Date: 08/04/12 06:04 pm Title: Disobedience and Bathrooms
I love it poor tomi
Author's Response: Poor poor boy. But he should have known better than to defy Bill and now he has to pay the price...
Date: 08/04/12 05:59 pm Title: Disobedience and Bathrooms
I love this story. It's really amazing.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for reviewing! Can't believe how many people like this....
Date: 08/02/12 07:49 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
unf, i love this so much!! please write more
Author's Response: New chapter going up tonight, and thanks for reviewing!rn
Date: 08/01/12 02:38 pm Title: Denied and Frustrated
Perfectly written tension and rebelling against in a battle of dominance and power. It doesn't even need to be physical, not forcing. It's the battle ofminds. In a way I feel sorry for Tom, but then again... he should have known better not to challenge. Bill knows the best. And oh, nipple play. I just want to abuse those nipples (ops!)... ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter. Really looking forward to it! :)
Author's Response:
Nope - it's maybe between sixty and eighty percent mental between Bill and Tom; and Bill rarely ever needs to use force on Tom to get him to do something. He should have known better not to challenge Bill - it /never/ ends up well for him, but he'll learn. One way or another, he'll learn.
rnrnrnNipple play for the win. Male nipple play, only, for some reason. I have no idea why.
rnrnNext chapter is due in tonight! Thank you for reviewing and I hope you like it too!
Date: 07/31/12 09:55 pm Title: Denied and Frustrated
wow, I love it and cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Next chapter is due up tonight!
Date: 07/30/12 09:14 am Title: Patience and Rewards
I ABSOLUTLY love this story, I can't wait for more to be posted
Author's Response: Next chapter is set for posting tonight, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/29/12 10:09 pm Title: Denied and Frustrated
Aww poor little Tomi! Maybe Bill will let him off easy for good behavior? But I kinda hope he doesn't... I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Unfortunately for him, Bill will not be letting Tom off early for good behavior. :D More will be coming - next chapter will be posted tonight.
Date: 07/29/12 06:54 pm Title: Denied and Frustrated
This is so great! I zipped through the first three chapters and was so disappointed to see that there were no more for me to read right now. Your story summary was very good, drew me right in.
The relationship between Bill and Tom in this is wonderful because it's clearly a very kinky, bdsm relationship they have going on, but instead of being super contrived with written out rules, rituals, and titles of "master" or "sir," it's just very organic, and you made it very clear that this dynamic is one that has been developing between the twins for years, building on itself. I like that you use the limited first person so that we only see very far into Tom's head. And not very enthused to admit this next, but I actually found the enema stuff to be really hot *feels shifty for admitting this*. It was probably the way you wrote it.
I don't know how long you plan to make this fic, but I'm really hoping for a lot more.
Author's Response: There are more chapters to read now but I'm so sorry I didn't respond to your review earlier! Thanks for your comment on the summary - I was nervous about that. You are correct about the relationship between Bill and Tom - it's just been a slow steady development built on what works and trial and error for them; so it builds very organically. I picked Tom's head because I felt that Bill's would be too... we would know too much if we saw Tom from his perspective, especially at first. Don't worry about the looking forward to the enema - lots of people have said that about this story! There's loads more to come so thank you and hope to see you around on the reviews page soon!
Date: 07/29/12 05:17 pm Title: Denied and Frustrated
OH dear me... Poor Tom! (Although I cackled madly and snorted water up my nose at your ANs!) Bill is oh so very good at being this dominate. As is Tom just... being used to following Bills rules. Some rules though... But simple and just enough really for a D/s relationship. And all subs get a bit high-headed at times. ;-) It happens, and then you get punished for it. For Tom, with enemas, apparently. Can't wait to read that! As he says himself, he'll probably go mad! X-D Once that cock ring is off, the poor guy will just burst without touch, I fear! X-D Lovely chapter, my dear...
Author's Response: Belated reply but my ANs are awesome :D .... Poor Tom; his enema chapter has just been posted and it doesn't go at all well for him... Shame that. But he's high headed at the moment as you say - Bill needs to bring him down, hard. Their relationship is quite organic, just based on what works, what doesn't and then filling in the gaps really so there can't be too many rules that are so explicit... Thanks so much for reviewing *hugs*.
