Date: 04/27/13 12:47 am Title: Subspace and Sleep
OMG Thanks this was an amazing chapter!!
at the end it got me wishing i could experienced something like this!! xD
Again loved how you describe when Bill is talking to Tom and just the sound of his voice helping him!!
that part is just wooow!! almost made me cry really!! just imagining Bill's angelic voice and Tom so ..weak?! not sure if that's the right word!!hahah
Also loved this part "reliant on Bill, trusting Bill, obedient to Bill" and how the darkness is part of all of this!!
"Bill is warm though, his body practically radiating heat for Tom who’s still so cold inside" somehow "In your shadow" seems so accurate!! and you already mentioned Tom feeling Bill is his Sun!!
This lyrics omg "You're the sun and I'm the moon" Dear lord I'm making myself emotional writing to you hahah
You know i wondered at some point if Tom being in his subspace somehow could find Bill there too..
I was thinking about the last interview where Tom said he is always talking to himself when he is not with Bill...like he can find Bill in his mind....hahah okno forget it!! I'm writing craziness!! lol
sorry also for writing this kind of long thing!! xD
Again thank you so much for sharing!
my tracked stories list was like a desert!!;u; and it was so sad to see all that het label in the recent stories list hahah!!
Hope we can keep reading about this amazing world and this crazy awesome boys
Author's Response: Oh my! Big review! rnrnThank you so much for your detailed comments. I loved reading it. I never thought of some fo things like "In your shadow, I can shine!" and To, finding Bill in his subspace/something like that. rnrnUrgh, het. Good het is good. Bad het... is... too prevalent around these parts sometimes. Hopefully, lovely new chapter soon!
Date: 04/26/13 05:37 pm Title: Subspace and Sleep
This story is fucking freaky... Couldnt love it more ^_^
Author's Response: It's not really freaky, just a little bit outside your comfort zone of familiarity :P But thanks for your review!
Date: 04/26/13 05:04 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
AHHHHHH!!!! You don't know how happy you made me by updating this!! It was worth the wait, even though I hope the wait won't be as long next time (; amazing chapter!
Author's Response: *covers ears* Hopefully this weekend. I hope! *crosses fingers* Thank you very much, and I hope you enjoy the next one when it turns up.
Date: 04/26/13 04:01 pm Title: Subspace and Sleep
Yes he can do it! Thnx for updating!
Author's Response: So close. He's almost there! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 02/03/13 01:50 pm Title: Denied and Frustrated
Whoo... Tom is having a rough time! You're such an anazing writer!
Author's Response: Such a tough time! Bill keeps him on a tight reign indeed! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 02/03/13 01:45 pm Title: Bridles and Begging
I loved it loved it loved it!!! It's so funny to see Tom completely helpless and bill being the one who's taking control. Tom is such a good boy, hahah! Really, so amazing! But i don't really understand that whole 'subspace' and how Tom reacts when that happens... Hope you'll update soon!
Author's Response: I think I'll do a chapter focusing in on subspace a little more, because it's apparently not as well known in fic as I thought! I'll see if I can find you some links for it too to add onto next chapter. And I see Bill as more of a Dom that Tom ever could be for some reason... Dom or switch :P Thank you for the review!
Date: 01/19/13 12:40 pm Title: Bridles and Begging
Is it weird that I felt so moved by the ending that I wasalmost crying?
I think you wrote the ending half, the one after Bill went to bed, in a way that it goes straight to Top5 of kinky sex scenes I've ever read on this site? It was so emotional moving and shaking that it was crazy. I was shaking with Tom. Not because Iwas somehow related to him, but because it touched me how gentle, how loving Bill was.
And that is something I so much wish Tom to have, because he deserves it. I hope he has the same kind of chance to ultimate surrendering,. to be emotionally turned over and washed clean. With such a loving, trustworthy person. I really do.
Thatwas extremely intense and beautiful and I'm happy how you uinderstand that BDS; is not necessaryly about lot of action, big words and huge show at all. The deepest experiences are often so subtle and minimalistic.
So great job, thank you! Great to see this back!
Author's Response: Nope, not weird at all. But I'm grateful for the compliment on the last half of the chapter :D It was very strange to write because it almost wrote itself - just flowed straight through. Tom does indeed deserve someone who loves him so much, who loves him enough to take him right down and bring him back up again. You're very right about BDSM - it's not about all the show and the drama - sometimes, being left inside their own head is just enough to take someone down. :D I hope to work on the next chapters - but I have a feeling Tom's gonna be a bit... bad... naughty :P And Bill... well. We shall see.
