Date: 04/20/23 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 02/20/13 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
So when do i get to read a new one from you?
Date: 01/04/13 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Fat Lady Has Sung
.... okaaaaay! gonna say it: Need more!!! pwease? this kind of cliff hanger is unfair! glad that F!cker is dead! not so glad about his cousin~ can't wait to read what happens next! xoxo fantastic like the first one was~
xx Lilly
Date: 08/20/12 12:13 am Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
in a few areas in the story you referred to the character talking to tom before tom was in the scene like with geo admitting to bill that he likes his sister he says something to tom then tom and bill sister walk in. would you like me to go through and find them for you?
Author's Response: Sure! But put the comments on the other story so I don't have to switch back and forth. If I forgot a connecting sentence or put the wrong name in somewhere I'd like to correct it. Thanks!
Date: 08/17/12 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
Hun I just relised thag in the first story the twins were both boys (just reread it for the millionth time)
Just thoughti would let u know -hugs-
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 08/17/12 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
Hun I just relised thag in the first story the twins were both boys (just reread it for the millionth time)
Just thoughti would let u know -hugs-
Author's Response: Thanks for catching that! My bad! But it' corrected now in the original story cause the more I think abut it, Bill would be a great dad to a daughter.
Date: 08/16/12 01:26 am Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
^^ cant wait hehe. Passes you a btk cookie
Author's Response: Thanks bunches! -nibbles on cookie-
Date: 08/15/12 02:35 am Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
Honestly anything you write I am gunna love.
Author's Response: Awwwww you sweetikins you! I just wanna hug you all up! That was so nice of you to say! I'm working on some new stories now. Stay tuned!
Date: 08/14/12 10:19 am Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
Dun dun dun. Is there gunna be another one?
Author's Response: I dunno yet. I left it open so I could do another 1-shot or two. Maybe I'll do a "lost scene" to explore something in the story or give you a back story on one or more of the characters. What would you like to see?
Date: 08/13/12 02:10 am Title: Chapter 5 - The Fat Lady Has Sung
?!?!?! Say what? Oh hell no...not a revenge seeking realitive!!!!!
Will there be more in the future?
Author's Response: Tee hee! I never said he was a revenge seeking relative! LoL! I dunno though. I left the door open for one! If... Anyone is interested...
Date: 08/12/12 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Fat Lady Has Sung
OMG....i was happy that that thing with Andreas ended and now...his cousin. omg, that so unbelievable but i can't wait what could happen..yeah, i'm so curious
Author's Response: I'm not sure yet. Left it open in case the muse gets a good idea!
Date: 08/12/12 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Fat Lady Has Sung
Gosh I hope that nothing bad comes out of that!!...
Author's Response: Doesnt it always get bad before it gets better? Tee hee!
Date: 08/12/12 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
I thought it's the end but then again another installment on the verge of rising?!. Do we have to expect something here with a mega cliffhanger? Since Andreas had been wiped out in the picture and here comes his cousin. Andreas family can never really run out of villain blood is it? Oh well let me expect something to another installment??? ^_^....have a nice day ahead.
Author's Response: Not sure yet. Left it open ended for a possible one shot or multi chapter story. What would you like to see?
Date: 08/12/12 10:58 am Title: Chapter 5 - The Fat Lady Has Sung
You. You dear author, are an evil bitch. Ending it like that >_>. Are we going to be hetting another installment in this series? Or was that all just a 'pointless' teaser?
Yea, Donovan was being stupid. I understand wanting to interview Bill that night. It just makes sense all around, stuff is still fresh, and there's not much time to make up a story. But I can't believe they would interview 4 year olds, ever, but especially not the night it happened, they'd be too traumatized to be of any use! Besides, I don't think they'd be deemed competant to stand trial anyway, especially if they decided to charge one of their parents. No body would take anything they said seriously. So props to Audra on getting in the detective's face. Though I am a bit worried that she could get a few assualts on her record. Especially trying to force her way in.
This was a wonderful chapter. I am so sad its over already. But I hope you do have more in store for us in this, as the end implies.
Keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait to see what you bring us next!
Author's Response: Audra is a bad ass who's not afraid of anyone. I'm sure getting arrested never crossed her mind! rnrnAnother chapter in this is open. I left it open ended in case I get a burst of inspiration. Thanks for reading and enjoying!
Date: 08/12/12 04:00 am Title: Chapter 5 - The Fat Lady Has Sung
Omg. The ending was a cliffy o.o I hope there's another sequel to this :)
Author's Response: Who knows...possibly! Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/07/12 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Uninvited
Noooooooo, don't say you're so mean to get them killed!!!!! o_O
Anyway, I'm a new fan of your serie 'Revenge'! I really hope you update soooooooon!!!! (because I'm going on vacation thge 10th, and I'd really like to know the ending of this story!!!!!!)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Sorry I couldn't get it dine before you left on vacation. I worked long hours that week and could only work it on the weekend. Enjoy the next chapter!
Date: 08/06/12 10:40 am Title: Chapter 4 - Uninvited
omg someone turn on the tomi signal O.o
Author's Response: Yes and fast! :-)
Date: 08/06/12 04:10 am Title: Chapter 4 - Uninvited
Oh I hope nothing happens to the kids...:$
Author's Response: Nah...i'd never let kids get hurt!
Date: 08/05/12 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Uninvited
Idiot body guards *shakes head in disappointment* they are being paid to look out for him, and they both leave?! I mean, ok, the first one wasn't really at fault. He couldn't help needing to use the restroom, especially when he's suspecting food poisoning or similar. But the second sure as hell should've waited to call his girlfirend and have his cigarette break until the other was back! Moronic ass.
You know, I think I would've tried to humor the crazy jailbreakee. 'You know what Andi, you were right, that was the biggest mistake of my life. Let me just put the kids in the office let's run away together' type thin draw it out a little to see if a guard made it back.
But lord is Andi stupid. He KNOWS there's a guard in the restroom who could be back any moment, he doesn't know the dude is sick in there.
Wonderful update. I am so anxious to see more. Keep up the lovely work!
Author's Response: Andi didn't care. If one appeared, he would have just shot him and kept talking to Bill. That's how crazy he is! rnWaiting for the muse to tell me if i can create a good sequel to the sequel.
Author's Response: Andi didn't care. If one appeared, he would have just shot him and kept talking to Bill. That's how crazy he is! rnWaiting for the muse to tell me if i can create a good sequel to the sequel.
Date: 08/05/12 08:09 am Title: Chapter 4 - Uninvited
You bitch! You get the kids involved and you make the guards they hire idiots!
Author's Response: LoL! Even the bodyguards are human beings with real problems and faults. When ya gotta go, ya gotta go! And people do fall into a false sense of security. They're not idiots, just guys who thought this small enclosed environment was more secure than it was. It was a comedy of errors by more than just one person that put Bill and the kids in jeopardy. What will happen next? Stay tuned!