Date: 10/08/12 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 9: Disgusting
Really, it's amazing! If you ever need help, I'd be glad to do it ^^ editing, ideas, etc. Keep up the amazng wok ! :D
Date: 10/06/12 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 9: Disgusting
Lol Tom. I?m happy for the update. Can?t wait to read more.
Date: 10/06/12 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 9: Disgusting
hahahahah , wat a chapter , loved it . please update soon . hope the date goes as funny as the "time" in the care .
Author's Response: thank you for the review love you :)
Date: 09/21/12 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 8: Fall
WOW..., just wow. This is a remarably unique story. It's written in a very personal perspective that one can relate to and is also what draws the reader in begging for more, inticing the reader. Absolutly one of the best!
Author's Response: OMGGG! I LOVE YOU ALREADDDYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD hahahahahahahaahhaha thank you!! I'll do my best to update this weeek!! :) OMG!
Date: 09/20/12 11:07 am Title: Chapter 8: Fall
The story is great I really enjoy it a lot :) and PLEASE NO RIA :p
Date: 09/16/12 05:26 am Title: Chapter 8: Fall
no?? :D:D
please update sooooon :)
cant wait for moooore :)
Date: 09/16/12 02:54 am Title: Chapter 8: Fall
nooooo RIA PLEASE hahahah!
Date: 09/16/12 12:37 am Title: Chapter 8: Fall
ooooooohhhh he kissed her , good for him . she is beginning to care for him but won`t admit it .hope Tom doesn`t give her the rose , i want to see hope this relationship works . please update soon .
Date: 09/15/12 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 8: Fall
no ria please
Date: 09/15/12 05:51 pm Title: Introduction: The Bachelor... hell!
No ria. Love the story!
Date: 09/15/12 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 8: Fall
Love it!
Date: 09/15/12 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 8: Fall
NO
Date: 09/15/12 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 8: Fall
Lmaooo I just love grace she's so crazy!!!!
What a twist if ria came storming in like Tom wtf r u doing its happened that bachelors have not really been truly single!!!
Date: 09/15/12 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 8: Fall
Im glad u updatet! I really like this story :) it your story but if it was up to me, I would not want ria in the story :)
Date: 09/15/12 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 8: Fall
i like ria but i guess we have enough of cheetah..so no ria xD
Date: 09/03/12 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Night Gown
This is so good lol. Can? wait for the update.
Author's Response: I will try to make an update !!! on friday or tomorrow.. or today.. thank you so much for reviewing :)
Date: 09/03/12 03:35 pm Title: Introduction: The Bachelor... hell!
He vomited on her lmaoooo
Author's Response: yuck! hahahaah
Date: 09/02/12 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Night Gown
wow he was so jealous he got himself drunk. can`t wait for the next update , please soon .
Date: 09/02/12 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Night Gown
yuck yuck yuck!!!!!
More More More!!!!!
Author's Response: yeah! but if the man who vomited on my is Tom kaulitz.. then it's fine hahahaha
Date: 09/02/12 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Night Gown
wow!!!!! hhahahahahahah tom is funny hahahaha
cant wait for moooooore :)
please update sooooon :)