Date: 12/13/12 05:20 pm Title: 2/2
I've milked one! It was like squeezing a warm wet fuzzy squishy hot dog. It's a squeeze from the base to the tip.
This was so so sweet. I love how much the enjoy being in each other's presence.
Date: 09/23/12 03:45 am Title: 2/2
I've milked a cow before. It was gross. Third chapter yes.
“I wonder what it’d be like to be a star, always floating and in the moment,” Bill whispers, and it’s profound statements like these that illuminate the brilliance behind his simple, innocent nature."
As if Bill could ever make a profound statement :P
Date: 09/22/12 07:24 pm Title: 2/2
This is sweet :3
And I don't mean to ruin it, but..... I was looking forward to some sexy times in the loft ;P lol
Date: 09/22/12 04:13 am Title: 2/2
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 09/21/12 11:35 am Title: 2/2
It doesn't quite sound finished, so I think a third chapter would finish it off nicely. Really sweet story! :3
Date: 09/21/12 07:46 am Title: 2/2
If this is the end of the story, then you do end it beautifully with the last line. But I don't mind if there will be more. LOL XD
Date: 09/21/12 01:55 am Title: 2/2
Yea, I totally vote for a third chapter. This was a nice one, but it doesn't really feel complete to me.
Date: 08/12/12 06:14 pm Title: 1/2
Aww, this is really cute, summer-y. I really want to read the second chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 08/09/12 10:20 pm Title: 1/2
I like it ^^
I hope to read more, soon ;D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/09/12 07:04 am Title: 1/2
cute ^^ looking forward to see how the second pat will be ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 08/08/12 11:28 pm Title: 1/2
They're gonna go milk cows, huh? Sure. Uh-huh. Something's getting milked tonight and it's not going to be a cow.
I liked the country setting of this. It was serene and slow-paced like a real farm. I live on a farm, so. There are some cows down the road from me. Anyways, props on the setting! It was relaxing to read.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Although, I've changed the rating from NC-17 to R, you can still expect sexiture in the next chapter. I'm partial to the setting as well -- it seems so quaint :)
Date: 08/08/12 07:25 pm Title: 1/2
oooh i like this :) cant wait for chapter two :D
Author's Response: Chapter two should be up shortly!
Date: 08/08/12 06:41 pm Title: 1/2
Okay well I'm reviewing again because I'm stupid and didn't notice you said it was gonna be two chapters! Plus, I forgot to tell you how much I love the thought of Bill with an adorable southern accent!
Author's Response: Also, I'm glad you like Bill's accent :D
Date: 08/08/12 06:40 pm Title: 1/2
Hah! When I heard from another author that you had written a story about milk I was really excited because I love your stories, but I didn't expect that milk to come from a cow, because it certainly didn't in her story! I was surprised but not let down, because this is still pretty adorable and I can't wait for the next chapter! How many chapters is it going to be?
Oh, and I saw that you updated How to Climb Trees and I almost fell off my seat! I LOVE that story and hope you update again soon!
Author's Response: Oh yes, that would be shitpisscatfuck. We go way back. This story will be updated shortly, and expect a new chapter of How to Climb Trees relatively soon! :)
Date: 08/08/12 04:10 am Title: 1/2
this sounds like a good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/08/12 12:42 am Title: 1/2
Oh my lord honey child...i'll be waiting till the cows come home for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Haha thanks for the review! :)
Date: 08/07/12 06:40 pm Title: 1/2
I'm glad you decided to turn this into a series fic (Crack has its place but I rarely read it). I was really drwn in by your banner, and the title is so great, I wish I'd thought of it. I like how you didn't instantly, point blank explain what Tom and Bill's situation and relationship towards each other was, but rather let the action of the story tell us about that. But I don't really like how Bill's countryness is conveyed through such a strong accent. It seems overdone and almost comical at times, as if he's putting it on thick on purpose. Other than that, I'm interested to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks for the constructive criticism! I'll keep what you said about Bill's over-done accent in mind. He might possibly be trying to play up the southern belle role to catch Tom's eye, but then again, it might just come across so strong due to an unfamiliarity with all but a stereotypical southern accent on my part. For characterization's sake, I'm going to stick with the accent in the second/final chapter -- don't want Bill to appear suddenly out of character. The new chapter shall be posted shortly! :)
Date: 08/07/12 03:30 pm Title: 1/2
I enjoyed Gordon's authentic Southern accent. It seems very legitimate and like you have a lot of experience around someone who speaks all Southern like, y'all.
Author's Response: Actually, I'm not quite familiar with the southern accent; most of what I've based Gordon's accent on is the movies. :)