Date: 12/22/12 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
ahhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh asdskda me me meeee i fear thats not Bill OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! dear good lord!! you let me here dying DYING for more ;u;
xD!!! excellent chapter!!!! thank you so much
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I can't wait for the next chapter either!
Date: 12/22/12 01:21 am Title: Chapter 14
I'm pretty sure something IS gonna go wrong once again. I'm still hoping that Tom can get Bill back though.
Author's Response: Well, they haven't confronted Shiva yet, so the main problem IS still out there...if Shiva is the main problem, I mean. Muhaha >:D
Date: 12/21/12 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ive been waiting for this part for soo long ^_^ Please, please, PLEASE... Don't let this much time go betwen all your chapters!! Ive been cheking everyday for so long to see if the next chapter were out, and here it ISS :D !!
Author's Response: The next one is already halfway done ^^ Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: 11/19/12 05:51 am Title: Chapter 13
COME ON NOW!!!! Your killing me here I need more update please or I will cry!!!!! =(
Author's Response: I'm actually in the process of writing 50,000 words during the month of November for NaNoWriMo (check it out if you've never heard of it!) So I'll update this in December for sure! :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/27/12 10:44 am Title: Chapter 13
Hmmm, is he or isn't he a decoy? Only time will tell.
You really paint disgusting mental images here - about the rats and all. :D
I hope Tom gets to Bill somehow. And that it really is him.
Author's Response: Wooowwww I'm late to answer this. But yes, only time will tell. Lots of time, because of Nanowrimo, haha. And I try ^^
Date: 10/24/12 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
Hurry up and update! I'm so addicted! Really interesting concept you have there!
Author's Response: Thanks! Working on the next chapter now!
Date: 10/24/12 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
sobbing uncontrollably OHHH GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kadmlakdmadkadkad
the rats the fckin rats i just have breakfast and i feel a little sick lol
TTTTTuTTTTT
Amazing Chapter!!!
i have faith in TOm !!!!!! i have faith in him kajskaldjalksdaskd OMGOMGOMG :'(
hahhaha but if that one is Bill he cant save him jet or yes the end would be near skldjasdka hahhaha mixed feelings TuT
i want to Tom Finds Bill already but then what else dkajdaksdja the escape?!!! a final battle with shiva xD
oh Gosh hahaha this is like a movie seriously or a video game xD!!!!
love it love it!!!!!!!
omg!!!!!!
really grate chapter i will be waiting patiently for the next one thank you so much!!!!!!! i dont know why this one was hard for you to write but hope you don't stress yourself!!! let your beautiful mind and imagination finds its way!!! well if that's the case xD!!! anyway *u* thank youuuu so much!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so much! *flails* More soon! Also....RATS! :P
Date: 10/24/12 12:16 am Title: Chapter 13
Aww no please don't let the rats eat Bill alive! Shiva or not it's just a alter ego of Bill..maybe? I am so holding my breath for this! can't wait formore!
Author's Response: Wow, you're fast! O_O I just posted this! Haha.
Yes, the rats are bad. Bad, bad rats. Hopefully Tom can find a way to get to him!
Date: 10/01/12 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
THE EPICNESS OF THIS FIC aklsdmaskdamd *u*!!!
EVERY chapter gets better and better i just love it!!!!!!!!!!
THE SPIDERS!!!!! akdaskdad Tom handle it pretty well hahaha i would be in a corner crying and screaming like a crazy person hahaha XD.
the dolls are just ughhh so fascinating and scary *shivers* XD!!!!
i cant believe that place is real i really want to go one day
really fckin awesome!!!!!!
im just so glad i found your fic!!! is epic i cant wait for the next one.
ohhh and haha omg Minni wanted to play doctor hahaha my imagination fly really far away > u
Author's Response: Ack, spiders....they're so CREEPY! D: I'm really glad you like it...there will definitely be more soon! ^^
Date: 10/01/12 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 12
Actually not creeped, more like curious. It's clear that in some things Shiva was righjt: it's all Bill and no strangers. I just want to find out how Tom will rescue him if all of them are Bill?
Btw, when I've been reading this fic, Bill mind reminds me so much of former Soviet era Tallinn Prison in Estonia. I visited there last summer to take pictures and it was very impressive, spooky place (and I got great snapshots). If You'rte curious to see what comes to my mind of this, go here http://www.patarei.org/eng/index.php or Google Patarei Prison. :)
Author's Response: It's so funny that you say that! Because I based it mostly off of abandoned Soviet-era buildings, believe it or not! http://abandonedplaces.livejournal.com/2504788.html#cutid1 and http://abandonedplaces.livejournal.com/2518589.html#cutid1 are the main ones...I should tweet some on Twitter!! ANYWAY. Spooky, no?
