Date: 08/19/13 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
I love romantic stories, but I always tent to look for paranormal fics and this one caught my attention because of the banner and the summary. But when I started to read it I never thought that it could be so dammed good. I even dreamt of it some nights. Thank you for writing it. And I know that you left the end that way for a purpose, but if you have the desire to make a sequel, I’ll be your first reader.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!This thing took me over four years to finish with all the editing and re-writing, but I like the way it ended. There were plans for a sequel in which Bill wakes up and finds out that Tom is trapped in his own mind...which would then lead to a gallant rescue by Bill, Billa and Shiva. Unfortunately, without Minni the whole thing kinda falls apart. He's just so CUTE. Thank you again for reading!
Date: 03/29/13 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 19
Alright, I'm kind of glad you didn't put the major character death warning in until this last chapter, or I may not have read it. Your story was intriguing and disturbing. I was really starting to wonder what the hell was going on in Bill's head, with his absolutely shattered sense of self, and how Tom would ever be able to help him, and what would happen to their relationship when Bill finally came back. While the wrap-up could have been an easy out, sort of one of those cheapie endings where "it was all a DREAM!! Wow!" it actually made the story more disturbing. And sad. The way it's written seems pretty cut and dried - Bill is dead. Tom had a mental collapse after the death, and completely turned inwards, searching for whatever tiny shards of his brother that he could find. Shiva embodied the betrayal by Bill - that ultimate, selfish act of committing suicide, that deeply cruel action that would injure Tom for the rest of his life. Looking back now from the understanding that Bill is dead, it seems that Tom's sexual desire for his twin was simply part of going through so many emotions, searching his own mind for everything it could find about his twin. Sex is tied to practically everything we humans do, so that's going to be somewhere in his subconscious. Realizing he raped Bill was the guilt associated with discovering those thoughts. I love stories that can be analyzed, so thank you, you did a great job on that front! And thank you for finishing the story, I was worried it had been abandoned. With what you had planned for the ending, it really needed to be finished, so I'm glad you did!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really love the analysis (though now it makes me doubt whether I should write that sequel or not, since this ending is apparently so good >>). I love your interpretation of Shiva and Bill's actions...they're so different from what I imagined, but they definitely feed my creativity! I was really worried about the whole cliched 'it's a dream!' ending, since it seems like I do that in ALL my fics :/ (ex. Flatline) I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
Date: 03/09/13 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh my god, you shocked the hell out of me with this last chapter!! I absolutely looooooved this story! You have a serious talent for a good plot!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Keep your eyes open for the sequel!
Date: 03/08/13 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 19
Whoa! Dat ending... Mind = blown. Fantastic darling.
Author's Response: I'm working on a sequel now! :D Thank you so much!
Date: 03/05/13 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
noo haha
Author's Response: oh good!
Date: 03/04/13 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha
you sound like me
i actually dont remember what i was so shocked about
Author's Response: Oh, shocked! I was thinking that you were exasperated >.O
Date: 03/03/13 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
nothing
just Bill
Author's Response: What'd he do? Can you tell I never re-read? :P
Date: 03/02/13 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh boy....
Author's Response: What happened? *flails*
Date: 03/02/13 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
if this is the story im thinking it is, i cant wait
Author's Response: Hopefully!
Date: 03/02/13 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 19
Ouch... Damn... Didn't see that coming! When you asked if this was good or bad, I say that excellent job :).
But oh, so sad. I hate to see the twins separated and this (possible) ending was so heartbreaking. Theynever should end up like this, they belong together. Not this tragically. So very sad... *sigh*
But good. Well done! It was an interesting journey indeed. Thank you! :)
Author's Response: I really think I might write a one-shot sequel or something. Because hey, happy endings are awesome. And I can SO turn this into a happy ending...somehow. Working on it, haha.
Date: 01/28/13 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh? Ooo-kay then... Hmm... Interesting. I have no glue how your mind is planning this, so I guess I just have to wait, but this was interesting chapter. It's so complicated to built multiple personalities and even inside one another.
