Date: 07/15/12 11:41 am Title: "We Don't Need to Act!"
wow , even though she is suppose to marry Bill, seems that she is getting along better with Tom . maybe she will end up marrying Tom instead . please upodate soon , can`t wait for more .
Author's Response: canadagirl... hehe! we'll never know... anyways,, thank you very much!!! i will definitely update as soon as i can.. :D
Date: 07/15/12 09:24 am Title: "Ma Io Lo Amo!!!" ("But I Love Him!!!")
edi ikaw na may 300 reads!
Author's Response: dailytokiohotel!!! hahaha!!! xD eh kmusta nman ang 2020 readsssSS sa foolish dates?? xD haha!!
Date: 07/15/12 07:12 am Title: "JUST STOP TALKING! WILL YOU?!"
please update as soon as possible....can't wait!
Author's Response: sashikibuta.. hehehe!! i will definitely update as soon as i can! Thank you for reading arranged topsy turvy!! i really appreciate it! <3 <3
Date: 07/15/12 06:40 am Title: "You'll See."
i'm thrilled to know the story of lia...so curious...:))
Date: 07/14/12 12:31 pm Title: "JUST STOP TALKING! WILL YOU?!"
it was so nice that she was able to see her dad again , place also sounds so nice .Bill should talking nicer to her , she didn`t arrange this arrangement . hope they can talk reasonable and be nice to each other . can`t wait for u to update , please soon .
Author's Response: canadagirl! thank you very much!!! <3
Date: 07/11/12 01:49 pm Title: "You'll See."
wat does Bill have up his sleeve , can`t wait to find out . please update soon .
Author's Response: hello canadagirl! Hehe! Thank you for reading ATT (Arranged Topsy Turvy)!!! I will do my very best to update as soon as I can!!! <3 Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/11/12 01:43 pm Title: "I Saw Her Before. I Think I Saw Her Before."
Biull finally see a pic of her , niiiiice.
Date: 07/11/12 01:37 pm Title: "I Can't. I Can't."
it was nice that Simone talked to her . good story can`t wait to read on .
Date: 07/11/12 01:31 pm Title: "Marriage Is Not Yet In the List of My Vocabulary."
well we knew that Bill won`t be happy about this setup . wats funny is u turned this arround , usually we think of Tom being the playboy , one night stands guy . can`t wait to see wats next .
Date: 07/11/12 06:54 am Title: "Ma Io Lo Amo!!!" ("But I Love Him!!!")
dahil bagsak tayo sa math.... or mababa rather or whatever.. magupdate na lang tayo hahaah
Date: 07/10/12 09:04 am Title: "Marriage Is Not Yet In the List of My Vocabulary."
mydear, i can say that... it's.. very nice! :""""> promise! :D you dont look like a first-timer in writing a story. :D
Date: 07/10/12 09:01 am Title: "Ma Io Lo Amo!!!" ("But I Love Him!!!")
My dear!!!! :)))))
I bet you know me! :))
I love it! Promise! I really do!:"") Know what mydear? It took me a hard time making an acc. and searching your story. XD But, it's worth it. :)))
Date: 07/08/12 04:17 pm Title: "You'll See."
Oh wow! This is getting really exciting. I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Now I'm really curious about what Bill's gonna do! I hope you can update pretty soon :)
Date: 07/08/12 04:05 pm Title: "I Saw Her Before. I Think I Saw Her Before."
Amazing chapter! I see that you've included more details; it gives a good flow of balanced amounts of dialogue and detail.
I have just one more suggestion for you: make sure that you stay in the same tenses. You have a mixture of both past and present tense in your story. Try to pick one and stick with that; I know it may seem hard but you'll get the grip of it once you start it. Also, if you don't know which tense to write in, I recommend the past tense; it's much more easier to write compared to present.
Other than that, beautiful story :) I can't get enough of it. I hope that you can update pretty soon.
Author's Response: 9skittleXandXstars6... thank you for the suggestion once again! :D I'm totally happy that someone's correcting/suggesting! Hehe! Actually, it's my very first time to write a story, so I totally appreciate that you're being a part of improving my skills... <3 :D I hope you continue to give reviews about the story. Thank you!
Date: 07/07/12 10:52 am Title: "I Saw Her Before. I Think I Saw Her Before."
can't wait for the next chapter...suspense,mystery and romance is in the air.
Date: 07/07/12 09:28 am Title: "Ma Io Lo Amo!!!" ("But I Love Him!!!")
exciting!i'll be reading the next chapter...good start tokiohotelrockss.
Date: 07/07/12 01:23 am Title: "I Can't. I Can't."
bruha ka chin! ang bilis mo mag-update!
Date: 07/05/12 07:42 pm Title: "I Can't. I Can't."
Great chapter once again! Loved it :) just one quick suggestion: try to make the chapters longer by giving more details. It seems like your chapters consist of too much dialogue. A few details won't do any harm :) just a suggestion. Other than that, you know that I love this story :D
Author's Response: 9skittlesXandXstars6.. thank you very much for the suggestion you gave me! I totally appreciate it because I know that in this way, I could improve my writing.. Once again, thank you for reading my story! :D <3
Date: 07/04/12 04:15 pm Title: "Marriage Is Not Yet In the List of My Vocabulary."
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Hi angelbaby2!!! Thank you very much for reading ATT (Arranged Topsy Turvy)!!! I will really do my best to update fast for you guys!! HEHE! <3
Date: 07/04/12 04:10 pm Title: "Ma Io Lo Amo!!!" ("But I Love Him!!!")
Loved it!