Date: 11/24/12 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 11: Tonight and Tomorrow
Madame! I've copied the chapter and I'm gonna read it. I am ready hahahaha! =)
Date: 11/22/12 05:44 am Title: Chapter 11: Tonight and Tomorrow
stupid grace! tom is sooo in love he doesnt even know that xD
Date: 11/21/12 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 11: Tonight and Tomorrow
Tom devirginized Grace!!!what!!!!!!!!!
good chapter anyway...hahaha...while Im reading this ,,,Im sewing,,,hahahaha.....good that i didn't prick myself,,,hahahaha...
Author's Response: si jolaaaaaaas!!!!!!!!!! i love you :D hahahahaa
Date: 11/21/12 02:02 am Title: Chapter 11: Tonight and Tomorrow
OH Y GOD!!!! WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY DO YOU HAVE TO PUT A CLIFF HANGER???!!!??? Its okay but i think she was so upset because she was a virgin. I don't know, because i'm not the one writing the story. BUT, thats what i think i dont know. And PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the next chapter soon.
Date: 11/21/12 01:33 am Title: Chapter 11: Tonight and Tomorrow
Update quick, maybe from Tom's perspective? loving the drama!
Date: 11/21/12 12:47 am Title: Chapter 11: Tonight and Tomorrow
wow great , great chapter , loved it .i knew that once she woke up she would be mad at Tom .( she let the alchol take over , so glad ) She doesn`t HATE Tom , deep down she LOVES him , can`t wait until she realizes it . lol . please update soon
Date: 11/20/12 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 11: Tonight and Tomorrow
cant wait for a new chapter!! So good!
Date: 11/20/12 11:25 am Title: Chapter 11: Tonight and Tomorrow
really really cant wait for mooooooore :)
Date: 11/20/12 09:48 am Title: Chapter 11: Tonight and Tomorrow
Omg!!!! Plz dont wait that long before u update again
Date: 11/15/12 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 10: Bill, Dates and a Douche Bag
Awesomee!! I think grace needs to stop putting a front and give in to the sexy tom kaulitz hehe :)
Date: 11/14/12 11:41 am Title: Chapter 10: Bill, Dates and a Douche Bag
i love this part , “You! Arrogant, bastard, just-because-you-re-rich-you-think-you-can-buy anything, assho---” hahaha...IDK why>>>
Date: 10/25/12 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 3: Douche bag Bachelor
Lets hear it for Tom's speech, brilliant lol, he's such a good liar :)
Well she doesn't like him at all does she, but i think that'll be why he likes her in the end, she's the only one who couldn't care less who he was and wanted absolutely nothing to do with him.
I'm guessing that Tom doesn't like that in the slightest, (it does seem he likes attention after all) and so does everything in his power to get her...much to her dismay.
Thats my theory on this done, and can i just say i love your pictures! :)
Date: 10/25/12 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 2: Almost there...
After all that here's my actual review of chapter two.
You'd think that even though the girl got thrown into that bet against her will, she'd want to do it well and not give her friend the satisfaction of thinking she couldn't cope with it... but instead she got really angry with everyone and stormed off, oh well maybe our "Annoying Playboy" will change her mind.
Speaking of Tom XD i felt really sorry for him just now, there he is just thinking of the positives... 35 dates in a row and exposure for Tokio Hotel and yet everyones shouting at him lol
(Don't worry i still think Bill is right, i just had to take things from his perspective cos it made me go "Awww" lol)
Wasn't it a nice moment when Bill (literally) picked him up from the bar and said "i'm sorry." i had visions of him batting his eyelids and everything, HAHA!
I wonder what'll happen now.
Author's Response: I NOW OFFICIALLY LOVE YOU :) :*
Date: 10/25/12 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 2: Almost there...
Okay as i said i'm coming back to read more later but i just thought of something i forgot to include in my first review, I love the new banner you put up yesterday, i hope you can fix it and put it back up, it'll be a shame if nobody gets to see it. :)
I'll be back later
Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing! hahaha and oh your effort is.. wow... thank you so much for the effort in reviewing! :)
Date: 10/25/12 02:27 pm Title: Introduction: The Bachelor... hell!
i'll do it! :)
i've never watched it but if this ever happened i'd have to strongly consider it...and applying! XD
okay now for my review. I only just found this story tonight but i'm loving it already, i couldn't stop laughing all the way through it was so funny, I'll come back to read the rest.
I only hope Bill can cope with what's about to happen, he's either about to bang his head against a wall in dispair or just go for it and murder Tom right there in the living room lol
Date: 10/24/12 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 10: Bill, Dates and a Douche Bag
wow Tom kissed her to shut her up , well thats his excuse anyway .he really likes her and doesn`t know wat to do because she supposely hates him ( NOT) can`t wait for next update , please soon .
Author's Response: thank you!! hahahaah love the review :)
Author's Response: thank you!! hahahaah love the review :)
Date: 10/24/12 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 10: Bill, Dates and a Douche Bag
Grace cracks my shit up lol. I can?t wait for an update.
Date: 10/24/12 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 10: Bill, Dates and a Douche Bag
More!!!!
Date: 10/24/12 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 10: Bill, Dates and a Douche Bag
wow :)
cant wait for mooooore :)
please update soooon :)
Date: 10/23/12 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 9: Disgusting
whew!!!!Tom!!!!Oh my G!!!!!
So excited for the next chapter!!!!