Date: 01/07/13 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 20
Tom crying into Georg's shirt. Rip my heart out why don't you.
Author's Response: *gives you some plasters and waits for your reaction to the next chapter*
Date: 01/05/13 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I find it amazing that like 20 chapters in this fix are set in a hotel room and it still works. I'm normally not a big fan of torg or Billstav but this is nice. Love the dynamics!
Author's Response: It's a very small setting really - a stadium in the beginning of the fic, a lobby, a hallway, Gustav's room, Bill's room, and then one last location in the next few chapters. Considering how long it is, that's a damn achievement XD Thank you so much for your review, and we're glad we got you to step outside your comfort zone a bit. Sometimes, there are great fics with pairings you don't normally go for! Hope you enjoy the next chapter~
Date: 01/01/13 09:50 am Title: Chapter 19
I can understand Tom's fears and how his mind works. Even if irrationally, but still... humanmind works like that. It'll be interesting to see how Bill reacts. It must nit be easy for him either. And always loving vulneeable Tom! I'd want to just hug him. :)
Author's Response: He's just so stuck inside his own mind, that stepping outside and really thinking about it is just impossible for him. And humans are not rational and Tom is determined to prove that!
Date: 01/01/13 09:32 am Title: Chapter 18
Awww, Tomi... He needs to become one with Bill again, otherwise no connection or relationship with any other can help. Always interesting to read hurting Tom.
Author's Response: Hurting Tom is a favourite of both mine and Ksena's. He's just so easy to do it to, unfortunately. And I htink that tonight, in this fic, they will be sharing a room again. They do need to become close again. Thanks for the review¬
Date: 12/31/12 02:16 am Title: Chapter 19
THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME. I don't even know where this is going anymore. But I'm glad that it seems like Bill is finally becoming a character in this story... I hope David gets his ass kicked. Almost as much as I hope that Tom gets his ass spanked... again.
Author's Response: Ooh, Tom's bottom is not home free yet. Not for a while. But we're glad you're enjoying it! We hope to keep people on their toes just a little bit longer, just a little bit more. Bill is finally coming back again after disappearing for yonks and yonks so we hope you like him still! :D It's hard to believe this is almost wrapped up. Our baby, all grown up. :D
Date: 12/09/12 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 17
Awww, Tom is takimng his precious time alone. He deserves it - especially with his newly found interests, which are just m,uch more than his boring roling before. There's just something so fascinating in it, can't deny it.
And how all three of them will find their symbiotic relationship together? It'll be interesting. ;)
Author's Response: I think we might have to come back to more scenes like this in the future! It's been interesting returning to something a little more sexual, after such a serious talk between the three of them. rnrnrnAh, but your statement rests on the assumption they /will/ have a relationship. What happens if they don't? :P *tests you*
Date: 12/08/12 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 17
SHOWER MASTURBATION. I LOVED IT. YES. MORE. MORE. I NEED MORE. Tom's so vulnerable and adorable.
Author's Response: :P Figured you'd enjoy this one! And yep. He's still so unsure of himself - adorable yet terrified.
Date: 12/06/12 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 16
It's so sweet and beautiful, the way you handle this Tom-the-manwhore thing here. It feels right to see him longing for something else than those panties trown at him. In real life, too. It took me long time to admit it, but really, Ria being in his life is good for him. It's right thing to be.
And of course going through new sides of sexuality, which are questioning the existing taboos, is a long walk. Idk, some things are just easier to accept than others. You write it so nicely here.
Shower sex next, yes? :)
Author's Response: I think that Ria is good for him too. And it's not easy to see someone as grown up, as having a kind of permanent relationship but I think it's good that you recognise that. The panty throwing days are behind him, as it were. In this story, he's been through a lot, and coming out the other side now, starting to see himself differently. His sexuality, his personal choices, his sexual history, it's all changing. We wanted people to understand that it's not just a five second change for him - he is, as you so kindly called him, a manwhore. That's a hard thing to come back from. So we're glad you can see that and that you like the way it was presented. :D Also, I can't promise shower sex. Unfortunately.
Date: 12/03/12 09:34 am Title: Chapter 16
I think this might have been my favorite chapter so far... the writing was perfection. Definitely can't wait for next week ;)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you :D We're so pleased you're enjoying this! And also, New Year's chapters are up! We hope you enjoy them too. And maybe change your favourite chapters too?
Date: 11/29/12 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 15
So sweet to see Tom so vulnerable and most of all - that someone takes care of him. It's some sort of mental kink for me, it's extremely comforting and emotionally satisfying to know that he is being taken care of.
One of my favorite scenes in this chapter was when you compared touching Tom to him touching with Bill and understanding how ythey are two separate people. It's always fascinating.
And shower, aww. I know I will like it. :)
Author's Response: Twin bonds are very fascinating, and I think there must have been a period where they have to learn that they are two separate individuals, and the differences between themselves. rnrnrnrnAnd I think, in this fic at least, for the longest time, nobody was taking care of him. Nobody was making sure he ate or slept or stayed in when he was tired and only now is he being taken under someone's wing. We hope you enjoy the New Year's chapters!
