Date: 07/30/12 02:26 am Title: Chapter 5
I love it babe!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 07/30/12 01:00 am Title: Chapter 5
Thats it Tom,go get Bill!
Cant wait for the nest chapter
Author's Response: Yeah! *fistpump* ^^ Thanks!
Date: 07/29/12 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well, if they thought she sounded stupid by her explanation, I would think they would try to get a better one...but that's me...
Yea...that would've been a good question Tom...why DO they need to sedate Bill too? Suspicious.
Y'now, I've always thought that if you did an experimental procedure whoever funds the study/research should cover the costs of you doing it. Especially if your insurance won't cover experiments, as mostif not all do not.
Good chapter! I will love to see more! Keep up the nice work!
Author's Response: Actually, I have no idea why they would need to sedate Bill, too. There was totally a good explanation in my head when I wrote it, and now I can't remember what it was. oh well xD Annnddd I have no idea who pays for experimental procedures, and I'm pretty sure Tom wouldn't either :) That makes sense, though! Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/28/12 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
Damn... I can only imagine how terrifying experience that must have beenm to Tom. Why Bill did fall into coma? Or smt like that? A simple overload of a brain? Things are getting nasty, aren't they?
I don't think this was bad chapter at all, don't worry about it. :)
Author's Response: Things ARE getting nasty :/ As far as why Bill fell into a coma...well, that will all come in the next chapter :) Thanks!
Date: 07/28/12 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ouch... Yeah, Bill definitely needs help, no doubt vabout it. Except I know how it is when you start to second guess yourself if it vwas just a joke and you're overreacting. I hipe things will turn better, because really, no career is worth of fear and streess like this.
Author's Response: Tell me about it >< It's kinda like 'Destroy the dream or let the dream destroy Bill'.
Date: 07/28/12 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, this is so sad somehow - to see the doubt and paranoia, worry and fear of living with someone who assumingly had mental issues that serious and think how you never saw it. Mentally exhausting. Poor twins...
Now up to the next chapter!
Author's Response: I know, right? :/ I really tried to convey his feelings in this chapter. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/25/12 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Uh oh, and thus the coma begins, right? It was kinda short, but really, it wasn't bad. I thought it was pretty great actually. The whole Bill deciding to remove his make up and squish his haor was pretty strange behavior...but I can't wait for the next up date! Keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response: Bill's kinda spazzing out a bit...I wasn't sure if I should write more to lead up to it, but meh. This is a fast-paced story to begin with, so hopefully I'm doing it justice :) Thank you so much!
Date: 07/25/12 01:45 am Title: Chapter 4
What happenned to him??! super capi! ;D i like it so much your story is cautivante
updates soon please... sorry my english XD
Author's Response: *flails* I don't know what happened! Oh wait, yes I do >> << >> But you'll find out next chapter :)
Date: 07/25/12 12:35 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, what happened? Bill... and Tom! I hope it'll be all right soon.
Author's Response: Define 'all right' muhahaha >:D And as far as what just happened...explanation in the next chapter ^_^
Date: 07/25/12 12:28 am Title: Chapter 3
I wonder what Bill suffers from. Changing topics fast sounds pretty harmless, but seeing things that aren't there is more worrying, and cutting is very worrying. Tom is doing his best to help...
Author's Response: Very, very worrying :/ Thanks so much for the reviews!
Date: 07/25/12 12:07 am Title: Chapter 2
I can fully understand Tom's worry and questions. Poor both twins.
Author's Response: I know, right? :/
Date: 07/25/12 12:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice start!
Author's Response: Thanks!! ^^
Date: 07/23/12 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh my GOD, this is really good. i am so afraid for them thought!!!....can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: You should be. You really, really should be. *voice of doom* On a lighter note, thanks for reviewing and reading ^_^
Date: 07/22/12 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
It's really good so far! (:
Author's Response: Thanks! ^^
Date: 07/22/12 04:43 am Title: Chapter 3
Hmm...I definitely think that's a new banner, but is that summary new too?
Wow, this is set a while ago. Before they tried to breakout in America....wait, you did mention just after Zimmer 483 didn't you. Sorry, I forgot for a minute...
I think David should take this a bit mmore seriously, and he should've came up with Tom's idea himself. Pay off the doctor to say whateveer they want, and send Bill to a psychiatrist of their own on the sly. Or at the very least arrange for the paid psychiatrist to recommend a few weeks off to destress and 'recenter' himself, or something.
Tom's repition to himself and rationalizing worry me a bit about his own sanity, and he most certainly should've went and told David Bill is indeed a threat to himself, and explain walking back into the room, and about the blood on the bathroom floor, and the window being opn and everything.
Wonderful update! Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Yes, to both the banner and the summary. The story isn't changing from what I have written, but I'm attempting to market it a little more, haha. I only have like...six banners for this fic xD
I think Tom's still trying to figure out a way to keep the band AND his brother...though I'm not sure either is an option at this point, if he keeps up the way he's doing.
Date: 07/21/12 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hmm...maybe Tom is the crazy one? Or not. But remember, just because you're crazy doesn't mean 'they' aren't after you. *solemn nod*
This is certainly interesting so far. I look forward to seeing where this goes
Author's Response: EXACTLY. Thanks for the review! ^.^
Date: 07/20/12 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm curious to see where this is going. I haven't quite figured out what kind of diagnose Bill got, but yeah, sounds plausable. I'm glad to see you fitting in little details of "real life", they make fics realistic. And true, all those scenarios could happen.
Interesting...
Author's Response: I'm actually writing an original fiction based on this at the same time, and in the original fiction, it's actually just a sleep disorder. The one here is a little bit different, and I took a bit of liberties with it :) Thank you so much for the review! Totally made my day ^^
Date: 07/17/12 10:45 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really good! I'm surprised, too, that there was only one review before mine...maybe everyone just had a case of the Mondays. But I'm looking forward to the next chapter, so I hope you post soon! It was really well written.
Author's Response: Thanks! ^^ The next chapter should be up sometime in the next week, depending on how lazy I am. Thankfully it's already written, though.
Date: 07/17/12 06:36 am Title: Chapter 1
I am sad and shocked this has no reviews. It's a really good starter, and I don't remember seeing anything like this before.
Author's Response: I know! D: And thank you so much for the review :) I can't remember if I ever posted this here, but I've rewritten it like...four times now, at least haha.