Date: 01/06/09 07:13 pm Title: Hell's just beginning
This such an awsome story me read the rest later
Date: 12/14/08 12:51 pm Title: First Night
Miyavi is so sexy! I love his song the wedding march!
Date: 12/13/08 08:40 pm Title: New Day, New Grave
i drew out what damia looked like on paper, snake bites and all.
and she looks like a big jerk.
no really, she does.
who wears that shit.
and if you do, then please read "understanding Mary-sue"
-cough- self-insert sue -cough-
Author's Response: eh, *shrugs* first time writing a 'made up' person here, sorry if it sucked on paper. and i just got the clothes from what i thought looked ok on people at my school. and for the snake bites, yeah i admit that was stupid which is why i got 'rid' of it later on. and for mary sue yeah i read and re-read it many times, i try not to write that way but again i'm still learnig so sorry if you dont like my story or if that stuff ruined it for you, but hey, i'll make sure to do better next time. k? : )
Date: 12/06/08 06:05 pm Title: Truce?
omg! you have got to keep writing!!!! Find the inspiration again or something cuz yuo're story is awesome!!!
Author's Response: lol, Danke and i'll try : )
Date: 12/05/08 09:42 pm Title: Getting to know eachother
the story is AWESOME!!!!! Keep working on it!!!!! Plz, it'll make me happy! lol
Date: 10/21/08 07:38 pm Title: New Day, New Grave
I LOVE IT!!!
More please
*puppy dog eyes*
Date: 09/14/08 09:46 pm Title: So Fucked
*gasps*
*humps bed*
Sooo horny >_> XD
LOVE LOVE LOVE THE G's XD
Date: 08/18/08 01:41 pm Title: Hell's just beginning
cat fight. meow!!
Author's Response: : ) lol
Date: 08/17/08 04:26 pm Title: A Somewhat Misunderstanding
awe!
Author's Response: thanks : )
Date: 08/17/08 03:24 pm Title: Mornings suck
Have you ever heard of a Marysue?
Take the Litmus test. please
Author's Response: yeah im trying not to make them marysue and Litmus test?
Date: 08/02/08 09:49 pm Title: Cold Heart to Heart
Sorry but Jen's a bitch! Sorry again but seriously!!
Author's Response: lol : ) its ok, she's suppose to be that way in this chapter
Date: 07/31/08 11:08 pm Title: Cold Heart to Heart
waaaaaaaaaiiiittt.... Ok Damia knows Jen is selling to her parents but doesnt stop her and just laughs it off? I thought Damia wanted her parents to stop using. Its a good chapter but you tend to use "...he said..." "...she said..." maybe try to change it up a bit, or just leave it out during a two way conversation.
Author's Response: Yeah, i know its weird and i have an explanation to it, i just have to word it right, but i'm warning you now, it wont be nice. and yeah i have a tendency to do that 'he said' 'she said' thing alot, trying to work on it. and thanks for the advice. : )
Date: 07/28/08 08:12 pm Title: First Impression
post more
Author's Response: will soon : )
Date: 07/27/08 08:12 pm Title: Meeting the family
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Date: 07/21/08 04:34 pm Title: Meeting the family
bleh cigars. haha I really liked Eh-Ru she was cute.
Author's Response: uhg..i know but it has to be in there and glad you like Eh-Ru : )