Date: 10/06/14 11:51 pm Title: Plans
Oh fuck!!! If I were a guy I'd have a serious boner right now. I'm really glad I'm not because my sister is a few feet away from me and that would be awkward as hell. Not that I'm already not as awkward as hell. Ok, I'm just gonna say this and shut up. I love your story!!!!
Date: 09/21/12 07:01 am Title: Plans
aw it was cute :)
Author's Response: THankss!
Date: 09/20/12 06:08 am Title: Plans
this was a good story!
Author's Response: Thanks, doll!
Date: 08/24/12 02:10 pm Title: Plans
I knew Bill would model for Tom one day and yes, he had to. I'm sure Tom ended up with a nice scetch and... eventually something even nicer.
This was a nice story. :)
Author's Response: Of course he would, he HAD to ;3 And I'm sure a nice sketch isn't all he ended up with... x3 Haha. Thanks!
Date: 08/23/12 04:25 pm Title: Plans
Oh, I loved this ending. It tied the whole story up so well. I'm just wondering exactly how much drawing Tom will actually get done before he pounces on his twin. Or will Bill jump Tom first? Guess that will have to stay in my imagination.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :3 And I doubt he'll get much drawn ;) In my imagination, that scenario is quite sexy. xD
Date: 08/23/12 03:59 pm Title: Plans
Yeah... Sweet and hot - loved it! :D
Author's Response: Haha, thanks!! :DD
Date: 08/22/12 10:47 pm Title: Plans
God. That was awesome.
I absolutely looooooved the description of the room, it sounded so beautiful!
And the last line is just...perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you, so much. <3 That's like, all I can say. Thank you <3
Date: 08/22/12 08:06 pm Title: Plans
Loved it :) isn't it weird that now Bill is the blond twin and Tom is the brunette? Man I was reading and I was constantly thinking about that!
Author's Response: Thanks(: And I know! I think about that a lot. Bill used to be the dark-haired twin, and Tom the blondie :3
Date: 08/21/12 03:59 pm Title: Discovery
I know, I know...I didn't review after each chapter but I couldn't stop reading. I really enjoyed this little twin romp. The smut was just perfect and I can soooo see Bill lying on the bed waiting for his Tomi to draw him. I'd love to see what Tom actually drew and if he could with Bill looking like that. lol Loved it. :)
Author's Response: Since I freaking love you so much, I'll let it slide ;D Thank you, so much. I'd love to see the drawings, too! x3 Though I seriously doubt he could concentrate very well.. (: If you'd like to see some drawings that inspired the idea for this story, and my attempt at some drawings (xD), email me or add me on Facebook. I'll happily share the twincest ;)
Date: 08/21/12 09:26 am Title: Plans
Loved this story, even if it was short :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading(: So glad you liked it!!
Date: 08/21/12 09:13 am Title: Want
Good chapter and don't worry about the lenght, it takes me about 4 days just to write 500 word correctly...yeah im really bad at writing, good thing im not an author ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I totally feel you on the writing thing. I have my Tomi read EVERY chapter of anything I post before posting it. If it doesn't get her approval (though it always does, because she thinks I'm amazing for some reason xD), it gets deleted. I'm sure you're a great author! If you ever need anyone to look over your work (proof-reading, advice, etc.), just contact me! :)
Date: 08/21/12 09:01 am Title: Discovery
I would love to see those drawings hihihi :P
Author's Response: Email me or add me on Facebook, and I'll send you some of the drawings that gave me the idea to write the story in the first place, along with some drawings I did as I wrote? :3 Thanks!
Date: 08/21/12 04:53 am Title: Plans
omfg i loooooove it dwemdkewf4.
Author's Response: Thankssss!! :DD <3
Date: 08/21/12 03:58 am Title: Plans
This was great, really good. I've been dieing for a good twincest fic for so long now and this was exactly what I wanted. Classic yummy-ness, lol. Thank you!! :) Great plot idea, and I love the way you narrate it. I think you pick your scenes and what to focus on really well, and you create a really vivid picture with your words. You're a great writer from what I can tell so far, so I hope you'll write more twincest like this, cuz I will definitely read it! :)
Author's Response: Ahhhhhh. Your review made my night <3 I always love reading comments before I go to bed, because they put me in such a good mood c: I wish I could like, hug you (and all my other readers, of course) through my laptop xD You're welcome!! Though I should be the one thanking you(: I definitely plan to write more twincest like this, and maybe some other categories <3
Date: 08/21/12 01:14 am Title: Plans
What a great way to end the story. I could have gone for a little more angst in the other chapters, but fluffy is nice too. I enjoyed this.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And yeah, I know the other chapters were lacking angst xPP I'm working on that in my other stories ^__^
Date: 08/21/12 01:12 am Title: Plans
Erotic and hot!
Author's Response: That's what I was going for ;3 Thanks for the read and review! Glad you liked it (:
Date: 08/12/12 02:28 am Title: Discovery
Hey, I don't know how many readers actually read other people's reviews, but... IF you are reading this, I want to apologize for the wait on the final chapter. I planned/am planning on doing one final chapter, sort of an epilogue, including another sketchbook. But these last few weeks have been BUSY (I know, lame excuse) and school starts in a week. I'm writing some of it right now, but I'm dead beat and slow on ideas so I'm HOPING it'll be up sometime this week. ANDDDD since I've been a bad author and left you guys hanging, I'm also working on a few other stories ;D
Date: 07/29/12 05:29 pm Title: Caught
Wow, that was ... *speechless* ;D I like your Bill: hot but in a strange way innocent (at least in my opinion ;D)
Author's Response: Thanks, doll!! :D I always write Bill with some innocence in mind, even if it's smutty xD I just grew up (literally) with the innocent-looking Bill, so he'll always have a little left in my mind. BUT. I'm going to try my hand at a bit of reversal in my next story, where Tom is the innocent one ;D (That's my shameless hint for you to read it when it gets up xDD)
Date: 07/28/12 09:29 am Title: Caught
The way you made twins so awkward, blushing and nervous was so cute. I don't think it was rushed, though I could have read a bit longer of the actual sex part. It is extremely difficult to slide from getting caught to confession and eventually to sex, because hey, how on earth you confess something loike that to your br4other? It is really hard to write right, but I think you did it nicely. It was cute. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! :3 And the shortness of the sex part was what I was referring to as rushed. I reread it after I wrote it, and was like "That's only a paragraph. wtf." I think for my next stories I'll have a better idea of how much detail and things I want to get into, so they should be longer ^_^ Thanks again (:
Date: 07/23/12 01:29 am Title: Caught
I vote for another sketch book and chapter!!
I love this!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! <3 Anddddd.. I think I'm doing another sketchbook c;