Date: 11/15/12 08:49 pm Title: Eternally Conflicted
geez, just imagining something like that happening to bill (or anyone else) in real life is painful!i read both storys, they made me feel like yelling into bills face: WHY DO YOU LET HIM DOING THIS TO YOU? and give tom a resounding slap..or five. hope you write another story, you have a great writing style :)
sorry for any mistakes, english is not my native language
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for your review!! And thank you so much for reading both stories. I'm so happy you enjoyed both stories :) I'm not sure about a third part yet, but we shall see :) and your English is very good for it not being your native language
Date: 07/31/12 05:59 am Title: Eternally Conflicted
Ahhh!! Loved it!! Great sequel! :) I really think there should be a third part to this series now, you've really left it open for a happy ending. Pretty please? I really like the unique way u narrate this btw. Really great look into Bill's head, and his feelings, even though they conflict at times are really understandable and realistic somehow; like your Bill feels like a real person. Maybe you'll give us a bit more insight into Tom next time? Well done.
Author's Response: SOOOO glad you liked it!! :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing BOTH! I am so grateful :D I try very hard to make my readers believe that my Bill is real, I want you to feel what he feels. I hope I accomplised that well enough within these two stories. I might be writing a third part. We shall see. But as far as a happy ending...I'm not sure if I can do that. I'd love it to be happy but some stories just don't play out that way. I could get into Tom's head for you though if that's what you really want :) Thanks again for reading!!
Date: 07/28/12 05:40 pm Title: Eternally Conflicted
I'm not su8re how to feel about this. Maybe it's because I have hard time seeing anyone - esp. Tom - truly that cold and because of seeing this and that in life, I think things are rarely so black and white. Even if Tom was cheating basically both on Bill and on her. This left me with confused feelings.
But I liked the strong angst in here and some very hot details in the sex. This was painful and sad - even the sex was sad. And it's a good thing. Sad is often good. Nice job with this. :)
Poor Bill though... *sigh*
Author's Response: writing this was difficult for me because it messed with my emotions so much. I do believe that people can be that cold but I do not believe Tom could ever be. I do not believe Tom is a bad guy in any way. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you so very much for reading and leaving me a review!! :)
Date: 07/26/12 12:23 pm Title: Eternally Conflicted
WOW!!! Bittersweet but thought provoking storyline. Made me want to cry for poor Bill and smack Tom upside the head. Loved it! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it! Thank you for reading!! :)
Date: 07/25/12 10:00 pm Title: Eternally Conflicted
nice story!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 07/24/12 12:43 pm Title: Eternally Conflicted
sad and sexy all rolled into one
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 07/24/12 08:42 am Title: Eternally Conflicted
Absolutely amazing. I love your writing style. I'm practically in tears here. Really, really sad. Poor Bill. And Tom doesn't appear bothered at all that he's basically cheating on two people. I really wanted to hug Bill and give Tom a good slap for being so callous.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Tears are good, that's the reaction I wanted to evoke. Thanks so much for reading!