Date: 08/30/12 04:24 am Title: Back to my arms again
Fantastic story. Really enjoyed it.
Date: 08/30/12 01:00 am Title: Back to my arms again
did i ever tell you you write the awesomest smut? like, ever?
well, you do.
Date: 08/30/12 12:32 am Title: Back to my arms again
Absolutely wonderful! Can't wait for more! :-)
Author's Response: Whooops, forgot to mark it as complete. >_> Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 08/29/12 03:15 pm Title: Sail away sweet sister
hahah this chapter was so amusing, I can totally picture Bill and Georg going all macho against each other. Poor Tom haha.
I think my favourite was the simple "Short contest/you're short" remarks between Bill and Georg.
Ohhhhh I love this. I'm looking forward to the last chapter!
Date: 08/29/12 02:46 pm Title: When they let you down my friend
for want of a better term... THAT WAS SO HOT.
It really, really was. I'm always more into femmy/bottom Bill but this really did it for me. I loved the first story to this universe and I am really loving this one, too. So goooood, so so good.
Date: 08/29/12 01:32 pm Title: Take it the way you want it
ooooo Bill you naughty boi. I loved this, I'm smiling so much! I can't wait to read the next two chapters. You always always deliver to the max, Tay!
Date: 08/26/12 03:58 pm Title: Sail away sweet sister
Haha! That was awesome. Bill and Georg fighting over Tom is the best! Favorite line: Tom and I will be doing vegetarian things, very boring. ^_^
Date: 08/26/12 03:52 am Title: Sail away sweet sister
Hahaha, and I had so much fun reading it. You just nailed the characters and all that little mischevious commenting on things we all think of starting from twins' veeeeeeery busy days with lunches and sunsets etc. You got it, woman! :D
Btw, I rarely like g's characters as much as I did this time. Good job.
I can't wait for the rest. :)
Date: 08/26/12 03:19 am Title: When they let you down my friend
Oooh, shit... ;)
They are so adorably brotherly... or should I say siblingly in this case? I'm glad you didn't lose that witin this sex change. The best aqnd the hottest way to write girl!Tom is to keep him/her as Tom and not maker him/her another person with just Tom's vcharacteristics, you know?
Sex is always hot in a weird, kinky way and I enjoy it very much. Though I do wished for that oral sex so much. Maybe later?
I'm having a great time with this. :)
Date: 08/25/12 09:20 am Title: Take it the way you want it
The whole Bill and Georg getting all alpha male was great. And clearly, Tom's change is mental as well as physical - cause he just didn't get it! And wise, wise Gustav - refusing to get pulled into the shenanigans. Really like this and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
Date: 08/24/12 02:57 pm Title: Sail away sweet sister
This chapter was hilarious. Absolutely love this story.
Date: 08/24/12 12:18 pm Title: Sail away sweet sister
reading this at work and my boss happened to be near my desk. she's like "what are you trying not to burst into giggles over?"
this was excellent!
Date: 08/24/12 10:28 am Title: Sail away sweet sister
I think everything that came out of Gustav's mouth was pure genius and he can totally dominate this fic and it's pure win! LOLOLOL, as it is though, it's really ridic how Bill and Georg got into this testosterone male hissy fit over girl!Tom and I LOVE how Tom keeps going 'we're not gay together'. Keep it up, Tom, and you might stay a girl for a really long time, if Bill's lack of plan says anything else about it. I can see now how he really planned this all out and he really LOVES Tom's breasts. Geez, he's such a GUY! Then again, it's Tom and what doesn't he love about Tom? You know, minus all the idiotic things he says out loud every once in a while.
Date: 08/24/12 04:38 am Title: Sail away sweet sister
Omg that was hilarious, the whole chaPter was pure gold! Loving this story so much! Haha vegetarian things.... I love bill.
Date: 08/24/12 02:33 am Title: Sail away sweet sister
My favorite part was where it started "Bill!" Tom cried out," and ended with "Gustav gave her a grave nod." ;)
This is just fabulous! Your Gs are perfect -- so funny yet so "in character," especially Tom and Georg's raunchy jokes and flirting.
Bill is adorably clueless here (or acting it), but I love that he's still over the moon for Tom in any shape or form.
All the interaction with the Gs was terrific, right from the beginning with the grinning fools comment. Then Gustav with his fast and Georg actually copped a feel! That was perfect! I can’t believe he got away without losing a hand! xD Then everyone's awe of Tom's breasts. Her magnificent rack is the 800-pound gorilla in the room!
But, I adored Gustav’s reaction and his comments about magic, then Tom imagining them as superheroes. That was only overshadowed a little by the epic fight between Bill and Georg for the hand of the fair Tom. I wonder how much hair was pulled and shoves were made before they realized Gustav made off with her.
Again, you use every little detail to just make it more perfect, like the talk about the VIP call and teasing the twins about some of the inane photos on the app. I just love this story (AND YOU) so, so much!
Date: 08/24/12 01:41 am Title: Sail away sweet sister
too much fun Its great
Date: 08/24/12 12:37 am Title: Sail away sweet sister
Zeph was right. I would've snorted out the tea that she was going to make me over on Twitter! LOL. (PS, this still needs to be filed under "Best Idea Ever!")
Date: 08/23/12 03:16 pm Title: Take it the way you want it
You know I loved the first one, and this is shaping up to be just as good :) Be careful of us witches, Tom ;)
Date: 08/23/12 06:16 am Title: Take it the way you want it
Wheeeee! Nothing like a new story from you to lighten up my day. Week. Month.
I love this, I never thought I'd be into het but then again when it's these two darlings, anything goes. I love the humour and characterization in this. And the sex, well, can't even talk about it because I'm too busy drooling.
Date: 08/21/12 04:58 pm Title: When they let you down my friend
Oh WOW, this just keeps getting better! *__*
I LOVE how you made Tom's transition very different here and how he was more aware of it. I love how you described his feeling of cold and his boy-bits shrinking in -- it was just a vivid, perfect description.
Then, Bill, darling Bill, being unsurprised and lusty right from the beginning. Way to be subtle, Bill. ;D I love how you really kept a focus the whole chapter on his new musculature and how he's changed since the time of the first story. I don't know how you can take what anyone else would make a cracky PWP and imbue it with deeper feeling and imagery as well as wit and humor. I just stare in awe at your writing ability.
And I looooved the surprise motorboating! xD Oh gosh, then Bill manhandling Tom was so hot, just with overpowering her a little. *fans self*
I had so many favorite lines, I would be quoting back the whole story. So just let me say that I love how you made both of them so open with each other, especially how Tom wants Bill to describe the sensation he's feeling and he does. It speaks volumes about the kind of relationship they have normally that they can trust each other and be so honest to share those kind of turn-ons with each other.
Then the end: oooooh snap! It didn’t work like last time! D: What are they going to do?! I cannot wait to see the Gs' reactions. :3 Thank you so much for writing this incredible story!