Date: 08/05/12 04:56 am Title: Chapter 4 - Uninvited
Omg please don't kill the children. :'( Even Andreas can't be that EVIL!!
Author's Response: Crazy people can do anything. Let's just hope Andreas still has some sense of right and wrong.
Date: 08/05/12 01:28 am Title: Chapter 4 - Uninvited
Where the f are the body guards, can't they hear? I'm hoping the telepathy works between Bill and Tom, or else a bg discovers Andreas and and does everyone a favor!!
Will be on the edge of my seat waiting...
Author's Response: The bodyguards were a bit distracted. Too bad they chose that time to get distracted! But just hold on. Lots of action coming!
Date: 08/05/12 12:28 am Title: Chapter 4 - Uninvited
super :) it's kinda sad that Bill's children had to look at the situation but hopefully it would end up fast..or it's gonna be more complicated cos of Andreas - i can tell - obsession. and of course i can't wait for another part :) hopefully a little longer :)
Author's Response: Luckily the kids are too young to realize the real danger they're in! This last chapter should clear up a lot of questions. Stay tuned!
Date: 08/03/12 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Leave a Message at the Tone…
Oh I hope there will be another chapter fast!!!...
Author's Response: Will be up tonight!
Date: 07/31/12 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Leave a Message at the Tone…
God! That freaking psycho! I mean, mostly in the last story he just seemed like a typical abusive ass. But he seems like he's really seriously lost it now!
Yea, I'm pissed at the prison. They certainly should've been notified immediately, and seeing as Tom had been getting the run around for two weeks from them, I definitely think it was NOT an accident that they were not informed. I think the prison was trying to cover up the escape, and I definitelycant blame Tom for not believing them when they told him that Andreas was in florida. How would they have gotten that info anyway? And if they honestly believe that to be true, who's qord are they trusting?
Very good so far! I look forward to seeing more soon! Oh...umm...about how many chapters is this looking to be?
Author's Response: My dear sweet LadyX. I just adore your comments! You really get into fiction! Yay! Well there's going to be some serious stuff up next! There's only 2 chapters left (unless I get some more creativity from my muse). We'll see. They're already written out, but when I get to tweaking chapters, they tend to grow a bit bigger! Tune in my dear...next chappie up real soon!
Date: 07/30/12 12:53 am Title: Chapter 3 - Leave a Message at the Tone…
I feel a lot more drama coming!
Audra never fails me...such a great character.
Im hoping Andreas slips up in some way before he can do anything drastic!
Thanks for the quick update :)
Author's Response: Audra is my fave character too! Andreas caused this drama abd now he's going to end it! Only 2 more chappies left!
Date: 07/29/12 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Leave a Message at the Tone…
Andreas is gunna get a cap in his ass XD
Author's Response: Sounds like an idea!!
Date: 07/29/12 12:29 am Title: Chapter 2 – Cat and Mouse
Spare the children..they are innocent!
Will Bill and Tom find out about Andreas, will the coffee shop owners report him...will Audra beat the living shit out of him....tune in for next chapter to find out! Well, I hope we find out at least one of those things!
Author's Response: Well read on my love and see what happens! Tee Hee!
Date: 07/22/12 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
Yay cant wait. I has your storys bookmarked on my cell and lapy ^^
Author's Response: Awwww, you're so sweet! Thank you!
Date: 07/22/12 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
Of corse I joined u lol I been a fan sence only love matters ^-^
Author's Response: Oh thank you! You've made so happy! I love hearing that my scribbles entertained you! I have more new stuff coming soon for you! I can't wait to show you! Soon....very soon!
Date: 07/22/12 01:36 am Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
Ugh....so hooked already! I just know I'm gonna,love this one like the other. Cannot wait for next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Next chapter up soon since it's already written. Welcome back! Hope you enjoy the ride!
Date: 07/22/12 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
Loved the last story and can't wait to see what you have planned for this one.....
Author's Response: It'll be a short but crazy ride. Hang on
Date: 07/21/12 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
O.o dun dun dun, will tomi turn andi into shiskabob now?
Author's Response: Oh you'll have to wait and see! Thanks for joining me!
Date: 07/21/12 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Something’s Wrong
nice :) it looks like they are really happy and stuff but this Bill's dream and his "prediction" aren't good at all. but still i can't wait for another chapter so i'm waiting :)
btw, how old are twins?
Author's Response: Hi there! Twins are 4 now. Tom and Bill have had success and happiness for 4 years so far.. Glad you're along for the ride!