Date: 10/01/12 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 11
My theory of them is that they are some sort of schitzophenic sides of Bill's mind. Truly existing, but probably without the cover of our awareness of how we express ourselves. Clearly they are battking though, at least to some extent.
Let's see where the elevator takes them. :)
Author's Response: Your insight is so epically amazing! And yes, yes they are battling hardcore.
Date: 09/30/12 03:50 am Title: Chapter 12
-_- you are a chapter tease!
Author's Response: Aren't I? ^^
Date: 09/30/12 03:43 am Title: Chapter 12
Haha i thought it would be more bloody and screemy but so far ots going great :)
Author's Response: I'm not very good at bloody and screamy ;)
Date: 09/29/12 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
*shiver* *twitch* *shudder*
Oh my god! Creeptastic! I loved the spider bit, and poor Minnie, he's a little creep, but he can't help it, he's just a lonely kid. *pouty face* he needs a hug! *snuggles him while keeping his hands faar away*
So...if Bill is in a room like this one, and Shiva can't find them there, does that mean Bill is safe from Shiva too? And if he's safe from Shiva, that means Shiva isn't the one to be worried about
Wonderful chapter. I'm so excited to read more! Keep up the fantastic work!
Author's Response: You're catching on quick! ;) Close, but not quite. More to be revealed....later, much later. Thanks so much for the review! Ack, now you've got me thinking about the spiders again. *twitches*
Date: 09/25/12 12:13 am Title: Chapter 11
their great just dont stop writing please!
Author's Response: I have no intention to! :)
Date: 09/24/12 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
So we all meet again. I understand Tom's feelings for Minnie, but I'm still not sure I trust him myself I just...seemed pretty convenient, this elevator situation. Like it was all a plan to get Tom away from the way he needed to go, and get Tom emotionally attached to Minnie, so he'll trust him more...
But yea, I really loved this chapter. Fantastic work. I am so excited to see more soon!
And yea, I love the level of gore you mention, just enough to creep me out, but not too detailed, if you were too detailed i'd probably stop reading. The level of creepiness you establish with the low level of gore is amazing. Keep up the fantastically spiffy work! See ya next week!
Author's Response: I love Minni, I really do. He's one of my favorite characters in this story (Shiva being the other one!).
I seriously scared myself while writing this, in the dark with only a candle flickering, listening to film scores from horror movies...yeah XD I'm glad you like my gore level! :D
Date: 09/24/12 01:22 am Title: Chapter 1
You have no idea how glad I am to see this updated. I was like, Yes! *shakefist* Cause I really love the story. Maybe what Tom is doing is to find the real Bill and blend all personality together? Just like a split personality disorder. Though I would love to meet more personalities and let them have a big fight. :):)
Author's Response: I'm glad to see your review! And yes, wouldn't that be a fun ending? I'll definitely keep it in mind.
Date: 09/19/12 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh... That was crazy. Though Tom just might get a grip of his own "twisted" thoights as well.
The rat part,.. Yack! *gagging*
It looks really dark in Bill's mind...
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom's really deep in it now! All I was thinking why I was writing this was Bill complaining about rats in some video XD
Date: 09/16/12 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm so sorry your home got broken into! You're okay though, right?
Wonderful chapter! I think, as creepy as they are, I'm going to like meeting Bill's decoys/alternate personalities.
You do this creepy gore thing really well. I have to make sure I don't read this fic before I go to bed. Yea, its that creepy.
Keep up the excellent work! I look forward to the next update!
Author's Response: I'm okay :) The only things I care about have now been replaced, thankfully :) EXCEPT THE ORIGINAL DRAFT OF THIS CHAPTER. anyway. I'm so glad you think I do the creepy/gore thing so well! I think I really suck at it, actually, but I'm my own worst critic lol I just don't like a lot of blood and gore in my fic, so I try to keep it to the minimum/don't talk about it so much. I'm rambling now. ANYWAY. thank you so much for reviewing! See you next chapter!
Date: 09/15/12 04:29 am Title: Chapter 10
An update! Shiva...now that's going to be interesting. The fact that Tom can get hurt in Bill's mind is fascinating. If literally then that's super weird, and if only figuratively then Bill and Tom must share a really strong bond I think. Hmm can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: I haven't decided if it's literally or figuratively yet...I feel like if it were literally, that would be way too matrix-y, you know? Thanks for reviewing!