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Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/14 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

I hope there will be more in this story, because I really love it

Reviewer: SierenH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/11/12 02:06 am Title: Chapter 2

looking forward ot more

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/12 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1

Continue...please!

Reviewer: ladyfarcly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/12 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

yup lets see more

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/12 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

nice :) really can't wait when everything will move forward.

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/12 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

You did really well for your first fanfic. Bill seems really sweet and kind of innocent. But Tom actually seems a bit uncaring when he tells Bill off over the phone, even though he tells Bill he loves him. I can't wait to find out what this surprise is. You should definitely continue.

Author's Response: Thank you ^^ Yeah... erm.. it wasn't my intention to make Tom sound uncaring :/ but I guess with time I'll learn how to express the right emotions on paper :P Thanks again for the review :)

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