Date: 09/14/12 06:46 pm Title: The end
Damn you... Damn, damn, damn... You do know that I'm bawling my eyes out right now and I can't stop? My heart is brokern in million pieces and I'm an emotional mess. I should have known better not to read this fic at night.
Yet I'm glad I did. I did it all and my god, woman, you're so good! This was so, so, so, so good and I'm not saying because I want to say nice things,but because only an amazing fic can make me a human ruin crying uncontrollably.
I can't explain, but there was so much sadness, so much, hope, so much beauty and sp much love in this. All the elements. And the diffcult relationship between Tom and Jörg and the desperate asking for forgiveness. Most of all forgiveness. This hit me hard, punched me to the guts.
My darling, my sweetheart... I just want to squeeze my Tom, sweetheart. Haha, you made me really upset, you know? And with all these known details of real life.
Thank you. I mean it. Thank you. I will getmyself undeer the control, but tbh, I'm not sure how well I'll sleep tonight. This was a masterpiece!
Author's Response: I won't say I'm sorry for making you cry, as this really are a subject that hopfully make you cry. But I'm so glad you finally did, you know how much this fic mean to me, or at least I think you do? I'm glad that the love and the hope also shines through, and yes, I think so to, that forgivness is really what this story is all about, a forgivness then it really are too leat, neverless just as, or even more, important. rnThank you so much for both reading,and for reviwing, your words meant a lot to me!
Date: 07/21/12 07:48 pm Title: one
Just wanting to tell you that I will be reading this as dsoon as I get from from this stranded island I'm currently at. :)
I will always read your fics - even if I'm a bit late.
Author's Response: Naw, you are really sweet, you know that right? I'm looking forward to that, and hope you have a really good time!
Date: 07/20/12 04:44 pm Title: The end
Just fucking sensational and I cry again when I read it. It's ...entirely painful and liberating and I only wish that Tom could get this closure with his dad without Bill having to die. It's so hard to read it, so hard to breathe. Just amazing.
Author's Response: Naw, don't cry! (Okay, I cried when I wrot this, but that's me) and thank you, I'm glad you took your time and reread this and review, you know how much that means to me <3
Date: 07/19/12 09:36 am Title: one
If you have dyslexia and still write like this - hands down to you. Definitely. I can never write something like this.. This is a story that needs to be read carefully to understand and appreciate (so you can't skim through it, maybe that's why someone said she don't know what's going on). This is a good story that forces you to calm down and pay attention - and I really like it. Poor Bill, he's just gone, that fast...without untying the knot. Hmm, I wonder what would happen if Tom said no then. Probably after a lot of fighting everything would be different.
- Aww, poor Mum with teenagers. They will eventually come around (I know i do ;~))
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! And I'm glad you "read it like I wrote it", it is a slow story, not much that happens, even if there are a lot that is told in it, or at least I hope so. And yes, I guess that is how life is, full of "if:s" that we never will know if they had changed anything or not. rnrnThanks, I know they will, and they probably think I'm a paint in there *** but I guess that is the way it is :)
Date: 07/18/12 10:55 pm Title: The end
Man... Now this last chapter is excellent. A real killer. That. Really really love the last lines.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it, I guess the last chapter cleared some things up from the first three. And thanks, it's good to hear you read it as I tried to writ it, it's sometimes hard to know how things comes out in English.
Date: 07/18/12 04:54 pm Title: Three
Nu har jag äntligen börjat läsa denna. Ser fram emot det sista kapitlet.
En väldigt sorglig fic, och tyvärr kan man tänka sig att allt du skriver skulle kunna vara sant. Gillar hur du väver in rena fakta och försöker ligga så nära den sanning vi vet om som möjligt.
Author's Response: Ah, vad kul, har postat den sista delen nu. Och ja, inte det mest upplytande kanske. Bra att den känns så, tror du kommer känna igen en del annat i sista delen,finns en del som fått mig att fundera lite, som du vet :)
Date: 07/16/12 09:56 pm Title: one
I like the story, a few spelling problems but I like how you angst it. Ever since the whole Jorg thing comes out - everyone is talking about how bad Jorg is but he's just a father that have been pushed too far. I hope one day the twins and Jorg could work things out - and I hope it didn't play out like the fic did. Painfully realistic:-C Can't wait!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, and even happier that you let me know that. I have dyslexia, so you imagien how bad it could have been ;) I totaly agree with you, I really do hope they work it out, and I think the twins behavior (in real life) is quite typical for teenager trying to get thir parents attention. Now, they are older, and got more money than most, but I'm pretty sure the feelings are the same. (I got children in the age 14-17 at home, and I'm pretty sure they had tried to sue me if they could at times, now the slam doors and tells me that they hates me when all they really needs is a hug, it's not easy to grow up, or see your children grow up.)
Date: 07/14/12 12:33 pm Title: one
Denne likte jeg virkelig! Fortsett!
Author's Response: Tack! Det kommer jag, du vet ikke hur glad din kommentar gjorde mig :)
Date: 07/12/12 12:27 pm Title: one
The grammar is a bit bad and to be honest I don't really know what's going on like I should. It was okay, though.
6/10
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