Date: 10/02/14 10:09 pm Title: Uncovered
I really like this story but I don't think therapists are like that in real life. :)
Date: 10/17/12 05:32 am Title: Uncovered
Cute fic. It reminds me of one huge run-on sentence at times, as if u just stuck stuff in there to fill up space; but at the same time, I liked reading it too, so that's what counts. Lol. I liked that you built up Tom's emotions, and I loved his therapy sessions where he's confused, hehe, and the ending was adorable. :) You scared me at the end of the second chapter, so I'm super happy that there was a happy ending and Tom finally told Bill and they made up. The first kiss was so cute. Oh, and I can totally understand stuff you don't mean to say flying out of your mouth like with the twins- so for that, and a few other reasons, I think you made your characters feel like real people. I liked this fic. I don't think it was perfect, and with a bit of editing I think it could be a huge tear-jerker *evil laugh*, but I did really like reading it. Thank you for writing this. I love your twins, and I'm so glad they're ok in the end!! :)
Last notes....
1. The random German phrases were annoying and unnecessary.
2. I miss Bill's long sexy dreadlocks too. Lol.
Author's Response: Well, in my opinion I like the German phrases, hence the reason why they were put there in the first place, but I'm glad you liked the story.
Date: 10/07/12 01:39 am Title: Changes
I like this story a lot, but why this german all of sudden? which language where they talking, if occasionaly they are adding "nein”? wasn't it supposed to be german all the time?
Author's Response: Thanks, and the language they were talking in was English with a few sentences and words in German, I did that because I'm American and I don't know German that well and in my stories I have them speak German when they're serious about something, sorry if it confused you.
Date: 10/03/12 10:16 pm Title: Uncovered
Very sweet ending and very easy to visualize. Nice job:D
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad I finally finished it ^^
Date: 08/08/12 09:43 pm Title: Disaster
Just wanted to say I am loving the story right now, although the German is a bit off.
To say go away, you simply say 'geh weg' and 'kein gespraech' means no conversation.
Other than that, I think it's a fab story- really interesting. Keep up the good work xxx
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll change the translations and I'll hopefully have the next chapter posted in a week ^^
Date: 08/05/12 10:43 am Title: Disaster
Updaaaaate!!! I hate cliffhangers...):
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter and I'll try to update as soon as I can :)
Date: 08/05/12 04:35 am Title: Disaster
nice story!
i hope bill is ok!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try to post the next chapter soon ^^
Date: 08/04/12 06:05 pm Title: Disaster
Cliffhangers are cruel... please update soon. Love this story:D
Author's Response: Thank you :) Cliffhangers are fun to write but hated when you're the one reading, so I know what you're talking about, and I'll try to update within a week ^^
Date: 08/01/12 05:42 pm Title: Changes
Excellent. I love the concept of this story and your writing style; cannot wait to read more:D
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'll try to finish the next chapter soon ^^
Date: 08/01/12 01:31 am Title: Changes
this sounds like a really good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try post the next chapter soon ^^