Date: 09/10/12 07:56 am Title: Chapter 6
love love love it can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Next chapter should be this weekend :D Enjoy the Silk Road!
Date: 09/01/12 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ouch...
But very skillfully told break down again! I like it how it was detailed, slow and focused on Tom's vulnerability. I love that in him.
Finding the reasons behind Tom's behaviuotr made me sad. It weas so fucked up, abusive way, but in a wauy I think the world of entertainment is. And how Tom does everything for his brother. Aww...
Aside of being interesting and sad, this was also hot. You know how Iove to read Tom breaking down. :)
Author's Response: I enjoy focusing on Tom's vulnerability. I don't know why but it's a very important part of this story and I like to keep it first and foremost in everyone's minds. I think you're right. As much as it is fucked up and unfair and even abusive, it could very easily happen in such a busy, dangerous industry. Tom's love for Bill keeps him going through it, and it kept him strong until the Gs broke him down. And yes, I do know how you love a broken down Tom :D
Date: 08/31/12 12:12 am Title: Chapter 5
Yay! Finally some spanking! and some answers too. This story literally just got ten times better and I didn't even know that was possibly. It's like you gave me a ton of answers, but those answers only caused me to ask about a thousand more questions. I love it! Can't wait to read more in the next chapter. Tons of love from China!
Author's Response: Tons of awesome from Wales. Wet awesome, but awesome is fine when it's soggy. Spanking is always good too! I'm glad I got you thinking on it, and I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter which is supposed to be sorted this weekend :D How's China treating you?
Date: 08/30/12 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
*jumps and squeals* That was yummy! Def looking forward to knowing how much more interesting this gets and to see what the guys do to David for being horrible to Tom :( jerk!
Author's Response: David is such an arsehole, but he'll get his due, no worries :D Glad you reviewed!
Date: 08/30/12 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
I KNEW IT WAS DAVID! Something tells me that Georg and Gustav are gonna do something to David when the time is right.
Author's Response: How did you know it was David, if I might ask? And yep. David is going to get it from the Gs, something chronic.
Date: 08/22/12 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
Because its fun to spank Tom ;)
Author's Response: It is indeed fun to spank my dear precious Tom :D
Date: 08/14/12 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
You know, this is very confusing story, because whole this is insanely HOT, this is also quite sad in many ways. You surprise me with the emotions I get. Just like the first scene in a lobby - all the scenarios, fears, certain sadness in it. I can't explain. Then you brought Tom up with G's and it was so deliciously hot, but also touching in a way that it was almost therapeutic to Tom.
It is sex, it is therapy, is this hurt/comfort after all? I can't decide. Very interesting.
P.s. spanking Tom is always good. He likes it. ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad it's a confusing story in a way - challenging readers to see things for more than one sort of emotion is a good thing. I like that you see it as a sort of therapy for Tom and actually I agree. It's unconventional, challenging, but it is therapy; a way to let go in a safe and controlled environment. It is hurt/comfort though - the Gs do so love to do the whole comfort thing too. rnrnAnd I will never stop spanking Tom. Never.
Date: 08/12/12 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
Excited, excited... I might have to save the next chapter for tomorrow, but I can't wait. You know, I think Tom needs to learn a lesson and - at the same time - fill his need to be submissive. Oh, this is going to be good... ;)
Author's Response: Oh, his lesson is well learned. I can make sure of that :D
Date: 08/11/12 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
O_O Oooh! I am SERIOUSLY hooked now! What happens?!?! TELL MEEEEE!!!
Author's Response: Presh Tom is gonna be spanked, and the truth will come out :D Tomorrow or Saturday, you'll find out.
Date: 08/10/12 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
let the spanking of Tom commence!
Author's Response: Heh, lol. Tom's gonna be feeeeeeling the burn tonight.
Date: 08/06/12 02:52 am Title: Chapter 3
oooh, looking forward to the long chapter! hope we inally get to read a bit of an explaination from tom, because this is REALLY starting to piss me off! who's got his balls in such a grip that they can get him to ditch bill AND risk his carreer by just sending a text?
Author's Response: New chapter is going up tonight, and I think you'll be pleased with it. And oooh, you'll see. I bet you'll never guess what's setting him up though. It's completely out of left field :D
Date: 08/04/12 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
Uh oh...Tom is in for it. But poor Bill, he needs a big hug and big bowl some kind of comfort food!
Author's Response: Oooh, Bill'll turn up sooner or later, I promise :P But poor Tom. His bottom will be rather sore...
Date: 08/04/12 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh interesting. I honestly DO see Georg and Gustav as doms to be honest. It really fits them.
Author's Response: I have to admit, I thought they were, but until Ksena clued me into it a little further, I had no idea how far I could push it - turns out they are quite dommy in their own special way. And poor Tom. Born sub, that one and even I spotted that one.
Date: 08/04/12 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
AHHHHHHHH!!!! Im soo on the edge of my seat right now O_O
Author's Response: :D That is the sign I have done my work. Another chapter is being posted now ! Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 08/04/12 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm so excited for the next chapter! I don't think I can wait a whole week. This is getting so good :D
Author's Response: Heh, well. Another chapter is about to go up and then it's another whole week to wait, I'm afraid. *grins*
Date: 08/03/12 06:15 am Title: Chapter 2
uuuh, me likes.
interesting fic, think i really like where this is going :D looking forward to more :D
Author's Response: Me approves of you like~ Next chapter's going up in a few minutes so let us know what you think!
Date: 08/02/12 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying this so far :) Anxiously waiting for the next update!
Author's Response: Next chapter's going up tonight, and thank you for reviewing! I hope you'll be pleased with it.
Date: 08/01/12 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was clever, really cleber chapter. Tbj I never really expected things to turn this way and G's eventually planning on attracting the truth from Tom is such sexual way. But hey, I love surprises!
Also, I think you knitted together all elements of submission in Tom and made it completely plausable explanation. Good job!
And wioth Tom? So in-character, I tell you! Our sweet, big softie. I want to cuddle him! :D
Author's Response:
N'awwww, Tom's my baby at the moment - all sweet and mixed up and in over his head. One day he'll grow up and be all independent but right now, he needs Doms, and help, and cuddles. Lots of cuddles.
rnrnrnI'm glad you approve of how Tom's submission is built; we wanted to keep it true to reality - or as close as possible; so there's lots of realism in there.
rnrnWe're glad you like the chapter, and another will be posted tonight!
rn rnrnDate: 07/30/12 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1
This is very well-written and I can't wait to see where you're taking it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I can't take all the credit - Ksena worked with me on this every step of the way, so it's a lot of her hard work too! I hope you enjoy it!
Date: 07/29/12 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm looking forward to Tom's spanking! He seems like he deserves it.
Author's Response: Ooooh yes. He deserves that spanking like there's no tomorrow! Next chapter goes up tonight, so I hope you'll enjoy it!