Date: 11/28/12 03:28 am Title: Chapter 15
Looking forward to a shower scene :D I hope Tom decides to be a part of their relationship... and I'm thinking he will be... or else this story would kind of be leading to nothing? Or else maybe there's a huge plot that's gonna throw me off? Hmmm... Now I feel paranoid. Good. You've made me think.
Author's Response: Making you think is good :D And don't be paranoid but do hold onto your hats and stay alert. Strange things are afoot!
Date: 11/20/12 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha i know but I still have to whine! It's such an awesome story. It's awesome enough for me to wait for the chapters instead of just giving up on it no matter if it took 6 days or 6 years. :D
Author's Response: Well, okay then. I bloody well hope it doesn't take six years to update to the end though - we've only got about another ten chapters left! Thank you so much for the review!
Date: 11/20/12 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ah, biting! The primitive act of dominance. So sweet. ;)
I think Tom is taking a huge step, but it seems inevitablöe step as well. I've always wondered a relationship based (mostly) on D/s setting, the understanding of positions between the partners. It's a scary thought. Attractive, but scary. Not to be taken lightly.
Interesting...
Author's Response: The most basic act of dominance, biting. I hope to explore the relationship a little more, and see just how it would affect the dynamics in later chapters and beyond. It is a scary thought though. Daunting, scary, but as you say, attractive too. Hope you enjoy the next chapter! Thank you from both of us!
Date: 11/20/12 03:53 am Title: Chapter 1
argh it remains to be exciting and my favorite story.. i needto read on and on. thank god you are a fast updater. I love the realism in your story, the different charactrs are well written and the subtlety is awesome
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! We feel really proud of this - it's been so much work and effort but the response has been amazing! We're regular updaters because it's finished :D All complete, just posting a chapter a week so keep coming back and it'll be here. Thank you so much much for the comment on the realism - we tried so hard to make sure it was as close to real as we could get to so for you notice it, we did our jobs well! Thank you for reviewing from us both!
Date: 11/19/12 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ahhhh! Omg whats with all the cliffies! This is so awesome I never want it to stop!
Author's Response: Cliff hangers are fun! Why are you complaining?! :P Like I said, we update regularly, so it's not like we leave you hanging for months at a time. Next update is in four or five days! Thank you for reviewing, from both of us!
Date: 11/19/12 06:57 am Title: Chapter 14
yay for tom thinking it over!! :D i really hope that either georg or gustav (or both) go to the "meeting" tom has with david..if they refuse to let tom do it alone, david can't be very mean to tom.. but then again, tom can't really mention it then either, since he's not supposed to tell... oh lord, this is going to be exiting!! :O
and i also want tom to hang out with bill later on this day! he did blow him off the night before, it's only fair that bill gets atleast half an explaination and some twin-time! :O
Author's Response: Oh, he'll think it over. But will he accept? That, my dear, is the big question. rnrnAs for the rest of your review, I must be a magician and never reveal my secrets :P You'll have to wait but I assure you that Bill will turn up. Somewhere, somehow, he'll turn up! Thank you for reviewing from both of us!
Date: 11/19/12 06:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooo it's getting really good! :D
Author's Response: Yay! We're really glad you're one of our regular reviewers! It makes us happy to see your reviews. Thank you so much from both of us!
Date: 11/14/12 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
I find these episodes of Tom (and G's) exploring their sexuality, needs and wants very intereting. I can understand the fear in Tom. We all have those parts we so eagerly try to explain away, keep oput from the daylight and by that, make ourselves less vulnerable.
In BDSM, the terust and the feeling is so important. I couldn't imagine going with ONS's what comes to BDSM and I'm happy that G's noticed it too. It's never as satisfying as with someone you feel deeply connected to. If not love, then at least trust.
I'm sure that Tom will finally accept all of this in himself, but perhaps not now? Very good job on explaining the emptional mechanics in all of them. :)
Author's Response: I have never liked the 'oh, i think i like you, i must be bi, thanks, let's go have sex now' fic to be very satisfying, to be honest. I would think that being so in the spotlight and socially isolated as the twins were in the backstory I've created for this fic that even addressing bisexuality would traumatic to say the least. So dragging Tom out of the closet, even if it is for the best, and trying to reassure him would be a monumnental task for the Gs. In BDSM, it's about trust and feelings and I think that getting it with a ONS as you say would be difficult, and certainly not as permanent as a real partner. I think at this moment, Tom loves them as friends, and could be tempted for more but most certainly, the trust is there. There will, of course, be more emotional mechanics to come :D Thank you for reviewing from both of us!
Date: 11/12/12 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
This is amazing as always. You are an amazing author. This is the best story about BDSM I have ever read.
Author's Response: :D Awww, you flatter me! I couldn't have done it without Ksena. She was the who let me ask questions about BDSM, sex, relationships - everything - ,commented, advised, slapped me into the right mindset, fed my muse, helped me to get of plot holes and when I'd written myself into a corner. She is, quite possibly, the better half of our authorial partnership. Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 11/11/12 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love the confliction between the characters :)
Author's Response: Conflict is one of my favourite things as long as their resolution! So sorry for the late reply, but thank you for reviewing from both of us!