Date: 07/12/12 03:21 pm Title: he was in love with his duty and chose to leave
Cute kids you picked btw hahaha! In real life Simone doesn't have blue eyes, does she? o_O and long chapters? Yes!!!
Author's Response:
no she has the twins, for this story she does though :)
Date: 07/11/12 07:27 pm Title: he was in love with his duty and chose to leave
Aww thank you for sharing this story, what a nice chapter a little sad when Bill cried, it made me remember the first time I saw my brother, he is in the military..
Date: 07/11/12 07:11 pm Title: he was in love with his duty and chose to leave
Poor Bill, i feel so bad for him... He waited 3 years for Bushido without knowing nothing bout him :((
Don't make him suffer more, please *-*
x)
Kisses :*
Author's Response:
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rnkiss to you ;)
rnyea i feel sad for him too, he's a good kid
Date: 07/11/12 08:59 am Title: he was in love with his duty and chose to leave
Loved this chapter so much!! It brought me to tears with the image in my head. Amazing job!! and thank you for the thanks :)
Author's Response:
thank you for reviewing :)
Date: 07/09/12 08:56 pm Title: “Dad’s coming home?” Andrew asked.
Own *-* I loved it ^^
It was so sweet :D
well, u said that u don't like writing 1st chapters, i don't like to leave reviews on the 1st chapter cause i never know what to say >-<
but any way, a really liked this one and i hope to see another soon ^^
Kisses :*
Date: 07/08/12 08:29 pm Title: “Dad’s coming home?” Andrew asked.
It was pretty good.
But you're really confusing with the she's and he's. I kind of got lost and just tuned out the kids a bit.
10/10
*****
Date: 07/08/12 12:08 pm Title: “Dad’s coming home?” Andrew asked.
Oh this is beautiful!! Can't wait :D
Date: 07/08/12 10:03 am Title: “Dad’s coming home?” Andrew asked.
I'm hooked! Can't wait for more!
Date: 07/08/12 05:36 am Title: “Dad’s coming home?” Andrew asked.
I can already tell this is going to be an amazing story! :)
Date: 07/08/12 05:35 am Title: “Dad’s coming home?” Andrew asked.
I can already tell this is going to be an amazing story! :)
Date: 07/08/12 01:45 am Title: “Dad’s coming home?” Andrew asked.
This is an awesome first chapter! I'm already hooked! =)
Date: 07/07/12 07:11 pm Title: “Dad’s coming home?” Andrew asked.
Normally I don't prefer this pairing, but I love this chapter. I am definitely going to keep reading this one :)
Date: 07/07/12 03:40 pm Title: “Dad’s coming home?” Andrew asked.
My favorite pairing!!! This has such great potential. Thanks so much.
Author's Response:
thanks i hope i don't let you down
Date: 07/07/12 01:57 pm Title: “Dad’s coming home?” Andrew asked.
Definitely excited to read more and see where this goes :)
Author's Response:
thank you sooo mcuh :)
Date: 07/07/12 01:22 pm Title: “Dad’s coming home?” Andrew asked.
Hey thanks, i want to know more, best pairing ever!
Author's Response:
thanks, i didn't expect such quick feedback