Btw, I knew you were talking about this fic when you asked of how to kill someone in Twitter. ;)
Author's Response: Shhhhhh... :P Yes, it's not like I'm writing any OTHER fics right now, haha. This was the HARDEST CHAPTER, you have no idea. Maybe I should have broken it up into two chapters >.-
Date: 01/25/13 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a review.
This is a good story so far.
This is me being a smartass.
ps:imleavinganotherreview.
Author's Response: >_> Smartass :) I'm glad you like it!
Date: 01/23/13 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 17
Ouch... that was brutal. Obviously in twisted mind everything is possible, but it's still brutal to be mindfucked like that. I'm sorry for both of them for such traumatic incident. It's really heartbreaking. They'll be okay, but it's still sad. I guess I'm very sensitive when it comes to the idea of ruining their brotherhood.
Just get rid of Shiva already!
Author's Response: Sadly, the next chapter is even more brutal than this (and more of a mindfuck!) At least they have each other...right?
Date: 01/19/13 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 17
OH My dear good lord kdalsdasdamsd
;0; so sad askldasda kill Shiva that bastard kasdaksd!!! ;u;
how could he OMG dasldkasd poor Boys
poor Bill he really needs help asldkmasd :(
Tom holding him even if they are adults hahaha loved that part dksasd
OMG can't imagine whats going to happen ;u;
but I'm so glad i was wrong about shiva being Bill but then this happen !!!!!!!!! don't know what to think hahahha at least we know now that he is the real Bill TuT !!!
AMAZING chapter thank you so much!!!
Author's Response: I KNOW, RIGHT? Glad for the review, thanks! ^^
Date: 01/08/13 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 16
It is heartbrwaking to think that no, Tom will not be there to fight all Bill's fight. Not even in real lives. It's really sad thought actually and something I prefer to push aside - even if it's part of growing up.
But hmm, I'm curious about the next chapter now.
Author's Response: Yes, but it's an important lesson for him to learn, all the same :(
Date: 01/07/13 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 16
OHGOTT!!!!!!!!!! is that shiva right ??????akdadms OMFG fckfckfck ;u;skda akdmkdakdmsd dying dying you let me here dying xD awesome chapter
Tom!!!! yu silly kdkamdaksd ahhhhh
that room with all the dolls gave me chills xD hahaha creepy really creepy. love it!!! xD
thank you so much for this chapter i will be waiting for the next!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: No telling....but maybe ^^ Thanks for the review!!
Date: 01/04/13 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh snap! I'm thinking that Bill isn't the real Bill now... Is it Shiva trying to retake control permanently? Oh, I can't wait for the answer! Hurry and update please!
Author's Response: Of course Shiva is, that's kind of his M.O., haha :) No word yet on if that's the real Bill or not, though!
Date: 12/30/12 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 15
It's sad and still kind if expected that Bill diesn't want to let go so easily. Humanmind works like that. How easy would it be to just stay there forever and not ever again face the real world? Their especial relationship will provably need to get sorted out before this all ends. It was alwats there, just a but hidden, I guess.
Waiting fof the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: I can just imagine Bill pouting about having to go back out...but hey, he's scared of Shiva. Who can blame him? And yes, they should...probably do that at some point >_>
Date: 12/25/12 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yay! But, but smt is indeed on it's way? I can almost taste Tom's frustration in the air and we both know he'd do anything for his brother. I guess I'll have to wait to find out what's up next and how much he will have to do before he actually really saves Bill.
And the kiss, ah! :)
Author's Response: Muhaha I shall reveal nothing! >:D I'm glad you finally got around to reading it!
Date: 12/23/12 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ohmigod, finally! I'm so happy with this new chapter. Please update asap, I'm truly on the edge of my seat here!
Author's Response: Next week, I promise! ^^ Thanks so much for reviewing!