Date: 02/10/13 03:43 pm Title: The Time Bill Got His Twin Back
Awww, poor Tomi needs his twin cuddles! Twin cuddles are good. I'm not twin, but I think I know what it is for Tom.
Can't wait to see what Tom will find and how it'll continue. I hope he gets his cuddles... and perhaps something more? ;)
Author's Response: I'm hoping for a lot more for Tom too ;) Bill was such a big meanie to him, flaunting his cumming on stage and then abandoning him immediately after the show?
Date: 02/09/13 07:07 pm Title: The Time Bill Got His Twin Back
Uh, I wonder how thist will end, sure, Tom might think it's okay, in thepry, even set is mind to it, but I wonder how he feel then he really has to face David and his baby brother like that?
Author's Response: You'll get to see what Tom does when he's faced with them in the next chapter :D Personally, I'm excited for it.
Date: 02/08/13 11:26 pm Title: The Time Bill Got His Twin Back
me encanta XD
Date: 02/08/13 10:23 pm Title: The Time Bill Got His Twin Back
You made me like Bill/David, I wasn't a big fan of that pairing before. Probably because David was a abusive pedo in every story I read. He still one in this story but in a good way haha, can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
Author's Response: I'm glad I could convert you (at least in a small way).
Date: 02/08/13 06:10 pm Title: The Time Bill Was Pacified
Loved it loved it loved it! How you make such sweetly twisted sex scenes must be your magic power. Bill's pitiable infantile emotional states are inexplicably heart wrenching. It's cute and sad and makes the reader want to cuddle and coddle him, just like Dave. At the same time, his crying baby routine is manipulative, and Dave falls right into Bill's trap. But you've made it so that it's almost understandable why Dave panders to this child - how can he help himself? Bill and his crying puppy eyes, his helpless act, is so adorable, yet so incredibly sexual at the same time, few grown men would resist the lure. Your writing is flawless. You make the mixture of sex and parent/child nurturing so erotic, yet so innocent (or is it so innocent, yet so erotic?). "Big boys don't latch themselves onto their Daddy's nipples, do they, Bill?" It's just.... delicious. Perverted. And choosing to not have a sex scene, but bring them just to the brink, cuddles with erections and pacifiers, closeness with horniness, was very interesting. It takes the scene up a notch, I think - to not simply continue with a good ass-pounding, but instead make it more complex, showing that there's almost more emotional need going on here than physical - impressive. And it was a decent length chapter, too, which allowed the images to unfold nicely, drawing the reader in to their little world. I'll keep saying it, because you're young and just starting out in life and a bolstered confidence can make all the difference in your choices - you definitely have a gift, and I really hope you continue to explore it.
Author's Response: I always know I done good when I get a review from you :D As I was writing this, I had no idea why Bill was crying, really. I just attributed it to falling into the role of the baby. But now I'm thinking it was more his way (even if it was subconscious) of keeping David's attention on him at all times. I can't promise that there won't be a sex scene between the two of them before this night is over. In a stunning turn of events, I already have the next chapter written and ready to post (trying to get myself on a schedule) and the night is still young. I'm hoping you'll still enjoy what's left to come. rnrnBy the way, I'm taking a "philosophy of Asian thought" course this semester and we've been focusing on Hinduism so far. This past week was all about karma and reincarnation and all that fun stuff - made me think of you and Karmic Lessons <3 It's making me even more curious to find out what's going to happen next.
Date: 02/06/13 06:05 pm Title: The Time Bill Was Pacified
Yay, you've brought this back! So, so excited... naughty me ;)
Aww, Bill plays his role right. This is so twisted and kinky, but still so hot. I love the pacifier! Can't wait for more!
...ans still hoping for Tom to take part, too...
Author's Response: Tom's time is coming soon... which reminds me, I have to add a side pairing to the summary or whatever. *runs off mischievously full of secrets*
Date: 02/06/13 03:03 pm Title: The Time Bill Cried for His Mommy
ROFL too funny huihuih
Date: 02/06/13 02:47 am Title: The Time Bill Was Pacified
A part of me wants to feel bad for Bill there on the toilet. But nah! Love it! Thanks for the update :)
Author's Response: I almost felt bad for him as I was writing it... but I know what's going to happen next, so I figured Bill would forgive me for the momentary lapse of control. Glad you loved it :D
Date: 02/05/13 10:34 pm Title: Prologue
Wow I just start reading need, can't believe I miss this! It's super :) would gladly see more!
Author's Response: I'm so excited to have a new reader! And so excited that you're enjoying it. Hopefully, I can whip my ass into gear and start updating regularly.
Date: 12/09/12 07:37 pm Title: The Time Bill Was Put In Time Out
David is taking good care of little Bill. Great job! I didn't spot any typos. It's really engaging and makes me want to read more but there's no "next" link. :(
Is Tom going to storm in and have a hissyfit? :D
Author's Response: I wish I could be Bill in this story :( I'm glad my lack of typos aren't impeding your enjoyment. Tom's reaction will probably different than you'd expect... or maybe it's exactly what you'd expect from him.
Date: 12/09/12 07:31 pm Title: The Time Bill Came In Die Nacht
Bill is lost in the endless waves of pleasure while Tom is steaming out the ears! And David is the root of it all!
I'm clueless to these things -- do they make adult diapers?
