Date: 08/22/12 04:43 pm Title: Stripping Down and Weeping
I'm so sorry that real life has keeping me out of THF, but now I'm here again.
And this was so sweet! I waited for this and it really was sweet! I love it how you made Bill treat Tom so gently and supportively and how submissive, how somehow regressed Tom was in here. Even if it was a punishment and everything, it was natural and not sopmething that would have made the reader thiink Bill was cruel. Very intimate and lovely... And that girly part; yes, more! Ooh, I just love this Tom! :)
Author's Response: No worries :D Life happens, as I well know. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter - I wanted to step down the atmosphere of punishment, bring in some more warmth as well. I also didn't intend to add in the feminisation, but it just happened and I'm a big believer in just going with the flow when it comes to writing. I hope to bring you more of this Tom soon because I also would like to find out what happens after the bathroom scene finishes!
Date: 08/21/12 10:28 am Title: Stripping Down and Weeping
omg I have to keep this short because I only have like 5 minutes of internet but this was so hot and amazing and special and everything i had been waiting for and I loved it.
Author's Response: Perfect :D Five minutes of your time is all I require. Thank you so much for the review!
Date: 08/18/12 01:55 pm Title: Stripping Down and Weeping
i feel bad for tom!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I hope to have the next chapter up and ready for you by this weekend so hold onto your hat!
Date: 08/18/12 12:47 pm Title: Stripping Down and Weeping
It's really great to see a fic with dominant Bill and submissive Tom. Bill realy gets off an the whole power thing, doesn't he? Poor Tom. Do they not use a safe word for when Tom really has had more than enough? Or maybe the point is that he gives over total control to Bill, trusting his twin explicitely to know what's best for him, even when he thinks he can't take any more. I know this is kind of screwed up, but I'm really loving this fic.
Author's Response: Dom! Bill with sub!Tom is something that is so rare, so very very rare that I just had to have the prompt to fill it and make it something special. Bill gets off on the power thing, but he also does it to fulfill Tom's needs in a way that most other people can't. He needs to be taken right now and reduced to what he is in this chapter to be built back up again. They do have safewords - and Bill encourages him to use them, but they're not standard and Tom feels as though using them is a betrayal of his trust in Bill, despite what they're actually supposed to mean. He also trusts that Bill will take care of him, and make the right decision of how far to push him, whether or not it's true. It's not screwed up at all to love this fic :D Promise :D
Date: 08/18/12 11:21 am Title: Patience and Rewards
Simply amazing, you feel bad for Tom but then you know bill knows best :3
Author's Response: Bill does indeed know best. Tom should learn to shut up, accept that, and do as he's told but then half this story wouldn't exist and the other half would be extremely boring!
Date: 08/18/12 09:55 am Title: Stripping Down and Weeping
Just WOWIE
Author's Response: In that case, just thank you for reviewing! And I hope to have the next chapter up soon :D
Date: 08/16/12 03:45 pm Title: Pacing and Hairbrushes
Holy fuck... I kinda love this. But I think you know that. Dom!Bill is such a pleasure to read. Expects to be obeyed without question. I love that. And Tom is so wonderfully submissive in this, just... GUH! LOVE!
Author's Response: Dom!Bill is both a pleasure and a rarity, so I am glad I could tempt you with it. BotTom is just a fine fine fine addition to it, and then some :D Thanks for the review *hugs*
Date: 08/14/12 07:18 pm Title: Pacing and Hairbrushes
Submissive Tom is soooo hot. His inner struggle with both wanting to obey Bill and not wanting the punishment is lovbely to read, because it'l lead to Bill mentally crush him gently back to his place. Bill knows the best, Tom should remember that.
Bill is struct, but fair. I love it how he treats Tom both so powrfully, but lovingly. It's oit of love, it's obvius.
Uuh, the next chapter will be so good. I'm so excited of it. :)
Author's Response: Submissive Tom is fantastic. He's a joy to write, especially with all his struggle and dilemmas. Bill does know best, Tom should remember that. He should also remember that Bill doesn't take kindly to being challenged, as he soon found out. It is always out of love though that Bill punishes him. Never out of anger or annoyance. I'm glad you enjoyed it so far!
