Date: 07/29/13 03:47 am Title: Giving and Recieving
Did you remove the chapter because of tokio Jax's comments? Because I can't see it. Please repost...hers is just one person's opinion and there are others of us who would love to continue reading. Please. Hugs, Helen x
Author's Response: I put it back up. It hurt when I read that review, but I've added a longer author's note to explain Total Power Exchange, and edging which were the two things that leapt out at me from the negativity of her review. Some people suggested that she's transferring her feelings from recent events onto my story, and I'm inclined to agree. Thank you for your lovely encouragement!
Date: 07/29/13 02:10 am Title: Giving and Recieving
all I read is: Right now, it's not okay.
See you guys later. ? is this the story? I am confused.
Author's Response: I took the story down - probably a vast overreaction on my part XD - but it's back up now, with a chapter eleven as well. I hope you enjoy, if you decide to come back!
Date: 07/28/13 10:26 pm Title: Denied and Frustrated
having a cock ring on for that long, wouldnt his cock fall off? hehe
Author's Response: Done a little bit of editing - it's now a chastity belt but thanks for the reminder :P And the review.
Date: 07/28/13 12:33 pm Title: Giving and Recieving
You're a good writer but i can't read anymore of this. I was hoping by chapter 10 he would have stopped the torment but not. I don't get off on cruelty and I have discovered that this genre is not for me. I can't see what good or what pleasure Bill finds in hurting the one person that is his true soulmate. By now in reality Tom would be in the hospital being castrated because his sex organs would have been so severely and irreparably damaged. Extended enema use can cause internal damage too. But that all fails in comparison to the potential of destroying Tom's sanity. Putting someone's sanity in danger is the most cruel part of it all. I know it's just fiction but it's putting me in an angry emotional place that I don't like.
The mark of a good writer is being able to elicit an emotional response from your reader, and you have successfully done that. Good job! But I'm more of a happy ending girl and can't tolerate cruelty. Especially after watching them find the dead bodies in the abandoned house on my street and hearing/living that story here in Cleveland, I can't accept cruelty to this level. I truly admire your writing skills, but With this subject matter I'm done. Good luck for a successful comPletion to your story.
Date: 07/28/13 05:57 am Title: Giving and Recieving
Oh Tom, how I relate to ye.
We're not so different, though I think his tolerance is so much greater than mine. I feel I'd unravel much sooner - I have less control. Though, I think maybe his restraint comes from years of practice? Or perhaps he's just that much of a good boy.
I just want to pet him. Bill's restraint amazes me too.
I feel just as excited as Tom. Or at least, I imagine. As I'm reading this I feel myself perk up at certain things Bill says. I can really feel his hope - his readiness...desperation?
I'm so curious about Tom's opinion about using "those words". (I'm being vague but I don't want to totally spoil for someone who may be reading the comments before reading the story...which would be awkward XD lol but still...). I hope you know what I'm referring to. The psychology of your characters is so intriguing.
:( This is making me miss my kink!family.
*hoping you don't mind my rambling*...
I feel similarly re: wanting Bill to reflect...I know why that's such a soft spot for me, now that I think about it.
*just made it to the end notes*
I'm really glad you like the banner :D.
I know I talked a lot about myself while reading this XD but it's kind of how I process things. I really enjoyed the chapter. I felt connected to the characters, or at least the characters how I've perceived them.
Author's Response: Tom is just aiming for the good boy. He needs it deep inside. I think chapter eleven will deal with your 'words' interest. At least, I hope it will. And thank you so much for the reviews and the banner! It means a lot to me as an author. It doesn't matter that they're about you - it's good that it makes you relate it to yourself too. :D
Date: 07/09/13 01:15 pm Title: Wanting, Needing, Denied
I feel so exhausted after reading this. I probably feel a lot like Tom does right now, actually. I can really relate to his character a lot. So right now I'm just sort of out of it. This is great and I'm glad you're writing it.
Author's Response: *gives you coffee* I'm glad you liked it. and that you cared enough to review. And that you talk through it with me. *snugs you very tight* Tom's tired. But he's got a Bill.
Date: 07/09/13 12:52 pm Title: Bridles and Begging
I have so many tears but they aren't coming out
OH MY GOD
*cuddles this chapter*
I have to print this and cherish it forever.
Author's Response: *pets you gently* I'm glad you liked it. *slides you a box of tissues too*
Date: 07/09/13 12:43 pm Title: Stripping Down and Weeping
The flailing that is happening...
OK so there are like "happy buttons" in my brain
And this chapter pressed all of them
It felt like someone was tickling the inside of my brain
So I'm flailing
and like
yeah...
Author's Response: I have nothing to say to this except: "I am pleased" and *pushes more buttons to see what happens*. :D Thanks for reviewing through the flail!
