Date: 03/17/25 02:16 pm Title: Sweet.
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 08/02/19 07:44 pm Title: Sweet.
this was a good story!
Date: 08/10/12 07:09 pm Title: Sweet.
Awww, that was so cute!
Actually the whole idea of Bill sucking Tom's thumb is so adorable and somehow a bit sexy, too. The sex scene - sucking om's cock - was hot, too, but my ultimate favorite is that thumb sucking.
I guess Tom had a tough choiose: a wailing brother or a thumb sucking brother. ;)
Author's Response: It would not be a hard choice for me! Imagine cute little Bill sucking on your thumb; aww. Thank you for the review!
Date: 08/05/12 09:37 pm Title: Sweet.
Great! Thanks for letting me know; I'm looking forward to seeing it! :D
Author's Response: You're in luck! I just started writing it! Please can we email the next time we talk, though? I'm a bit OCD about my reviews and don't like having conversations here xD Thanks.
Date: 08/05/12 06:32 pm Title: Sweet.
Oh, yes, I really liked the cute parts. I found them adorable! Sorry, I forgot that it was a prequel to 'Sensitive'! I'd like a sequel to Sensitive :D But anything you write, I'm sure it would be great!
Author's Response: Well there will definitely be an addition to the series sometime soon!
Date: 08/05/12 04:03 am Title: Sweet.
nice story!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/05/12 12:08 am Title: Sweet.
WoW! First of all, I'm really really flattered! You actually dedicated this wonderful and pretty story to me! I mean, I knew that you were going to write a new one-shot, but I've never thought that you were going to write it for me! That's amazing; thank you so very much!!!
I've seen this prompt on Live Journal and actually I wished that somebody would write this story. I'm so glad you did it! It's just so sweet and sexy as well with some very amusing scenes.
I find Bill's habit very gentle and innocent and I loved it when Tom behaved so nice with his little brother and took care of him (he hugged him and whispered sweet words in his ear.) Also, I liked it when you said that Tom only used to have that feeling when he'd look at a hot girl BEFORE he’d fallen in love with his twin. It's so nice of him that he gave up dating girls when he figured out he loved his brother. And Bill was just so childish and innocent in this fluffy story; my heart almost melted as I read it! He was funny as well, but I think that he didn't always figure that he wasn't saying (or doing) the things he should. I mean... he said such things: "They’re not just rumours. We kiss all the time!" Haha! very funny and sweet!
But he also managed to look a little 'fierce', cocky, bold and seductive, mature. Especially when he was getting ready to give his twin a blow job. I laughed when I read this: "Your twin brother is about to suck you off, remember?" I adored the way Tom imagined his little brother before he sucked him: "Bill’s glossy lips around the tip of his cock, his innocent eyes staring up at him to make sure he was pleasing his big brother." That was just great!
Another awesome thing was that the thought that he was fucking his twins' mouth made Tom even hornier. It makes me horny as well to think about them doing 'forbidden' things together. Especially because they're twins, I think. :)
It was funny when Bill made those puppy eyes and when he convinced his brother to take him home after he started crying in public. I mean, how can I not laugh when I read such a saying: "Sorry, my disabled brother is a little tired." LoL! Also, I found it sweet but amusing, too when Bill innocently asked: "You don’t like me sucking your thumb?"
This story was so pretty and well written, I also liked all this 'thumb thing.' I'm still very flattered and I don't really know how to thank you for writing this (and dedicating it to me, of course!)
PS: Bill's tongue piercing is definitely one of the hottest things ever; I loved your description of it (thanks to you, now it wouldn't ever leave my mind again - not that I want to... Poor Tom, he would have to think about that perfect moment which happened between his twin and him every single time Bill would open his mouth and make his piercing visible!) I liked how his lip gloss smeared Tom's cock and how he crawled cat-like in the end of the story (I find it very hot when Bill is on all his fours!) I liked how you ended it (with Tom's thumb still in Bill's mouth - amazing!)
You left Bill unsatisfied, though (I know that he only wanted to make Tom happy, but...) I think that he deserves a sexy treat as well :) I'd be glad if you thought about a sequel!
I really love the way you write, you really have potential, you're talented! Thanks again!! *hugs*
Author's Response: Wow, this is the longest review I have ever received! Maybe it's just as long as the story xD I'm so glad you liked it, and I'm glad you liked the cute parts too because I worried I had over-done it on the cute! Speaking of cute, it's so cute how you noticed all the little details like Bill being a bit of an idiot and saying the wrong thing! But he is super adorable! About the sequel, this is the prequel to 'Sensetive' so Bill DOES get satisfied ;) I'm considering whether to write a story set in between Suck and Sensetive next, or after Sensetive. I don't know which one to choose. Anyway, I'm so happy you liked it! Thanks for the incredible review o:rn
Date: 08/04/12 01:32 pm Title: Sweet.
That was very cute/funny/hot. Job well done!!
10/10
*****
Author's Response: Thanks! c:
