Date: 08/09/12 09:02 am Title: Chapter 6: Banana
thanks for updating soonn!!!! IT WAS A VERY FUNNY CHAPTER HA HA...SHE'S FELLING DRAWN TO HIM...IT'S GETTING MORE AND MORE INTERESTING...
Date: 08/09/12 07:52 am Title: Chapter 6: Banana
good chapter , loved it . she cares for him , she`s just don`t it yet LOL . please update soon .
Date: 08/09/12 06:03 am Title: Chapter 6: Banana
greate cha[ter :)
cant wai for mooooore :)
please update sooooon :)
Date: 08/09/12 03:11 am Title: Chapter 6: Banana
I would've slapped him and then stole the plate while he was distracted while muttering asshole. And if he tried touching my plate again I'd slap him and tell him, "Touch my plate and this food won't be the only thing my teeth will sink into." But knowing him, he would probably take that as a suggestive thing. But anyways.. HIS MUSCLES.!!! AHHH.!!! CAN YOU IMAGINE WRAPPING YOUR HANDS AROUND THEM.!!!! OH MY GOD.!!! SO JEALOUS RIGHT NOW.!!! I swear he is one of THE hottest people on this planet.! God what I would give just to simple MEET him.! Ahh.! But I can't wait for more.! I'm kind of waiting for Grace to kick Cheetah's ass. Lol. I definitely can't wait for that part. Haha. Love it.! x)
Author's Response: wait for it... hahaahah...... come! Let's kick cheetah's ass for Grace !!!
Date: 08/06/12 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 5: Tom!!!
aaaawwww did Tom rescue her , i hope so . can`t wait for next update .
Date: 08/06/12 11:04 pm Title: Introduction: The Bachelor... hell!
this is getting better and better ! I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATES...MAYBE IT WOULD BE A GOOD IDEA TO MAKE THEM TALK ALONE, TOM FLIRTY ADVANCES HER, DOING SMART-ASS REMARKS...KISSING HER NCK, ETC...AND WHEN THEY ARE SURROUNDED BY THE OTHER GIRLS HE COULD HIDELY TOUCH HER OR LOOK AT HER, ETC YOU KNOW...SETTING THE SCENE OF AN INCREASING SEXUAL TENSION...I MEAN THSE ARE SOME IDEAS ABOUT HOW I IMAGINE THE STORY GOING ON, USE THEM IF YOU WANT...THANKS FOR YOUR STORY!
Author's Response: omg! thank you so much for the ideas! I was suppose to put them on the 10th or 11th chapter...but err I'll do my best to put some on my next chapter! :)))
Date: 08/06/12 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 5: Tom!!!
omg...he found her :)
please update sooooooon :)
please please please!!!!!!!!
cant wait for moooore :)
Author's Response: he found her!!yay! hahah
Date: 08/06/12 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Retarded Asshole
cant wait for moooooore :)
looooooved this story very much :)
keep up the gooood work :)
Author's Response: yahay!! Thank you for reviewing! wahahahahaha....... this chapter is incredibly short..like really short hahaha
Date: 07/31/12 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Retarded Asshole
oh oh he broke his promise to her , she is going to kill him . bet he is intrege about her and want to get to know her better . please update soon . can`t wait to see wat happens
Author's Response: it's funny how you're so good at predicting the next thing that will happen! :((( oh men!!!! now I'm shy to post another chapter haahahah.... really.... you're so good!!! (^o^) hahaah thank you for reviewing!
Date: 07/31/12 09:56 am Title: Chapter 4: The Retarded Asshole
HAHAHAAHA!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! PLEASE TRY TO UPDATE DAYLY!!!! I LOVE STORIES WHERE TOM IS AN ASS AND THE GIRL DOESN'T WANT HIM...SEXUAL TENSION GROWING!!! NICE JOB!
Author's Response: I have a college entrance exam this week :( so maybe I'll post a chapter by monday :) thank you so much for reviewing! I like Tom's assholeness too! hahah new word "assholeness:
Date: 07/30/12 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: Douche bag Bachelor
this was awesome! cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing! although. .the next chapter might be in a week :( anyway.. I love you !! ^^
Date: 07/29/12 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 3: Douche bag Bachelor
already reading ATT, pretty good .
Wow lets make a fool of my self in front of the girls and Tom , but i bet Tom is intriged by her . can`t wait for more , to see wat happens . update soon please .
Author's Response: just updated! :)
Date: 07/29/12 05:55 pm Title: Introduction: The Bachelor... hell!
Loved it Hun!!!!!!
Date: 07/29/12 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 3: Douche bag Bachelor
Love it, and your fast update! It's amazing! :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 07/29/12 02:16 am Title: Introduction: The Bachelor... hell!
Nice beginning :)
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Date: 07/28/12 08:14 pm Title: Introduction: The Bachelor... hell!
Wow I'm liking this. Can't wait 4 more!
Author's Response: Yay! thank you! :)
Date: 07/28/12 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 2: Almost there...
wow 2days and they finally meet each other . wonder how it is going to go . can`t wait for the update . please soon .
Author's Response: I'll be posting the next chapter tonight! :)))
Date: 07/27/12 06:01 am Title: Introduction: The Bachelor... hell!
wow this story has promise . intrested to see wat happens . please update soon .
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing and reading! :) Love ya!
Date: 07/26/12 09:51 pm Title: Introduction: The Bachelor... hell!
this seems like it could be an interesting story!! :D I'm looking forward to more! please update soon?!? ps, what was the bet?! :)
also, if you need a banner, give me a shout! becca_lynn_136@hotmail.com
Author's Response: Omg! thank you for the hypothesis! hahaah....... I will do my best to update as much as I can :)
Date: 07/26/12 09:38 pm Title: Introduction: The Bachelor... hell!
:D I like this !!!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much!!!! I really like the show and decided to write a story about it! hahaha