Date: 11/08/12 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
You wrote Tom so kindly. Thank you for that. His character is so sweet here and what comes to describing him - I think mostly true as well.
I've been thinking of this triagle they have and tbh, also the ethics of the way G's guided Tom through it all. IOt's really borrderline, you know. Luckily the result seems to be for the best. :)
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I agree that the ethics of the way that Georg and Gustav lead Tom through the spanking and the subsequent sex are suspect, and it will be addressed in a later chapter. It could, potentially, have gone horrifically wrong. Even though it didn't :D
Date: 11/03/12 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm in love with this cuddly, shy Tom :)
Can't wait to read more
Author's Response: In all honesty? I /like/ writing cuddly, shy Tom. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. He's an interesting character to write for, to be honest. Dig under that boring play boy exterior a lot of fans are obsessed with or can't see past... and he's a very interesting person. We, meaning Ksena and I, decided to play with it. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 10/29/12 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awww! Hahaha! Sulking, hiding Tom is just way too adorable! So much love! :)
I love the sudden change in the atmpsphere - first so lightly and playful and then suddenly diving to the deep end and to what they love in Tom, what they want him to be. This will indeed be an interesting ride!
Author's Response: I want a pic of Tom just rolling around in a duvet, snuggled up and hiding. It's love. And I like whiplash atmosphere changes. It's so hard to get just right but the tension is delicious. And oh... keep on reading. Me and Ksena, we've got stuff PLANNED.
Date: 10/29/12 08:11 am Title: Chapter 11
i have this slight urge to laugh really evilly.. but then again, that would be too evil, wouldn't it? maybe i'm just a bit of a sadist today?
but what ever! i can't wait to read more!!! yaaaaay!!! *too hyper for my own good*
Author's Response: Pfft. It's Tom. I loved writing these chapters so does that make me a Sadist too? Like I said before, we update once a week and it's ALL written. Unless I die under floodwater, you will be getting your weekly update! Thanks so much for reviewing from both of us!
Date: 10/28/12 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ahhhhhh!!!! Clifffyyy horrible cliffyyyyy! Lmao.
Author's Response: I love my cliff hangers! We update once a week, every week at the weekend so at least your cliffhanger has an end in sight! Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 10/28/12 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wait, what? I wrote a mile long review and only thing here is "Tom's nipples"? WTF? :D
Okay, I'm sotrry. This cut my review after that (too much hotness for THF?)
Anyway, what was I saying? I loved to see some G's perspective in this, because it's so rare for me to read it. And I still love how gentle they are for Tom. It really warms my heart. I can't wait to see how things turn up the next morning!
Author's Response: Hey, it kept the most relevant part :P I like writing the Gs, and I'm glad I could inspire you to read them. Even if you don't pair them with a twin, they are fascinating to write - they have emotional depth, intelligence, and personality to explore. And they will, of course, be gentle for Tom. He needs some careful handling after the last few days and nights.
Date: 10/25/12 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Tom's nipples
Author's Response: I am not sorry that I have a fetish for them. And I think Georg will comes to share that as well :D New chapter is posted though!
Date: 10/24/12 12:35 am Title: Chapter 10
This story is awesome! I love it! I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you're enjoying it. This story is updated once a week at the weekend so be sure to check back to get the latest chapter! Eleven is already up as well! Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 10/20/12 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. Chapter eleven went up a few minutes ago, so let me know what you think! Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 10/18/12 04:31 am Title: Chapter 1
aw beautiful. this is my favorite story now... beautfully written. im very curious were you are going to take it now.
Author's Response: Oh, we got plenty of places to take this now. It's a looooong series in the planning :P Thank you for reviewing! I hope Chapter Ten is to your liking.
Date: 10/16/12 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
Tom really deserved that last orgasm and somehow I wish I could give him these effortless, lazy, almost sleepy orgasms, because they are soooo good. Very beautiful and tender chapter. I really appriciate that G's treated him so softly. It makes me happy. :)
Author's Response: We originally planned, like I said before, for something a lot more dramatic and scary but I think at this point in the story, quiet and calm just seemed the right way to go. Georg and Gustav will treat their boy right, don't you worry about that. Next chapter is up!
Date: 10/13/12 04:55 am Title: Chapter 9
Gaaaah! Kill me with the cuteness of a sleepy Tom why don't you! I just imagine him looking like a sleepy little kitten :3 And meanwhile Georg and Gustav are making him cum. Why is that so adorable? I loved it! But the 15 missed calls from David worry me...
Author's Response: Tom is such a cutie when he sleeps. Adorable little fucker that he is. Oooh, there's more where David comes from. Next chapter's just gone up!
Date: 10/12/12 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful, wonderful story :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Now the porn is over, I'm afraid, and back to the more serious stuff...
Date: 10/12/12 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awww, ity was actually beautiful to see Tom coming here. It was so earned, so intense and so relaxing. I love it how G's were so gentle with him afterwards. That's important to me that they were. Really sweet. :)
Author's Response: That gentleness was needed, I think. Originally, we had planned that they would get him up and out of bed and talk and do other stuff but in the end, I think this works better. He's earned the orgasm though. *pets* Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/01/12 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh goodness! I think I'm gonna die!!! Tim and Gustav are my fave and if the two of them start making out I may just faint! O.O
Author's Response: Tom and Gustav are just divine together :D Next chapter's up, and thanks for the review!
Date: 10/01/12 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
Just let the poor Tom come! :D
It's such a thrill to figure out what new kinks you have in mind for each chapter and I approve these just as easiuly: asphyxiation (the thought of it), watching, orgasm denying, it's all there. Tom is such a good playmate, so responsive. It'll be a hell of a climax for him. :)
Author's Response: We have something special in mind for one of the kinks you mentioned, but that's in the future :D More kinks will be found in the rest of the series as well. Tom is such a good playmate - he is a natural sub through and though, and his climax has been posted!
Date: 10/01/12 09:22 am Title: Chapter 7
Wonderful chapter as always. I can't wait to see what happens in the next one. I just finished reading Fifty Shades of Grey last night and Tom is a better sub that Ana Steele ever will be and Georg and Gustav put Christian Grey's dominance to shame. It's beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, kind person :D And if you ever compare my work to Fifty Shades, I'm gonna slap you silly. *side eyes you* Just kidding. A bit.
Date: 10/01/12 03:44 am Title: Chapter 7
damn it that cut off was not fair!!!!! hurry with a new chapter please!!!!!
Author's Response: Next chapter is posted but *blows a raspberry* I like to keep my readers on edge :P
Date: 09/15/12 11:34 am Title: Chapter 6
This story is so insanely hot that my brain is burning. It really is. I once again read this with barely breathing, because the tension was so strong, the fear of any wrong moves and the strong reactions. This is also the Tom I love the most...
I love the way you took this to little details and Tom's rreaction to them. Him beating his fear and surrendering to what he really wants. Watching, being touched and openly enjoying. Him watching Georg come was super hot and you have such a talent and understanding of how D/s should be working. Most people don't.
I'm once again waiting eagerly of Gustav's input on this. :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the story. It's been mine and Ksena's baby since we started plotting it together, all the way in April. It's taken a long time to get to this point. I get a lot of the D/s, and she helps me trim it down, push it into just the right place, reflect on real experiences, as it were. I couldn't write it as well as I do without her. :D I love the dynamics of D/s, the change in power, the ways you can expose and conceal it. I didn't love it as much until I got into this fandom - there's just something about TH that appeals to that side of me. Gustav will get his moment this weekend, I hope :D
Date: 09/12/12 01:41 am Title: Chapter 6
Yummi!
Author's Response: Indeed :D Thanks for the review!