Date: 12/08/12 05:58 pm Title: The Time Bill Was Put In Time Out
hi ;) it's been a while ... sorry :( awesome! now I wanna know what Tom will do ... :D the cupcakes are history but I can offer you some Christmas Cookies ;) hope the next chapter is out soon :))
Author's Response: Next chapter should be Tom's chapter. I'll definitely take the Christmas cookies, I just hope I can post again soon even with finals coming up.
Date: 12/06/12 11:38 am Title: The Time Bill Was Put In Time Out
UNF, UNF, UNF, please, update weally, weally soon, okay? I want to read him peeing. *blush*
Haha, IO love this twisted little fic. :D
Author's Response: I'm hoping to write the next chapter to soon, but I'm in finals right now... :/ Hopefully I can find some time...
Date: 12/03/12 02:22 am Title: The Time Bill Was Put In Time Out
I hope you never ever ever stop writing. Need I say more? Well, I will anyway. I'm a talker......So, I was looking through my saved stories file, trying to find something good to read. I've got four pages of saved stories. Started on one. Unsaved it after half a chapter. Started a second. Unsaved it after a few paragraphs. Started a third. Unsaved it after the first few sentences. Here's the thing, spcf: All of the writers I deleted are probably young, and with that territory comes a background of immaturity and inexperience. You fit into that category simply by definition of being under 25. HOWEVER. Being youg, immature, and inexperienced does not need to mean being a BAD WRITER. And yet, there are, sadly, so many of those out there. Just no polish, no flair, they are missing that something special that is evident in what talented writers write even at a young age. So, what you wrote at twelve would run circles around what an untalented twenty year old would write. You've got that special gift that makes you a WRITER. You don't have to work at it, you don't have to force it. What you write, whatever it is, is good. Really good. You have what I dubbed "the chef's touch" - two people cook the same thing with the same exact ingredients. One is mediocre. The other is delicious. That person just has something inate, something special. So, do the world (and your talent) a favor, and KEEP WRITING. Forever. (and especially lovely, wonderful, dirty, pervy stories that have that touch of innocent fun you imbue in your writing. It's so, so good).
Author's Response: The first line of this amazing review had me laughing out loud. I'm a talker to - it comes with the territory of having an Italian family. In addition, I'm so glad that you consider me young. All of my Chinese friends have been teasing me about being old just because I'm 6 months into my 20s and they're all still 18 and 19. I think, in real life, I creep people out most of the time. This story is my way of taking my shit childhood and everything that was done to me and turning it into something light, humorous, and worthy of laughter. And then there's the small part of my brain that still gets turned on by the sexual abuse... and that's it. Dark past + sense of humor = this story. But when I try to laugh it off in real life, telling people "LOL I used to be touched when I was a kid" doesn't usually go over so well. Which I don't understand. Whenever you go through something bad, people always tell you that in a few years you'll be able to look back on it and laugh... and that's how I feel about this too. So, I'm glad you enjoy my round-about way of laughing at myself. It really helps me feel better and knowing that other people out there are enjoying it too just reassures me that I'm doing something right. :D That being said, I'll keep writing as long as it helps me sort my shit out, which hopefully will be forever.
Date: 12/02/12 06:18 pm Title: The Time Bill Was Put In Time Out
Cant wait till the next chapter hopefully soon :)))
Author's Response: I have my fingers crossed that I'll be able to post again soon. I have another week of classes and then a week of finals and then I'll be leaving China and have a regular internet connection today... so we'll see.
Date: 12/02/12 05:36 pm Title: Prologue
Aww poor Billy he was left in time out all on his own :(
Author's Response: He needs to learn his lesson about being a naughty little boy, don't you think? If he starts behaving, he'll be rewarded more ;)
Date: 12/02/12 01:19 pm Title: The Time Bill Was Put In Time Out
I just love how David treats Bill like a naughty child. And now Bill has to try and pee with an erection before he gets any more attention. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Obviously, Bill isn't going to take this sitting down (hahaha get it? sitting down? he wants to pee standing up? anyone? *crickets* nope? ok) lol
Date: 12/02/12 01:15 pm Title: The Time Bill Was Put In Time Out
me encanta!
Author's Response: Me alegro mucho! :D
Date: 11/26/12 12:17 am Title: The Time Bill Came In Die Nacht
Oh, SPCF, you spoil me. Not just one, but two scenes of Bill on stage with a buttplug and in a diaper? I...I don't know how to thank you... Love how you made the scenes awkward, uncomfortable, embarrassing, and oh so hot! Bill being overwhelmed by what was going on in his ass, to the point that basically thousands of people could tell what was going on, added a wonderful, humiliatingly smutty touch. And Tom's jealousy that the orgasms belonged to Dave, not to him (nice!)...and therefore he couldn't enjoy them - hopefully he'll get over that with a little bit of private time with Bill. Or Bill and Dave. Excellent writing, as usual!
Author's Response: It's the holiday season, you deserve to be spoiled. And let's face it, I couldn't help myself. We just had to fire up little Tomi and make him jealous and what better way to make your twin jealous than cumming into a diaper that a [creepy] old man put you in? I'm glad you can appreciate the awkward/uncomfortable/embarrassing aspect to my writing and still find it hot. Most people fail to see the beauty behind the awkward. Honestly, Tom's jealousy over the orgasm just came to me as I was writing it (which usually doesn't happen) so I'm happy people liked that small point. I'm contemplating whether or not Tom needs some one-on-one time with Bill before he jumps into the next activities I have planned for him... or if he should just jump the gun and throw himself at it full force. I'd love to hear your thoughts.