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Reviewer: Constanza Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/13 08:00 pm Title: I'd Lie

Hello! It's awesome the fact that you're a male author in this site! I'd love to see this story updated, i think it has so much potential and i ship Billshido so hard.... Also I'd love to see your pic in your profile, please!

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 08:29 am Title: I'd Lie

Poor Tom :( , but I'm kind of happy for Bill and Bushido i guess.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 02:14 am Title: I'd Lie

I want a pool where hot guys make out in it and I get to watch. *pouts* Bill gets around but it's only two guys so not really-ish.

ICWUDT SEXY LINGERIE

I liked the part where Bushido was talking to Bill and saying in his head what he really wanted to say. That was a really good way to show what he wants and what he ends up doing.

The ring is missing? If it's really missing, then there's Bill's chance. Or it could be Natalie being a buttinski and preventing more Billshido.

Take care on your silk road, my dear stallion, and I hope to talk to you somehow! That's gonna be a long two weeks without you and the addictiveness that is your rainbow mane. &hearts

Author's Response: I actually had a moment of hesitation when writing this because I didn't know if Bill seemed slightly whore-ish for kissing two guys in one day. And of course, there had to be lingerie ;) Natalie's whole role in this story is to be a big buttinski. I shall miss you, I hope you don't miss me too much!

Reviewer: LittleMissSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 01:48 am Title: I'd Lie

Is Billshido endgame? Or is it Bill/Tom?

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see ;)

Reviewer: mizu Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/12 01:46 am Title: Untouchable

Oh, you're going to give me some Billshido??!! I will kiss your feet! Gimme lots of Billshido, and I will kiss your feet, with tongue! There isn't enough of it, I tell you, and someone should write a senator, or something. You've got us diving right in (oh, that was awful) to this story - Mr. Ferchichi staring blatantly at Bill, but doing nothing about it, Tom staring and going after what he wants. Bill not getting what he wants because he DOESN'T have the ladyballs to chase Mr. Ferchichi. And poor Tom. Second best. But even so, he's gettin some! Now, I will try to get what I want: more Billshido! So hurry up and write more, gimme gimme! You're right that you've got a lot of stories started, and I love them all. Glad to see you're not so insecure in your writing abilities that it keeps you from actually doing it, because you've got the talent, even with the attention span of a 2 year old on Red Bull. Okay, here are a couple shorties I am pretty sure you will enjoy: Kishmet's Laying Claim, and Tinie's Daddy's Boys. Now, back to work!

Author's Response: How did I not see this review until just now? I suck. The sad thing is, I'll never be able to write a fabulous Billshido story like you so clearly have. I'm literally writing the next chapter now and this review only made me more eager to get it finished! And omg I've actually already read both of those stories and loved them so it's genius that you would recommend them! We're totally twinsies! Now time for me to get back to work!!

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/12 12:38 am Title: Untouchable

So much Natalie hate! But who would cheat on Bushido? Why? How??? *shakes head* I've never heard the word "skeevy" before. "Ski-v."

So Tom is basically just a warm body to Bill, lol! Bu would like that, while Tom would be not a little sad. XD

Author's Response: I had no idea if skeevy is even a real word. Spell check doesn't think so, or else I'm just spelling it wrong. But people use it IRL so it has to be a real word... right? rnrnAnd you can't really blame Bill, can you? I mean, if Bushido was taken but Tom was willingly offering himself... I'd take advantage of that substitute...

Reviewer: ladyfarcly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/12 11:55 pm Title: Untouchable

i like it

Reviewer: kikobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/12 04:32 pm Title: Untouchable

Bill should have told Bushido no matter what Tom said. Bushido has the right to know. What a skeevy little boy Bill is. And Natalie really is just a little whore. XD

10/10
*****

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/12 09:10 am Title: Untouchable

Great chapter! Wish there was more billshido contact thought :P

Author's Response: It's coming, I promise!!

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/12 07:50 am Title: Untouchable

it's a billshido or not ???

Author's Response: It is, but shhhh cause Bill and Bushido just don't know it yet!

Reviewer: Constanza Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/12 10:25 pm Title: Untouchable

Besides with a man so unf as Bushido... I want a longer chapter next time please! Oh and a jealous and territorial Bu!

Author's Response: It's funny that you should mention that. I was literally just thinking to myself that it must be physically impossible for me to write a chapter longer than 2000 words. I don't know what it is... But I'll try harder for you!!!

Reviewer: Constanza Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/12 09:25 pm Title: Untouchable

I want Tom to know he's not important at all! Lol

Reviewer: ladyfarcly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/12 03:52 pm Title: Mine

great start cant wait for more

Reviewer: ingold Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/12 08:31 am Title: Mine

Exciting! Go on.

Reviewer: Constanza Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/12 11:09 am Title: Mine

Cat fight! Cat fight! Cat fight!

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/12 09:50 am Title: Mine

Looks really interesting to me ;). I will always enjoy a good billshido or non related 'cest, even better if there is both :P. Hope the next update will come soon.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/12 12:32 am Title: Mine

Bill's milkshake brings all the boys to the yard~ His booty is highly coveted. I have to say though, I was impressed with Tom wanting to ask Bill on a date first, and not just try to get in his pants (although I'm sure that's a priority in his mind).

I'll be sitting over here concentrating really hard on the word "threesome." You can interpret that as you will.

Wouldn't it be really amazing and terrifying if Natalie seduced Bill first, and rubbed him in Tom and Bu's faces?

Author's Response: Hmmm... a threesome, you say? I don't know.. you might have to beg really hard for me to be able to swing that in this plot :/ We'll see.

Reviewer: kikobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/12 09:08 pm Title: Mine

Ew, possessive women are pathetic xD
They're the ones who get dumped the quickest.
Bill sounds like quite the charmer C; I hope to see some TomxBill and BillxBushido ;D

10/10
*****

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