Date: 11/05/12 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
This was a very nice little fanfic! But you got some german grammar mistakes ;P
Don't worry, you did a good job!
We'll see us on interpals!
Date: 08/23/12 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm so glad the guys had a rest from the concert. I would kill for a sauna right now! :D Anyway, I enjoyed this story very much. If you don't find it too forward of me, if you need a beta, I'd be happy to help you for future stories. Just let me know. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for comments! As i'm not native in English there probably is grammatical mistakes. When i have my next story ready to publish, i may contact you for help:)
Date: 08/23/12 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lina seems like a really sweet girl. Trust Tom to get his dreads wet. :) This was another good chapter and now I'm on to the next one. :)
Date: 08/23/12 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Other than a few grammatical and spelling errors this is a good start. I can hardly wait to see what David has in store for them. :)