Date: 10/04/12 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 7: Sick Little Games.
....WHAT ABOUT BILL!?!? Poor guy. =[ Everyone has had a chance with Quinn, except for him.
Author's Response: Ohhhhh, you don't know that. (x Lol. Thanks for the review. (:
Date: 10/04/12 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 7: Sick Little Games.
stupid Tom! just tell her! and what about Dein? no more begging?
poor Bill...must be really hard for him...and poor Liam, he has no clue!sorry for not reading this sooner but i just moved and idon't have internet access yet...sorry!!!!!!!!
waiting for more!
Author's Response: Hahaha, everyone in the story has their own growing up to do, don't they ? :o And don't even worry about it, it's totally fine. (: Thanks for the review !
Date: 10/04/12 12:48 am Title: Chapter 7: Sick Little Games.
PS: I think everyone wants Quinn to get with Bill ;)
I know I do ;)
He's a better match for her than Dein ;)
I HATE Dein lol
Author's Response: Ohhhh, we'll see. (x lol
Date: 10/04/12 12:44 am Title: Chapter 7: Sick Little Games.
I thought Dein slept with Vanessa not Veronica?
I'm just wondering because it's says Veronica in this chapter but says Vanessa in the 2nd chapter? I'm kinda confused lol.
But other than that, you've done an amazing job so far, I love this series so much. After reading 'The Hearts of Lonely People' I was hoping you'd do a sequel then I saw 'What Comes Around, Goes Around' and I (No Joke) got up from my chair and danced around my living room. I was so happy lol :) Update soon
Author's Response: Omfg, you're right !!! I meant to write Vanessa not Veronica. Ahh, thanks for noticing that. :o Hahahahaha, aweeee thank you. (':
Date: 10/03/12 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 7: Sick Little Games.
Omg it's getting better!! I can't wait till the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Awe, thank you !! I'm glad you think so. :D
Date: 10/03/12 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 7: Sick Little Games.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I just wrote a LONG review but it deleted! BLAHHHH I guess back to square one! Haha.
Okay so lets start off with... MY HEAD IS SPINNING WITH ANGER! AHHHHHHHH. I hate Dein so much for that!!!! Yeah Quinn shouldn't have brought Liam but so what!? The whole time she didn't even show interest in Liam! But Dein had to flirt with Lucy! UGHHH LUCY!!! I hate her too. Yeah I can understand why she would want to get back at Tom but do that to Quinn!!!!? That's like so many levels of fucked up!!!!! She KNEW Quinn wasn't over Dein but she had to flirt with him anyway! Poor Tom! He always get messed over no matter what! ): And then the way Dein and Lucy walked away from Bill!!!!! That is why I really hate them at the moment! THAT was so rude and fucked up! I feel so bad for Bill he likes Quinn but can't tell her because he's scared UGHHHHHH I still think Bill is best for Quinn even though I have this feeling he had something to do with what happened with Dein and Veronica. Who knows though I may be over analyzing! Either way I still feel him and Quinn would be the cutest couple ever! Even though I know Quinn doesn't feel that way about him. If anything I think she would date Bill just to make Dein Jealous! But who knows!!! I may just be over thinking it! But seriously Dein and Lucy are on my hate list at the moment! And I don't think they'll be coming of any time soon haha. I think I shared my thoughts very well! :D Thanks for the chapter! Update soon!!! :)
Author's Response: Omfg, this is the longest review I've ever gotten. (': I'm quite fond of your review, lol. Hahaha, I knew everyone was gonna turn against Dein after that, and Lucy too. >.< As for Quinn, I've been debating on who she should end up with, but I just can't decide. D: I think I'll just decide as I come up with the story. (x You said she should date Bill to make Dein jealous, and I was thinking about that BUT, that wouldn't be fair to Bill. Soo that's why I can't decide who she should go for. :o Anyways, I need to quit ranting before I give something away !
Date: 10/03/12 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 7: Sick Little Games.
they all need to get to gether with their significate other and talk it out , then they MIGHT work things out .. i bet veronica saw quin so pretented to ajust her close to give quin the wrong impresion . i bet he was 2 drunk to do anything . hurry and post next chapter .
Author's Response: You make very good points. (: Thank you for the review ! And I'll try to write a bit tomorrow when I get home from school !! :p
Date: 10/01/12 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 6: Misery.
Hahaha. Bill saying, "Fuck your couch, you bitches!" just kills me. XD And oooooh God. I hope Tom just straight up punches Dein in the face and yells at Lucy. I know he broke up with her and everything, but she's being shady. And Bill needs to grow a pair and tell Quinn that he wants her.
Author's Response: Hahahahahaha, I say that all the time with my friends. XD Hehehe, there is some drama coming up, that's all I gotta say. (x
Date: 10/01/12 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 6: Misery.
oh wow , thought Dein was in lov with Quin why would he kiss Lucy .( maybe they working together to make their other halves jealous) . ooooooohhhhh please update real soon .
Author's Response: Because he is being a douche, that's way. >.< I will try to update asap !!
Date: 10/01/12 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 5: Aftermath.
aaaaaaaawwwwww (so sad that Tom and Quin won`t get together , was hoping at the beginning(
so they all going away together , that should be fun .
Author's Response: Sorrrrrry, I had already said from the first story that they wouldn't be getting together. :o Haha, yup. Lots of fun. (x
Date: 10/01/12 11:55 am Title: Chapter 6: Misery.
Say whatttttt?????? lol update soon! Please must find out what happens lol
Author's Response: Hehehe. (x I'll try to update soon, thank you for the review !
Date: 10/01/12 11:31 am Title: Chapter 6: Misery.
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! ARGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHVSGASJSNSISNAJSJDBGHEJWLAKSBDHSB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I swear through lord almighty I was gonna scream so loud right now! Buts it 1:30am in the morning and my parents would probably think someone broke into my room and I am screaming for bloody murder as well as rape.
BUT ARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! *dies*
Grrrrrrrrrr! *grumble while lies on the floor face down in the dark* stupid Lucy and Dein...ruin everything the pricks *mumbles angrily some more*
Author's Response: Hahahahahahahahahahahaha, omg. XD This made my day !! Thank you for reviewing !
Date: 10/01/12 10:19 am Title: Chapter 6: Misery.
That did not just happen! Please tell me im only having a nightmare...ugh! I liked lucy): dein you fucktard! Poor tom and quinn having to go through with this...i wonder what will happen next.
Author's Response: It did ! :o I wasn't even expecting it to happen, I was kinda debating on whether I should have them kiss or not, I thought a lot about it. Lol, and obviously I had them kiss. (x Just remember that all that I write is for an important reason following the next chapter. :p Omg, I'm ranting now... >.< Thank you for reviewing. (:
Date: 10/01/12 02:34 am Title: Chapter 6: Misery.
Yup I am dead..... ): I FORGOT ABOUT LIAM AHHHHHHHH now I have me issues than last time! Ahhhhhhh I don't like Dein or Lucy anymore. The others should leave them there and make them find their way back!!!! afdljkfjsadlfkdsjflds;kfj;dslakfkjkdsghjo I seriously am screaming on the inside!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHH! Poor Quinn! Poor Tom! Poor Liam! Poor Bill!!!!! I am just WOW!! Lucy and Dein!??!?!?! BLAHHHHHHHH! I definately think Bill is the most deserving of Quinn at the moment! I may make them my OTP for this story! :D (even though I know they won't end up together haha)
Author's Response: Hahaha, I warned you !! >.< But you never know, anyone could end up getting together. :o
Date: 09/29/12 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 5: Aftermath.
lakejfaklsfjdkla. ....That's all I have to say about that.
Author's Response: ajsdkjfaksjdkasdjfads back at'cha. :o
Date: 09/29/12 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 5: Aftermath.
Omgggggggggggg!!!! More more more! I wanna see how tom reacts to lucy and how quinn reacts to dein and how bill is going to feel with him there and all since they both like her!!!(: psh tom does care. hes just saying that.
Author's Response: More you will get.... Later. (x Lol, sounds like drama is coming their way, huh ? :p
Date: 09/29/12 10:53 am Title: Chapter 5: Aftermath.
'invite her, I don't care.'...who he thinks he is kidding!!??he doesn't care!
please more Tom!i love him! and i really want to see him with Lucy!please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok...i'll cut it of...
waiting...
Author's Response: Haha, right ?! xD You'll have to wait for that ! Thanks for reviewing. :D
Date: 09/29/12 10:18 am Title: Chapter 5: Aftermath.
YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!!! *jumps up and down with joy* a get away! Oh I am loving the sound of where this is going.
I really wann slap Dein in the face for the knowledge of what he has done. But is it bad that I prefer him with her over Bill. But Bill deserves to be happy too! I hope he gets his. Gosh, I am just to see what is gonna happen now. ^_^
Author's Response: I know, I'm liking the sound of that too. (x I've already got some crazy ideas for it. ;D And nah, not bat at all that you prefer Dein. Bill will get some loving, I can't have him be miserable. D: Thanks so much for the review. (:
Date: 09/29/12 02:09 am Title: Chapter 5: Aftermath.
POOR BILL!!! Lol. Why!!! Now I am all lost because I loved the Dein and Quinn pairing BUT then Bill says he likes Quinn and then I'm all AWEE but Quinn likes Dein and my head is all BLAHHHH! ): Bill needs Love Too!!! Haha.
Author's Response: Hahaha, looks like we have a little bit of a love triangle. (x Bill will get some loving, I promise !
Date: 09/21/12 11:19 am Title: Chapter 4: Mercy.
HOLY EFFING CRAP OF MOTHER EARTH!!!!
You girl just dropped a frickin bomb and left me hanging onto with but a shred for my dear life!! Why do you love to torture me so?
Boy this is gonna be the most awkward situations ever! Quinn is working it up! Three guys? COME ON!
In regards with Tom and Lucy. Make out session was needed, I just wanna lock those two in a closet and not let them out till he has said what needs to be said.
MAN UP TOMI!!
Author's Response: Hahahaha, cus I'm evilllllll. >:) Quinn's a hottie, to be honest. ;D Lol. I thought it was needed too and haha, maybe they will get locked up in a closet. You never know. (x Thanks for your fabulous review. It definitely made up the shitty day I had at school !