Date: 01/18/13 11:15 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
I wish bill would be that way with me oh I wouldn't another man he's all I need
Author's Response: Ah, but Bill belongs to nobody but himself :P Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/15/13 07:28 am Title: Bridles and Begging
SO happy that this was finally updated :3 I can't wait for more. I almost pissed myself when Bill decided to just go ahead and take a nap. And I wanted to cry with/for Tom :( Poor baby. But he really is being such a good boy.
Author's Response: I'll ask you this: did Bill take a nap? Or did he sit on the bed and watch Tom go down, go into his subspace? Did he turn over and get some sleep, or did he hold his hands to his mouth and pray that Tom would just... find his zone, find himself and move beyond? Think on that for a minute. Tom is such a good boy - he just needs some guidance to come back to himself. And to come back to Bill.
Date: 01/15/13 06:50 am Title: Patience and Rewards
Oh my god! I've been waiting for this update!! It was so good, pleaseeeeeeee update soon :3 I can't stand the torture
Author's Response: This fic is the very reason why I will never ever ever ever post another WIP - I got so 30K of stuff and then I wrote this chapter and it's all /useless/ until I write another nine days worth of stuff to fill in for Tom's punishment >.> Pity me. XD But I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'm so sorry for the wait between chapters. Hope the next one comes sooner!
Date: 01/14/13 10:02 pm Title: Bridles and Begging
wooooooow that really happens??? it must be fckin awesome like be in another world OMG !!!!! my heart aches for Tom one part of me thinks this is really cruel and the other is just so fckin amazed xD OMG kdakdmada really awesome chapter!!!!!!! i loved when Bill share with Tom some of his thoughts but the "whorish" word was kind of sad but like Tom said is kind of accurate hahahha
mind blowing Fic I'm fckin addicted!!!!!!!! samaldk i will be dying for more!!!! thank you do much!!!*u*
Author's Response: Subspace is different for everybody who experiences it. Some people go off into another world, some people become hyperaware of themselves and their surroundings, some people blank out... there's so many ways to experience it and react to it. Some people can find it very scary to be there. Tom experiences this version of it - another plane of existance, where he's beyond a lot of his physical pain. I like your thoughts on Bill and the 'whore' incident and I'm glad you're enjoying the fic :D Hopefully pulling together something more soon!
Date: 01/14/13 09:35 pm Title: Stripping Down and Weeping
i have no idea about all of this OMG is a tortureeee omg hahahaha!!!just searched images in google cause i couldn't picture the whole thing lol
poor Tomi ;---; i wonder what is Bill thinking
crazy so crazy dmaldmam xD next chapter the last OMG I'm going to die haahah
Author's Response: Never ever google ANYTHING XD I hope you survived that expedition! And Bill's got plans. That's all I'll say for now. He's got plans.
Date: 01/14/13 09:10 pm Title: Pacing and Hairbrushes
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh can i hug Tom!!!!! omg skdas poor baby all the feelings ;u;
Author's Response: ALL the feelings. Tom's feeling them all now and he's not avaliable for hugs yet. Bill's got him a little while longer. :P
Date: 01/14/13 08:52 pm Title: Disobedience and Bathrooms
I'm back OMG!!!!!!! this was somehow sexy but omg poor Tom ;u;samldasmda Bill is so evil hahahah but not in a really bat way hahha i just must love them!!!!
Author's Response: Hallo again! And it's sexy is as sexy does. Tom'll learn. He'll learn. Bill will make sure of it.
Date: 01/14/13 07:52 pm Title: Denied and Frustrated
poor Tom ;u; evil Bill
hahahhaah amazing chapter
-OMG is time for lunch i will be dying nextchapternextchapter-
Author's Response: I guess you read on your lunch break then? And Bill's not evil, just... firm. And strong willed with high expectations :P
Date: 01/14/13 07:37 pm Title: Bathing and Hopes
waaaaaaaaaaa this is so fckin amazing askldad OMG i can't even adkadmadas perfect chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: *gives you tea and goes to find your next review*
Date: 01/14/13 07:21 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
EPIC OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! just fckin awesome *runstonextchapter* kmdkasdmakd oMGOMGOMGO
Author's Response: XD Well, I think you're enjoying it!
Date: 11/17/12 03:58 pm Title: Stripping Down and Weeping
more?
Author's Response: :P
Date: 10/21/12 09:52 am Title: Patience and Rewards
I was looking around and came across your story again, please update soon :)
Author's Response: I hope to get something up in the next week or so - I'm just battling forces of coursework, assignments, bad weather and lectures! *sighs* I think Sunday next week, but I won't force it.
Date: 08/27/12 03:08 pm Title: Stripping Down and Weeping
Damn Tom just keeps getting in trouble lol. His ass will be so sore I imagine. This keeps getting better and better. Can't wait for the next one and the enema scene was amazing. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! Tom's ass is gonna be tanned raw, I should imagine. He's never going to learn at this rate... or is he? I hope to have the next chapter up by the weekend!