Date: 07/09/13 12:13 pm Title: Denied and Frustrated
I kind of relate to Tom with being "not so fond of the clean-up operation" that has to happen after certain things. Never been to a club but I feel that way about a lot of things.
Crap - I forgot to post this on the last chapter becuase I was too eager to keep reading. So everything before this is for the 2nd chapter, and everything after is for the 3rd.
POOR THING OMG (I know this is a useless review but I just feel so sorry for him)
Author's Response: No reviews are useless reviews - unless it's a spam or flame which is yours was most certainly not. So think I think it's awesome. And ew, clean up. Tom hates it. *cuddles you and him*
Date: 07/09/13 11:46 am Title: Patience and Rewards
THIS IS AWESOME AND I'M NOT EVEN HALF WAY DOWN THE FIRST CHAPTER
O_O *is now finished*
Author's Response: YAY! I'm glad you like it. Also, I love the Bill gif. *pets the excited Bill* Thank you for your lovely review!
Date: 07/02/13 05:35 pm Title: Wanting, Needing, Denied
someone needs to get fucked its good but someone needs to get fucked
Author's Response: It's happening! Slow and steady - eleven is up now :D Thank you for your 'interesting' words :P
Date: 06/30/13 06:41 pm Title: Wanting, Needing, Denied
Oh man, the torture. I'm feeling it right along with Tom. And, what will Bill do next?!? Oh the torture!
Author's Response: Always more to come! Thank you for your review!
Date: 06/27/13 06:23 pm Title: Wanting, Needing, Denied
Great to see this updated :). Especially when everything has been more than shitty. You made me love Tom again : D.
No, really, I absolutely love Tom here, the confused, needy, very submissive. It's especially the need to be taken care of that triggers me in him. It's so gentle and so brutal at the same time. I hope Bill will be very kind to Tom. He deserves it.
Author's Response: I'm trying on this but I have sworn off of EVER posting anything that's a WIP. From now on, ONLY complete fics so I just have to feed a chapter a week up here. XD And I'm glad you found this when you needed it. It sounds pretty harsh in RL for you. I love this Tom - he's beautifully broken but Bill's able to hold him all together, and it's exactly as you describe - gentle and brutal at the same time. I don't know what Bill will do, but it'll be exactly what Tom needs. I hope. More soon!
Date: 06/24/13 02:27 am Title: Wanting, Needing, Denied
Hes almost there xD please more!
Author's Response: ALMOST there. He's almost there! He's just got to hold on a little bit longer!
Date: 06/23/13 10:27 pm Title: Wanting, Needing, Denied
Lucky Tom. He's only had to wait 10 days for this moment. We've had to wait 11 months :P Another could mean another 3 months. Don't do that to me
Author's Response: If y'all keep going on about it, I'll make you wait another year :P And eh, Tom'll get what Tom deserves. Maybe. I can't decide yet XD
Date: 05/01/13 07:14 pm Title: Subspace and Sleep
Please more, i love it.. please more more please more
Author's Response:
Date: 04/29/13 04:11 pm Title: Subspace and Sleep
Awww, this is always so (maybe unexpectedly) emotional. I donä't even exactly concider this as smut, but more like the deep level of emotional affection, psychological analysis, revealing of something very fragile. It's not really smut, a physical act of sex.
I absolutely loved this fic... for many reasons and for some, which are just "my kind of thing". You'rer always so gentöle with Tom and I like it. I don't think I can take well on anyone beiong harsh to him in any way these days. I'm so soft for him. You always make me want to hold him. Precious Tomi...
Author's Response: Smut is more... idk. Raunchy. I don't think quite fits under that. I like your concept of it - more about what's inside, than what's outside. rnrnrnI try to be gentle in this fic. It's not about pain or hurting, even though that comes up so much. It's about Bill holding Tom very carefully, keeping him in the right space, and just... giving him what he needs. I always want to hug Tom but this universe gives me those feelings especially. rnrnWe're almost at the end of this section - maybe another three chapters or so, but I hope to carry on again soon with another section. Hope to see you there soon! :D
Date: 04/27/13 03:01 pm Title: Subspace and Sleep
So happy you updated, and I loved this chapter. I love the way you get inside Tom's head and how you explain the way the submission works in the twins' relationship. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your lovely review. I enjoy playing with submission in the twins' relationship and feeling out how it makes them feel and behave. Tom's head is delightful to be in. I hope to have the next chapter up soon!
Date: 04/27/13 02:00 pm Title: Subspace and Sleep
I'm so glad you see you updated this story!! If we're being honest, I kind of forgot about it :( I'm hoping that you'll be updating regularly again? I loved this chapter! Poor Tom :(
Author's Response: D: Sad to hear that you forgot about it. I hope to update soon - as long as the muse co-operates. Poor Tom, though.
Date: 04/27/13 06:10 am Title: Subspace and Sleep
i absolutely live this. It so so soothing an calming and a turn on... Wow.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thank you so much for reviewing :D