they are in loveee im so happy you paired everyone up :)this is so cute and exciting their escape has got me nervous :9 anyway heres feedback:: its perfect, i love the pace of your story i love that she fully hasnt accepted him yet but is slowly accepting him so yes its perfecttt on to the next chappie..sorry for my run on sentence :P
Date: 01/17/14 03:46 pm Title: Chap 8 - Help
aww Tom you have to try and understand what Aly is feeling come one..she didn't mean it.. :( *sigh*
Date: 01/17/14 03:32 pm Title: Chap 7 - Angels
awww Tom is so sweet :) cool way of healing her btw :) on to the next amazing chappie.
Date: 01/17/14 10:22 am Title: Chap 6 - Serendipity
awww :D they are so cute together!! AND I think it wasnt toms fault i know he didnt mean what he did i think his primal instinct took over and like Bill said "mating season" sooo yep :)
Date: 01/17/14 03:54 am Title: Chap 5 - In the Garden of Eden
omg omg omg omg omfg!!! :O wow Tom how could you!!!
Date: 01/17/14 03:43 am Title: Chap 4 - Bipolar or Sympathetic?
lol tom "shes too mouthy" and aww he is so sweet :D
Date: 01/17/14 03:38 am Title: Chap 3 - Death Never Comes
omg :( poor Aly :( maybe she was sent there to take care of tom maybe no? :/
Date: 01/17/14 03:31 am Title: Chap 2 - Home, Sweet Home
oh man so what does he do i have a feeling he wants to breed alyanna and tom..sorry..NOT SORRY im sick i know := but hey it could be :P
Date: 01/17/14 03:24 am Title: Chap 1 - Dreaming a Reality
woah!! what is this i cant even O_o im hooked :O
Date: 10/14/13 06:07 pm Title: Chap 16 - In the Valley
I am a new reader to this story and may I just say that I LOVE IT!!!!! This story has me hooked, and I love that each chaper usually ends with a cliff hanger. It always makes me come back to read more!!! Update soon!!!
Date: 10/02/13 04:54 pm Title: Chap 16 - In the Valley
That happened quite fast. I was kind of expecting there to be more complications concerning the actual birth, concidering the baby's fast growth and the fact that it's not entirely human.
I feel so sorry for Bill though; really curious to hear what happened to him. I really hope he'll recover.
Please don't end this story soon, without a sequel! There's so much going on, and it's so damn addictive...
Author's Response: I understand where you're coming from I could have done a better job of explaining that she had gone into labour sometime during her kidnapping. I was thinking of giving her a complicated pregnancy however I knew the baby wouldn't really be able to get too sick since she has Toms DNA and since he can never die the baby could never get sick. And with Alyanna I've got some plans for her lol :) besides Tom was going through so much with finding out bills mind had been tampered with it would have been a lot to have a complication and then everything else I have planned. I'm so glad to have readers like you guys though, you really make me think about the next steps I take with this story an you have me an idea lol
Date: 10/02/13 04:14 pm Title: Chap 16 - In the Valley
Happy Birthday honey :) I hope you enjoy your day. I hope you update soon cause these cliffhangers are getting to be too much lol. I have answers to these questions lol. Good job as always :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had a great time on my birthday! Met someone new and honestly I couldn't be happier, he's the sweetest thing ever lol. I promise to update soon :) lol I love leaving you guys with cliffhangers it makes me really excited when I pick up the story where I left off :D I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and shh! We'll see if your answers are right when I update :)