Date: 07/29/12 12:59 pm Title: Denied and Frustrated
Okay, I feel like being the adult and pointing out that cockrings are not safe for extended use, and not to try this at home. You should probably disclaim that somewhere is the story/chapter notes.
Damn Tom, five more minutes, and you probably would've been home free. Wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Right-o~ Thanks for the heads up; I forget these normal things sometimes. Thank you for pointing that out; inevitably someone will try it anyway... >.>rnrnrnBut yeah, five more minutes and home free would have meant a whole new meaning. Still. Poor baby. *pets*
Date: 07/29/12 04:07 am Title: Denied and Frustrated
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and the next chapter is due up tonight!
Date: 07/28/12 10:26 am Title: Bathing and Hopes
UNF, so hot! So, so hot! My mind is about to explode -hot! :)
You write the mental submission and Tom's desperation so beautifully, I really love it. Makes me want to read more and more and more, damnit. Very good job with this one and totally what I was after with my prompt!
Author's Response: I am so glad I fulfilled it so far, but I've changed it up in the next chapter. Hope you like the different direction? Thanks for the review and I'm glad you like it!
Date: 07/28/12 10:12 am Title: Patience and Rewards
*grinning* Did I ever tell you that it was me behind this prompt? Well, now I did. :D
Thank you so much for filling this and I'm really excited to read this! There's just something so hot in the thought of Tom being so ultimately submissiver that he'd let happily BIll do every decision for him. Really exciting and hot. ;)
Author's Response:
Noooo! Get out of here?! ARGH, now it's got to be awesome so I don't disappoint! Actually, I kind of suspected that you would like it - Crescendo had a lot of sub!Tom feels - but you as the prompter? Nevah!
rnrnI love the idea of Tom as submissive. I don't know why it's so hot but I'm so bored of subBill at the moment. :D I guess the only thing to say is, thank you for such an awesome prompt, and enjoy the rest of the fic!
Date: 07/28/12 04:28 am Title: Bathing and Hopes
nice chapter!
i cant wait wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It's up and posted for you and I hope you enjoy it!
Date: 07/23/12 10:09 pm Title: Bathing and Hopes
I saw this prompt myself and was intrigued by it, and if I had any notion that I could've done it any justice at all I would've, but I'm pretty crap at writing, just love reading. But WOW, did you ever do a fantastic job so far, in my opinion. I'm definitely interested in reading more. Keep up the fantastic work
Author's Response: Aww, now I'm blushing XD. I loved the thought of this prompt - the trust, the careful balance, the emotional range it could stretch to... Perfection! Thank you for your kind words and I hope to update soon!
Date: 07/23/12 09:31 am Title: Bathing and Hopes
Well, WELL... TopBill. Love that. BotTom... Guh.... So much I love that. Not necessarily together, but gawd damn. Can't get more D/s then this. And I am such a sucker for that. LOVED every word. :-D
Author's Response: I know TWC isn't usually your cup of tea, but I'm glad I tempted you with BotTom and D/s as well. And uh... Well, all I can say for the next chapter is 'it's got to get worse before it gets better'.
Date: 07/23/12 07:19 am Title: Bathing and Hopes
i can't wait to see what bill has in store :D
Author's Response: Oh, you'll be surprised.
Date: 07/23/12 02:22 am Title: Bathing and Hopes
Oh, you are good. Way to build up the anticipation. Everything is done so tenderly, so lovingly, though. Even though Bill's in charge and there are some things, like the enema and not being alowed to come, that Tom hates or finds distressing, he endures because he wants to do it for Bill, and Bill takes such good care of him. I'm really loving this story.
Author's Response: :D I love your reviews, you know. How you can just reach into the chapter and just pick out the most salient points, the best ones that I was trying to project and lay them out like that... It's wonderful. I hope to please you with the next chapter though! And things get difficult. Big time, big style.
Date: 07/22/12 06:38 pm Title: Patience and Rewards
Ooooh. This is sooo good. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hallo, I think I've seen you on my fics before! Coming back for more? You're in luck, just sent off the next bit to the beta. It'll be posted in the morning. *she says with her fingers crossed behind her back*
Date: 07/22/12 05:58 am Title: Patience and Rewards
i love this already :) can't wait to see where it goes
Author's Response: Gotta say, your username always makes me go O.o for a moment XD But I'm sure you'll enjoy it - next bit is coming soon.