Date: 08/11/12 09:58 am Title: Pacing and Hairbrushes
I must say, if Tom were going to do the enemas more frequently than they normally do them, he dhouldnt have been planning on them being Tom's maximum time. I think it should've been middle ground, maybe an hour, and then added time on top of that for punishments. But that's just me.
Very nice work! I can't wait to see moree!
Author's Response: Hmmm, I like your thoughts on the enema process - maybe Bill should have reduced the time; but remember, Tom is on punishment whereas normally it's just a regular thing they do together. Punishment means worse... But thank you for sharing your opinion on it! Next chapter is posted and it is the first enema chapter so let me know what you think.
Date: 08/11/12 06:16 am Title: Pacing and Hairbrushes
nice chapter!
poor tom!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Poor Tom indeed! He's in such a lot of trouble now. *pets* Next chapter will be next weekend!rnrn
Date: 08/10/12 10:34 pm Title: Pacing and Hairbrushes
very good
Author's Response: Thank you! It's nice to be told that it's going well!
Date: 08/10/12 07:40 pm Title: Pacing and Hairbrushes
OMG Poor Tom! D: He thinks so submissively, wow.
Author's Response: It's absolutely ingrained into him - listen to Bill, follow Bill, do what Bill tells him, be what Bill wants him to be. He's just started to buck against it but as you pointed out, he's still thinking submissively~ Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 08/10/12 07:37 pm Title: Disobedience and Bathrooms
Owie! Poor Tom. But he likes it! ;)
Author's Response: Oooh, no he doesn't. He /loathes/ being spanked with a passion but he was a bad bad bad bad boy for Bill so he has to take it. Glad you liked the chapter though! Hope the next one goes down just as well.
Date: 08/10/12 07:15 pm Title: Pacing and Hairbrushes
:D yay for spanking Tom! I do feel awful for him :/ But Bill knows best, right? I can't wait for the next chapter and thank you thank you thank you SO MUCH for posting this unbetad for me :D It makes me feel so special!
Author's Response: No problem about the posting though I am sorry I was delayed with the sixth one... Bill knows best - Tom just forgets it. A lot.
Date: 08/10/12 07:05 pm Title: Pacing and Hairbrushes
I like just saw this update right after I posted my last review *facepalms* This chapter was great. I really like seeing Bill be in control of Tom it's very interesting and refreshing. Keep up the good work. I look foward to the next chapter next week. :)
Author's Response: XD Don't worry about it. I was just too fast for you! I'm glad you like Bill in charge - when I first selected this prompt I was looking for something that wasn't with dominant or tough Tom who's all confident and the one who's pounding into Bill. BotTom is the perfect antidote to it. I hope the next chapter will please you!
Date: 08/10/12 06:53 pm Title: Disobedience and Bathrooms
Poor Tom lol. He should've listened to Bill. I really like this fic alot. I can't wait for the next chapter. Just out of curiousity is Tom's enema in the next chapter???
Author's Response: Check again, sweetie. Just updated again!
Date: 08/05/12 06:26 pm Title: Disobedience and Bathrooms
Well. I totally understand Bill's position on that. But I also get Tom being hesitant to cross that last(?) line.
Pouty Tom just sounds so sexy in a way Pouty Bill isn't. Pouty Bill is sad and adorable, pouty Tom is just..tsch mmm.
Wonderful chapter! Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Pouting Tom is just plain snuggleworthy. Pouting Bill is dangerous... I agree with you - I think Tom is always hesitant to cross a line - whatever it is - and needs Bill's help to walk over it. Thank you for reviewing and hope you like the next chapter!
Date: 08/05/12 04:48 am Title: Disobedience and Bathrooms
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Next chapter is posted! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/04/12 08:25 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
Poor Tom, I like Bill being in control, it's different from most fictions. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Glad you like it! I was just so sick of all the fic that were about sub!Bill and nothing at all about poor Tom as BotTom, that I decided to write my own with the help of Amdee's prompt on the kink meme. Self-service really but I think other people are cottoning on... Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 08/04/12 07:10 pm Title: Disobedience and Bathrooms
Gaaaaaah I literally feel Tom's pain when I read this. I can't even use my words to describe how much I enjoyed this chapter. I love how Bill's a little tease and purposely keeping Tom hard. Poor baby :(
Author's Response: Bill is a horrendous little bastard at times like this. I think he enjoys it but I'm not so sure about Tom. He might have something different to say about it. Next chapter is posted and it's the one you wanted! Have fun!