Date: 11/24/12 01:03 pm Title: The Time Bill Came In Die Nacht
Aww, I understand Tom. Bill's orgasms should always belong to him, not David. That is - in a way - sneraky thing to play behind his back. I need to see what happens when Tom and Bill get to the backroom. And please, insert Tom to some of Bill's daddy plays? Please? ;)
Author's Response: The next chapter (or next few, considering I'm notorious for making them shorter than I plan to) will be all about Tom's reaction and how he wants to join in too.
Date: 11/18/12 12:51 am Title: The Time Bill Came On Stage
Yay! Jubilee jig with confetti and a little parade of dancing butt plugs! Happy happy happy happy! Sorry for the delay in reading this, finally back from vacation and working on my own chapter when I decided to see what you've been up to over there in China. I loved this scene - no slow build up, nothing complex, it fit in perfect with the rest of the story. Just WHAM! Bill! Butt plug! Stage! Orgasm! Your writing style is so quick and flows so well, I just love it. Then that last, dirty/tender scene with Dave, it was so sweet and perverted! And throwing in Tom spying on them was a nice little catch. Thank you for finally writing this chapter, it was worth the wait!
Author's Response: I'm so happy I could make you happy with this. I was worried that it seemed too rushed and would be a disappointment to you. I hope your vacation was lovely - less than a month left in China for me and then I'll be back home. There's going to be more with Tom's reaction next chapter ;)
Date: 11/16/12 08:44 pm Title: The Time Bill Came On Stage
Why do I feel like Bill will leave out his toys on purpose now? XD Especially if Tom's going to be involved soon.
I love that you chose Scream that Bill came! It was a screaming orgasm. And he screamed till he felt it. Whooo catdaddy.
p.s. I didn't notice any where/wear/ware mixups! ^_^ Great job!
Author's Response: Bill's definitely gonna "forget" to put his toys away in the future. And Tom's gonna have something to say about it next chapter. And I'm glad you could squeeze a catdaddy in there. Hollaback.
Date: 11/14/12 07:00 pm Title: The Time Bill Came On Stage
OMG, you posted this? Yay! I've been waiting for this naughty story to be updated again. It's so... naughty. I can't explain it, but it's both lighthearted and tidbit dirty without being uncomfortable or make you feel like a sick pervert. So cute... and hot. :)
Author's Response: Yes, I posted! Sorry if I kept you waiting @_@ the life of a student... rnrnI'm glad that it doesn't feel sick... Every time I go to write this story I can't help but think "People are gonna think I'm the weirdest person alive for even THINKING things like this..." and then a post it anyways. Your review means a lot to me <3 They keep me motivated.
Date: 11/13/12 06:16 am Title: Prologue
Great chapter, can't wait for the next
Date: 10/09/12 02:46 pm Title: The Time Bill Saved His Jeans
Please please update! I neeeed to know what happens on stage ;)
Author's Response: I'll hopefully be updating in the next few days!! Homework needs to stop kicking my ass first though.
Date: 09/09/12 01:20 pm Title: The Time Bill Saved His Jeans
What the..... of course I wanna read what happens on stage!! Pwease? *starts-searching-for-cupcake-recipe* You'll get cupcakes! xD
Author's Response: It took me two months, but I finally updated. I hope it's still deserving of cupcakes!!
Date: 09/01/12 10:18 am Title: The Time Bill Saved His Jeans
A filler? Hardly!
Thgis was hot. The spanking and the plug and all. And the end, OMG! You know how to do it for sure. ;)
I can't wait for the stage. Please give us the stage? :)
Author's Response: I always love your reviews! They give me such motivation and encouragement! :D The stage is definitely happening, but it might take me a little longer to crank out the next chapter now...
Date: 08/28/12 11:26 pm Title: The Time Bill Saved His Jeans
shit - after dragging me along for 2 chappies, i'd thank you to write what happens on stage if you can... :)
Author's Response: I got such positive feedback. I'm definitely gonna write it for you guys ;) Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/28/12 12:40 am Title: The Time Bill Saved His Jeans
wow :D
Date: 08/28/12 12:10 am Title: The Time Bill Saved His Jeans
David is giving in to the game! Bill loves it, wow. I didn't think I'd find the diaper hot but I did. Bill's tension onstage is going to be insane. Is he even going to make it to the stage without cumming?
Tom's going to see! :D I'd like it if you wrote what happens onstage.
