Date: 06/03/13 01:58 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't know how you do it. Your stories have such a sweet simplicity, an easy humor, a lighthearted oddity to them. The characters are so beningly strange, with Bill usually being especially derpy and infantile. He gets so sleepy from puppytime, he loses his ability to form sentences. And Tom is just so matter-of-factly THERE. There's no awkwardness to your writing, or jarring inconsistencies. These little one-shots you do are fully formed, and perfectly written. You're very good at the ultra-shorts, and very good at turning them into longer stories, like Bill's Pubes and Are you My Daddy. If you ever have the time and inclination, I'd love to see what you could do with some depth, because I'm pretty sure it would knock me over.
Author's Response: Always such high praise from you! You knock me over with it :D Strangely enough, I've been telling myself for months now that once I finish Pubes and AYMD I'm going to stop writing multi-chapter stories all together. With them, I feel a lot of pressure and stress to update and I don't like that feeling, but I also hate making people wait. I'm definitely going to see them through to the end, but after that, I think I might be done. I don't even have the patience to write out a super long one-shot either. And honestly, people seem to like my one shots just as much if not more than. rnrnI should also mention that while writing this story (and I'm pretty sure I said this somewhere in the chapter notes or wherever) I myself was sleepy from puppytime all day at my friend's house and I had pretty much lost the ability to form sentences and I'm pretty sure my friend's sister was already asleep not even 5 feet away from me and it was a really awkward situation and somehow the awkwardness of my own present situation drove this story onwards.rnrnSpeaking of my friend/stories with a slightly derpy/infantile Bill you should read her story How to Climb Trees (AndeinerSeitenureineWeile) because I think it's precious and I wish I had the ability to write Bill like that.
Date: 01/09/13 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awh I just read this again today and I reliazed something. Prinsess is dead ;_;
Date: 01/09/13 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
What the.........O.o
XD I don't know what to say.
Author's Response: The silence is response enough hahaha Thank you for reviewing ;)
Date: 08/12/12 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
You know how I feel... *blush*.
This was so freaking sweet and cute and... hot. *whispers*
Just got to love your lighthearted fics, they never let me down. :D
But that vreastfeeding... unf... ;)
Author's Response: I've been playing around with the idea of a sort of sequel, or follow-up, to this story... but I feel like it'd be even weirder and just plain disgusting.
Date: 08/08/12 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
How exhausted exactly did Princess make Bill? What's funny now is that I'm wearing a t-shirt that has "Princess" and a crown on it. ;)
Tom is so sweet to take care of Bill. Now, off to read the one by ADSNEW (an abbreviated version of her username because)
Author's Response: Princess made Bill very tired. Like how tired you'd be after a full day of running around with Chester and Lucas and Tommy boy. And it's good that you have a princess t-shirt. You deserve it. I hope you enjoyed the other story too :P
Date: 08/08/12 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Soooo adorable! But I'm sort of confused about if Bill is the same age, or actually I little kid, cause he sucks his thumb and he didn't speak. But still! If he was 22 that would just make it even cuter! SOOOO CUTE!
Author's Response: I guess I never really clarified, (sorry about that) but he and Tom are both supposed to be 22 (or almost 23 I guess at this point) here. The only reason Bill didn't talk is because I just think he's cuter when he's a little more submissive.
Date: 08/07/12 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
omfg, let me die, so hot. ekmrwfkemeq. I love it!
Author's Response: I maaaaaay or may not be contemplating making a sequel to this. Either writing another chapter, or else making a series of one shots. I'm not sure, so I don't want to make any promises. But thank you for reading! :D
Date: 08/07/12 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
D'aww that's kind of cute and adorable... Just to let you know, it would be 'Teat' not Teet in this case for the title.
Other than that, I loved it!