Date: 09/27/13 03:28 pm Title: “Bill I never noticed—”
You did a very good job, generally. I am an officer at IDF (Israel Defense Force, or just the Israeli army) and I know a lot about POW, and I am really surprised of how well you have described the longing and wishing and believing of a soldier coming back. You may have forgot about a major thing, which is how for about 3 years anis saw a few very specific people and it's very hard for a person to deal with things like that just after a month, but really, you had it better than I have expected. The anis-maria thing really touches my heart since I experience something close (I absolutely hate my sister in law and my brother will always give in to her), so it was nice reading it. All in all, I had a great time reading this story amd usually I'm a very critical person.
Seriously, I find it hard to read stories written by wroters who find it hard to use a comma correctly.
Thanks for the story :)
Date: 12/14/12 10:45 pm Title: “You look handsome my little war hero.”
so sweet
Date: 10/23/12 08:35 pm Title: "...If you can’t be nice to him you can’t see the kids again. I mean it mom, stop it.”
i love this chapter
Date: 10/22/12 01:39 am Title: “Bill I never noticed—”
Awesome! Bill gets to do something for himself after losing his identity. I know the feeling.
I really loved this story, thanks for sharing!
Date: 10/21/12 09:54 pm Title: “Bill I never noticed—”
so it's done?
nice. i like it cos it's happy end and there is still go one but not concretely to write, yet...still is happy end :)
Date: 10/21/12 09:06 am Title: “Bill I never noticed—”
awesome, i just want them to be together
Date: 10/21/12 06:05 am Title: “Bill I never noticed—”
omg i'm sooooo happy for Bill! :')
Date: 09/30/12 03:10 am Title: “Do you really think it’s cute?”
omgomgomgomg i loooooove it!
Date: 09/29/12 11:48 pm Title: “Do you really think it’s cute?”
Ahh, progress...I love it! Thanks for the update!
Date: 09/29/12 09:20 pm Title: “Do you really think it’s cute?”
Oh, Chuck E. Cheese. Fondest memories of childhood...
I really hope Bill and Bushido don't divorce; I hope they can work through everything. Or, at least get the Maria issues under control.
Date: 09/27/12 12:27 am Title: “Maria you seemed to be displacing your anger for Anis.”
Oh Maria...so confused LOL
Ready for more :)
Date: 09/27/12 12:24 am Title: “No… you love me right?”
I cant wait for the next session!
Date: 09/27/12 12:21 am Title: “Anis, how do you feel?”
And so it begins...I hope nothing is held back in these counciling sessions. I would like to see Anis's mom put in her place...
Date: 09/27/12 12:15 am Title: “Dad where’s daddy. He’s not in the house… did he leave last night?..."
Just catching due to family matters.
This chapter was really sad for me. I hope they can make things work and find what they both need and want.
Date: 09/26/12 05:54 pm Title: “Maria you seemed to be displacing your anger for Anis.”
That was pretty good but his mom still needs to fall in a fire-y pit of spikes and terror.
Date: 09/26/12 05:50 pm Title: “No… you love me right?”
I LOVVVEEEDDD IT :D
Date: 09/26/12 04:52 pm Title: “Maria you seemed to be displacing your anger for Anis.”
Nice body and straight XD. LMAO that made me laugh I don't know why.
Date: 09/26/12 02:36 pm Title: “Maria you seemed to be displacing your anger for Anis.”
Maria got owned, WOOP WOOP!!
And aaw, love the chapter as usual! < 3
Date: 09/18/12 06:09 pm Title: “No… you love me right?”
Good chapter, hope Anis's mom will calm down
And I understand you, I started college too and its horrible X( too much work.
Date: 09/18/12 10:27 am Title: “No… you love me right?”
Perfect chapter! I wonder how it'll go in the sessions w/ Bushido's mother D: