Date: 11/01/13 04:31 am Title: Chapter 15: Cry
umm hello!! she should envelope him in ahug and kiss..since you seem to not want to write anymore this story i think you should finish it..let her accept him the man is clearly in love with her....pleaseee and updateeee :(
Date: 11/01/13 04:25 am Title: Chapter 14: El Nido Palawan (Part 1)
aww nooo dont hit it and quit it :( keep goinnnnn :( I was expecting for Grace to hit Tomin the face with the vollebay when she served :P but no i face wa sliterally like O__O when you made her get hit all those times :P mean person!!
Date: 11/01/13 04:13 am Title: Chapter 13: Can't
oh man oh man he is being kinda cold and such like emotionless...like oh you could have denied the rose pfft how can he say that after she gave him her vajayjay jeez..
Date: 11/01/13 04:01 am Title: Chapter 12: The American Breakfast
no,no pregers just noo to cliche :p
Date: 11/01/13 03:53 am Title: Chapter 11: Tonight and Tomorrow
omg why did he leave..he was so happy afterwards why didnt she have to act that way..she knows damnw ell what happened jeez ughh poor tommy must be sad...damn you Grace. :P
Date: 11/01/13 03:45 am Title: Chapter 10: Bill, Dates and a Douche Bag
oh man they just ahve a weird chemistry and relationship..i dont think i could ever be that way withtom in real life i would just be like sjgaejfjjdagbadfqw SHY hahaaha..come ooon you would too! no way in hell youd have balls like grace :P
Date: 11/01/13 03:28 am Title: Chapter 9: Disgusting
“You’re so fucking hot.” He fanned himself, so gay
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ahahahahahah XD ahhahahah XD
Date: 11/01/13 03:17 am Title: Chapter 8: Fall
nooo...no riaaa dont ruin it jeez...and omg omggggg so tom likes it when shes abusive or mean huh? kinky lil bastard loljk jk
Date: 11/01/13 03:03 am Title: Chapter 7: The Night Gown
aww tom was affected by it niceeee omg cant wait for him to take her with him haha :P so excitedddd..
Date: 11/01/13 02:53 am Title: Chapter 6: Banana
“You have disgusting muscles, yuck.” I pretended to be gagging, I didn’t want him to have the satisfaction of knowing that I liked his muscles, shit , did I just say I liked his muscles?!
“Sure, sure you’re disgusted.” He smiled again before opening the door and coming in. ASSHOLE.
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they are just so cute i lold at that one XD poor Grace left with no plate :P
Date: 11/01/13 02:40 am Title: Chapter 5: Tom!!!
omyyyy so wait she saw tom while she was still in the forest??? :/ me no get it...
Date: 11/01/13 02:32 am Title: Chapter 4: The Retarded Asshole
omggg he chose her haha..its because she just so unique and just herself..grace is awesomeeee
Date: 11/01/13 02:12 am Title: Chapter 3: Douche bag Bachelor
Tom really is a dick ughh
Date: 11/01/13 01:46 am Title: Chapter 2: Almost there...
omg omg its startiiiing :D and yea let Tom be a celebrity bachelor...it will be fun!! is there such thing as a Celebrity Bachelor??
Date: 11/01/13 01:24 am Title: Introduction: The Bachelor... hell!
i just found tis story aww this seems so exciting on to the next chappie :D
Date: 10/05/13 02:34 am Title: Chapter 15: Cry
Please update. The wait is killing me slowly!!
Date: 09/18/13 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 15: Cry
Stay stay stay stay of course!!!! She can't be that evil specially towards Tom!! She MUST stay!!!
Date: 08/27/13 10:35 am Title: Chapter 15: Cry
OMG nag update si karbs ko! I'm sorry super late reader mo na ako :D must read this!!!! (hahaha nireview ko muna bago ko basahin hahaha) Please continue this karibal! I'm still reading het ~
Date: 08/11/13 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 15: Cry
OMG wat should she do ??? she should wrap her arms around him and comfort him !!!!! please update soon .
Date: 08/11/13 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 14: El Nido Palawan (Part 1)
OF COURSE U SHOULD CARRY ON . OF COURSE WE WANT MORE LOVE SCENES!!!!!!!
this is coming along nicely , please carry on . lov this story .