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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/19 04:05 am Title: Chapter 30

this was a really good story!!

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/14 12:40 am Title: Chapter 25

It was such an interesting experience to read this chapter once again, three years in between. I could have sworn that Bill's part was chapter 26 before and the content was different as well. Or I may just remember it wrong. The same piece, the same eyes,a totslly new experience.
I am happy you posted again:)
I would love to see the rest of Interlude too. Thanks anyway!And Happy New Year 2014!

Reviewer: Jiminy Crispies Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/13 06:20 am Title: Chapter 25

I am so sorry for your loss.

Author's Response: Thank you. It wasn't recent, but your words mean a lot this time of year. Happy New Year to you!

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/13 10:58 pm Title: “We have no comments at this time…”

What they have been through is life changing no doubt and there will be challenges to their mental well being and how they deal with what they have seen and learned. IT will be hard and it will be painful at times. I feel like they are all stronger for this and that with time they will recover. The thing is... they need to talk to eachother if no one els. They need time. Time on their own, time to reconnect with their own person and time to I guess reintroduce themselves to eachother. It's ok to be angry and scared and not know what to think. Loss is difficult. In this case the loss of childhood innocence and the loss of friends. Fighting for survival changes you in ways that can't be measured but when you finally do find yourslef again, It's amazing who you've become :)

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/13 02:41 pm Title: “We have no comments at this time…”

I wished SO much for update. And when I saw today there are UPDATES I was in seventh heaven :D

I missed the story, I haven't read it before so I was impatient to know what will happen next.

It's perfect.

Thank you for sharing it with us, I really love it.

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/13 02:27 pm Title: Out of the Woods

I love this story. That's all I wanted to say.

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/13 12:36 pm Title: “We have no comments at this time…”

Omg no! When I finally thought everything would be ok... This had to happen! Thnx for updating btw xd

Reviewer: Layla TokioVanity Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/13 10:17 pm Title: “We have no comments at this time…”

I'm so happy this story got updated!!! Love the chapter and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/13 01:10 am Title: The Beginning of the End

Please tell me you're going to finish this!

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 10:10 am Title: The Beginning of the End

Yes!! Georg is better! ..well, better xd just Bill now!

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/13 11:45 pm Title: The Beginning of the End

This was an amazing chapter. The emotion the connection with all four of them was so clear. I really liked the last section with all of them in Bill's room togheter each linked together by more than just being band mates or just friends. They are bound for life haveing done all they could to save eachother.

Bill....I always thought he would be the one to make the hardest and most sacrificing desisions. He has proved himself to everyone and hopefully himself in the end that he has more strength than anyone. The bond between he and Tom is true and will always be even in a fan fiction. I truly hope he can recover from this. He has a will of steal and Tom knows it. So this is my encouregement to Bill to keep going. Take the time you need to rest and come back. YOu deserve it :)

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/13 11:34 pm Title: The Beginning of the End

this was a good chapter!!
i hope bill will get better!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/13 10:50 pm Title: The Beginning of the End

Wow! Amazing, this made me cry. Great writing! I really hope Bill makes it :-(

Reviewer: Jiminy Crispies Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/13 03:51 pm Title: The Beginning of the End

I think it's fabulous that you continue this story beyond their initial rescue, as this is tugging at all my heart strings just as much as their previous struggles did.

All the guys' individual voices and characteristics are written very well. I have no problem at all following whose point of view you're writing from, even when you switch from one to the other within the same chapter.

Patiently waiting for the next one now... :) Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/13 03:31 pm Title: The Beginning of the End

Beautiful chapter, I almost cried, what is a big thing. I love this story.

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/13 03:27 pm Title: The Beginning of the End

Billlllll awww wake uppppp!!!!!! :(((

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/13 05:22 pm Title: Holding Pattern

Thank you that you let them live.

This chapter was so.... intense again. At first I did a quick reading because I needed to know if they all survived, asap.

And then, after the last sentence, I read it again and enjoyed it without all the anxiety I had by the first reading.

Great chapter, thanks.

Reviewer: Jiminy Crispies Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/13 03:17 pm Title: Departure

Holy...! I was at the edge of my seat for pretty much all chapters of this. The quality of this story - and the suspense therein - is unbelievable.

Can't wait for the next update. And thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/13 11:57 am Title: Holding Pattern

Yes, yes, yeeeesss! They survived!!

Reviewer: LizzieK Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/13 01:03 pm Title: Departure

I just read all the chapters, and I have to say that you're really talented! Love the story plot too. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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