Author's Response: I think "I didn't think I'd find ____ hot, but now I do" is a key part of our friendship. I'm so glad you liked it, because your approval means the world to me :P TOM'S DEFINITELY GOING TO SEE! And hopefully, it will be amazing.
Date: 08/27/12 06:31 pm Title: The Time Bill Saved His Jeans
Loved t his chapter. Definitely write about him on stage! I'd also like to see David change his diaper, that would be weirdly cute, right? xD And he did just drink three bottles of water o.o I have a feeling there will be more than one type of liquid in that diaper after the show! Ewwww, poor Bill! Update soon!
Author's Response: You totally read my mind for everything I have in store for this story! Hopefully a new chapter will be up in the next few days.
Date: 08/27/12 05:55 pm Title: The Time Bill Saved His Jeans
sldkfjalfjalfjaldjfasldjfalkjsdl go to the STAGE!!!!
Date: 08/27/12 09:47 am Title: The Time Bill Saved His Jeans
omg omg soooo hot dnejwjdskfks.
Date: 08/27/12 02:36 am Title: The Time Bill Saved His Jeans
Dirty. Jesus, this is beautifully dirty. We need to see what happens on stage, so don't you dare skip it. I hope you're sharing what you write with those Buddhist monks there in Tibet. I'm sure they would be more than thankful to stop doing that transcendental crap and meditate on pretty boys wearing butt plugs and diapers while simulating being breast fed by middle age men. How enlightening is that!!!!
Author's Response: It's official: idc what anyone else says, if you wanna see what happens on stage, then I'll write it, because I live in this world where your opinion means everything to me. I can't lie: I feel pretty enlightened after writing this.
Date: 08/26/12 02:45 am Title: The Time Bill Didn't Put His Toys Away
Naughty spcf, naughty! You know what the Chinese authorities are going to do if they spy on these filthy things you're writing? The little red army is going to march right down that silk road after you, and drop you into a dirty little cell for foreigners trying to corrupt their wholesome commie country that capitalists like you are trying to ruin with capitalist ideas about sex. They'll probably have buttplugs, too, but those will be strictly for punishment. And they'll probably be red. And you might even come out with a tattoo of Mao's face on your ass. Which would be kind of cool.
Author's Response: XD the mental image of all of that happening is hysterical. Fun fact: I got sent home from my silk road trip early. And by home, I mean back to school in Beijing, so I'm just stuck here by myself for a week. Except not really by myself. People keep staring at me because I'm white. But I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Date: 08/19/12 01:00 pm Title: The Time Bill Didn't Put His Toys Away
Can't blame Tom for freaking out. I mean, it's a whole other thing to cuddle insestuously with your twin than find him naked in your managers bed... or, wait?.. :D
Anyway, Bill gets what he deserves, because he was a naughty boy. Oh yes, he does. ;)
Author's Response: Don't you love it when a character's punishment really just becomes a reward for you?
Date: 08/18/12 06:53 pm Title: The Time Bill Didn't Put His Toys Away
O_O Wow, Bill on stage with a butt plug is so hot. I also liked their dirty talk. David just gave in, didn't he? Who wouldn't, though. Dang.
What is David going to do about Tom knowing? And likewise; what's Tom gonna do? Tom seemed to defend Bill wanting their mom in an earlier chapter.... Hm.
Author's Response: I figured it might be suspicious that David went from being all "eww gross Bill" to "come and sit on my lap, Bill" but apparently I was able to justify it.
Date: 08/18/12 02:00 pm Title: The Time Bill Didn't Put His Toys Away
Loved David's dirty talk, too. How the hell is Bill going to get through the show with the plug in his arse? What will Tom do is he finds out? Love this story. Next chapter soon, please.
Author's Response: I have some very specific plans for how Bill will make it through the show ;) We'll just have to wait and see if Tom finds out or not.
Date: 08/18/12 08:22 am Title: The Time Bill Didn't Put His Toys Away
Drool........ Damn, why did you stop here?? ;D Of course Bill is going to wear that thing! xD New chapter? *puts-cookies-in-front-of-you* ;)) Btw, you moved to China? Wow! :DD
Author's Response: I had to stop it there if I wanted to be able to post it before I left for my trip! The new chapter should be up as soon as I reach a hotel with wifi. But I love the idea of cookies!! :D Yes, I moved to China for a semester abroad. Not a permanent move, but I'll be here a few months.